Harry Potter: The Unorthodox Dursley

Super pretty! I've read enough fanfics praising Snape's purge of the White Snake Yard, but this one has no such problem at all and fits the original work very well. Harry is not an idiot and Snape is not a arrogant, tolerant and honest person. Harry's poisonous tongue and Snape's double standards are both real. I originally thought the heroine was more quiet, but she is actually very lively and even a bit aggressive. She gets along with the original characters very naturally and is not artificial at all. (Speaking of which, my OC is also Harry's cousin. I was worried about the setting, but I feel that the author handles the plot much better than me.) She handles the conflict between the Dursleys and Harry very well. She loves her family very much and helps Harry as much as possible.

It's so well written... As an overseas student, I especially resist seeing scenes where flower growers are repeatedly depicted in fan fiction to shock foreigners because it's too embarrassing [crying] [face covering] (only personal experience), but the author portrays "the heroine is Chinese" in the most natural way, which also reflects her unique character. She is very warm and stable at the core.

I don't mean to say that the negative review is wrong, I just want to summarize it for new readers. The main reasons for the current two- and three-star ratings are as follows: the pace is slow, the heroine is too perfect, and she is too young. Out of curiosity, I went in and took a look, and found that their standards were really high, and there were only a handful of books that I could read. I felt a little sorry for those authors. It's up to you to judge whether these evaluations have any reference value. I can't judge anyway. Maybe it's because I've never eaten dragon meat, and I don't know what kind of HP fan fiction can be written, but for an ordinary reader like me, the plot, details, and characters of this book are already very sophisticated. Settings that are relatively common in fan fiction, such as "Pure-blooded Noble Malfoy", "Elegant and Noble Slytherin", and "Snape the Cellar Snake King", may not appear in this book. If you prefer this style, you may need to adjust your expectations first. To be honest, the lightning protection in the first chapter has been done quite clearly. This book is indeed not a refreshing one. It spends a lot of space on the characters' psychology, perspective and relationship changes. If you like the rhythm of "three chapters of slap in the face and five chapters of counterattack", you may not find it suitable. Malfoy's unique unbeatable energy in the original work has been restored to the point, as if he came directly from the book. I have read some CP stories about Muggle-born heroines and Malfoy before. The more common ones are to downplay the bloodline discrimination as much as possible, or to put it down lightly. But this book does not do this, but carefully retains this point. So when you watch them break up, you will really feel both painful and happy😋. Regarding the evaluation of "young writing style", everyone may have different standards. I read some European and American children's literature when I was a child, but I think it is quite a sign of skill that the author can retain the style of children's literature in the previous works when writing HP fan fiction. This way of writing is actually difficult to grasp, and it is a pity to call it "young". Of course, if you are not good at it, you may not feel it. Daisy is indeed a very good little girl, but her kindness is not fake, but very human. It reminds me of the kind of good friends I met when I was in school. Maybe readers who like good-guy protagonists will resonate more with her. I personally like this kind of heroine. I don't understand why a "perfect good guy" can become a highlight. Maybe it's because my taste is more traditional. By the way, this book is quite female-friendly. In addition to the original characters, most of the self-created supporting characters are women with positive images. I have read another HP heartthrob fanfic before, which used the word "cn show" for Qiu Zhang's Quidditch debut, which left me speechless😅. In contrast, this book has no similar problems at all. If you care about female friendliness, you can read it with confidence. I also missed one thing. I even opened a special chapter with some jokes. I will also interact and answer questions in the comment area from time to time. There will also be analysis about the original work every few chapters, so there is basically no need to worry about OOC. That's it for the moment. In short, if you like the original work, this book is very, very suitable for you🥰. If I have to talk about shortcomings, it is probably that the update is relatively slow. However, I can understand that slow work leads to careful work, and since I am not in good health and have work to do, it is indeed a bit hard to catch up. 😭

The teacher's writing is very cute! I finally came across a few articles that don't praise Snake Yard. Many articles have to be vague and whitewashed even if they don't praise Snake Yard. I also read the teacher's character analysis in some chapters, and I can see that there are serious analyzes from the original work and character biographies.

The writing is very good, and it can be seen that the author is very close to the original work. With the author's supplements, I learned more about the original work. Because I only watched the movie version. Some details are actually understood from the common settings of fan fiction. What the heroine does is normal. She will help Harry live a better life with the Dursleys within reasonable limits. It is simply a ray of warmth in winter. It was a natural progression for Harry to like the heroine. And the heroine will not ignore the feelings of her relatives because she helps Harry, because her relatives also love her, but no one is perfect. Really well written. Not OOC at all. Tasty. I get along well with Gemini. [Full]

It's good-looking, and the introduction is very attractive to me. Muggles have no obligation to tolerate pure-bloodism. The part where the heroine was worried about traveling through time in a fan novel was so funny that she shot a lot of them [laughing and crying] The heroine helped Harry pass the North Point Grammar School and it really warmed my heart. Harry's value is not only in the wizarding world, he deserves a bright future no matter where he is. But maybe because I don't like Draco personally, he's so arrogant and weird, the heroine always feels like she's coaxing a child when she's with Draco, and she's so tired that she can't move.

A heroine like an angel, a story like a fairy tale. Textual research enthusiasts are invited to join! Lovers of excellent writing are invited to join! The proportion of daily stories, heart-warming stories, delicate emotions, and stories about people getting along with each other is much higher than the main plot of the original work. In fact, I usually don't review books so early. I usually like to write book reviews when the novel has reached about 200 chapters, so that I can write more comprehensively. However, the author seems to want to be encouraged, and Daisy Little Angel is really, really good, so I am willing to write it earlier. The author is a very rigorous textual researcher. He has been digging out various details of the original work to conduct an objective analysis of each character, in order to ensure that all characters are not OOC. It is really very friendly to serious readers. Moreover, the author's writing style is very good. The whole article has a very gentle fairy tale style, like the prose he loved to write when he was a student. It has a lot of detailed descriptions and emotional portrayals, which is very suitable for reading sentence by sentence. The little angel Daisy is my favorite among the Dursley stories I have read. Just as written in the previous chapters, Daisy should be a princess who escaped from the fairy tale world. She is gentle, kind, beautiful, and occasionally playful and stubborn. It is really rare to see such angelic heroines nowadays. Except for the part with Draco that I didn't particularly like, all the other behaviors and character traits can be said to be perfect. Really, only in novels can such a perfect girl appear. Daisy is like a princess. She always sees everyone's thoughts so delicately, loves her family and friends, but never forgets herself. She learns her favorite musical instruments and sings her own songs. She doesn't care about the wizarding world's discrimination against Muggles. She wears her favorite dresses and dances her own ballet. She even takes Hogwarts courses during school and studies Muggle courses on her own during holidays because she wants to go to a Muggle university after graduation. She is a free, beautiful, loving soul. This article is written in the first person. It is also the first time I have read the first person, but it is not surprising, and the author often switches perspectives. It will not only be the first person of Daisy, but also the perspectives of other characters. Daisy herself has a gentle character, so in the clips from Daisy's perspective, the article will appear gentle and delicate. When the perspective is switched to Harry, the article becomes a pure humorous comment, which is particularly interesting. Switching to other people's perspectives will also become lively. But don't worry about whether Daisy has no other characteristics besides gentleness. I need to explain here, because I read a lot of Japanese comics, so when I say the word "gentleness", it may be closer to the meaning of "Asashi" in Japanese. It means that Daisy is very attentive to other people's emotions and very kind. This does not mean that she is a virtuous girl without edges. Daisy got into several fights in the text and was caught violating school rules several times. However, she has a very gentle background, is gentle to her friends, is very good at life, and has a sense of delicacy like a bodhi leaf, so I think she is "gentle". This kind of naughty and stubborn tenderness is common in various princess fairy tales, so I say Daisy is a "princess". As for other characters, the author's research and polishing of the original work are very effective. Every character is not OOC. Especially, I like Harry very much. I give Harry a vote here. (Ps. Said is also good)

It's very beautiful, the writing style is just like the original work, and it will leave you silent for a while. None of the characters are OOC. The author is very particular and has studied the original works carefully. He also has a certain awareness and can write words such as " jealous" and "mom and dad". I see that there is only one place where the widowed variant "I'm going" has appeared. The other places use words very comfortably [Adoration] Who would have thought that this is the author's first time writing a novel. The writing and plot are very beautiful. The future is promising, but don't stop updating [Adoration] [Adour] [Adoration]

Looking at it now, this can be said to be the most comfortable fanfic I have read in recent years. The cold and humorous writing style is very original, and the author's creation of the original heroine is also very interesting. I was originally not interested in this kind of novel with a heart-throb theme, but this one is really very good, and I couldn't help but want to read it. I kept trying to figure it out while I was reading. The author's words are great, and he also has his own thoughts on the original work. It is a very good article! It's just that it's very painful to follow the series. . I want to see the end as soon as I open my eyes😌 It's so painful to follow the serial 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the serial 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the series 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the serial 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the serial 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the series 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the serial 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the serial 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the series 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the serial 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the serial 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the series 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️

It's really well written🥺 It's the closest to the original novel in HP I've read recently, it's very great... I haven't seen such a right Harry in a fanfic for a long time, I'm so moved that I want to cry, it's such a pure and delicious poisonous tongue, I'm eating it The setting of Daisy is actually very interesting. On the one hand, Daisy has lived to be 15 years old in her last life. In addition, in this life, she actually has a tolerant mentality towards the people around her, which makes her behave like an elder sister (). But it is also because she only lived 15 years old in her previous life, so in fact, she is still a little girl who will reveal her fresh moments after coming to Hogwarts, which is very charming... The portrayal of Slytherin and Draco Snape is also very normal. God knows how touching it is... Anyway, I am very, very lucky to read this book.