After Tearing My Scumbag Dad Apart, I Joined My Mom at a Stall and Made a Fortune

The description of food is very delicious, and the subject matter is also my favorite mother-daughter uncensored novel. I just hope that there will be more female characters. There are too many men. There will always be high-ranking men slapping the female protagonist in the face and calling her a girl at every turn. The female protagonist is a bit disgusted after reading too many female protagonists. Well, I just hope that since the author writes about female protagonists, he will write less about men, especially the highlights.

There is no cp between mother and daughter in the copywriting, and there is also a desire to create a world for women, but so far, many of the important characters who solve problems for the heroine or promote the plot are men. I don't know if there will be improvements in the future, so I will save it for now, hoping that the copywriting is not a trick to kill people. There was no change at all later on. It was all the superior men who came out to help the heroine slap her face, and even highlighted the men to charm them. Sure enough, they were deceived by the copywriter [laughing awkwardly] and ate a big lump again.

OMG there are only five comments, it's really cool! Five ⭐ recommendations! First of all, it's good that the heroine's appearance is not always emphasized. The author places great emphasis on shaping her character. She is tough, well-organized and not angry. She is defensive to strangers and will not show off everything. She is also very good at troubleshooting and will build a good relationship before using it. Mom is not the kind of tool person she writes about. You can intuitively feel that she is a person with subjectivity in this story, and she continues to grow up slowly after leaving her marriage. The writing is also very good, and it is very comfortable to read. It is systematic but not boring. It requires the heroine to work hard, but it is not very difficult. After all, life is already very hard, and reading novels just needs to be refreshing. Overall, it's pretty good, but there is one thing I don't like. It seems that in that section there was a customer who called the hostess "Mom, Boss Lady", but the stall is run by the hostess and her mother together. I understand that it may be because she is a woman that she calls her that, but it does look uncomfortable, so it would be better to call her "Boss".

The writing is very good in all aspects. I hope the author will add more positive female characters in the follow-up. Because the introduction mentions mutual aid, I came in because of this. I hope the matter of dealing with the scumbag father can be resolved as soon as possible to avoid indecision in the subsequent plot. The latest chapter, 7 stars directly, why are you being kidnapped by morality when others are forcing you to death? Funny, a person with a system is in a disadvantaged position every day and always cooperates with a strong man. Such a heroine might as well go home and plant sweet potatoes.

It's beautiful, and the writing tends to be detailed and vicissitudes of life. There is a feeling of being beaten by life. The male-to-female ratio is 73, and the target group is not someone like me who likes to watch female-centered and multi-female people. I am willing to give this writing five stars, and deduct one star because the male-to-female ratio reaches 73 when women are not labeled. I gave up. It got worse later on. I felt like I was watching a male video.

As someone who has read novels for many, many years and recently had heavy conversations with AI, the whole story gave me a very tired and out of breath feeling. It's not about the heroine's behavior, but the writing and rhythm. It doesn't look like it's completely handwritten, but it should be mixed with traces of AI, and even It is not a more sophisticated AI that specializes in writing novels, but a commonly used free AI like Doubao. The first suspicion is that the heroine's behavior and ideological changes were not portrayed in the early stage. If the character design was such a simple one from the beginning, the mother would not have suffered for such a long time. It was very blunt. Furthermore, everyone's obsession with this rice in the middle is completely unlike human understanding, because no matter how delicious the food is, normal people will not order the same thing for a long time. Even the article said that although the recipes change once a week, the ones that come back and forth are still braised rice. As a normal rice. The sodium content is definitely over the standard, and problems will still occur if you eat it for a long time. The understanding of this part is very much like AI, and the second is that the large number of parallel sentences and wonderful writing techniques are very, very, very like AI. (For example, in the original text: no explanation, no statement, no quarrel/no account period, no IOU, no repayment next month, etc., It appears many times. People who are familiar with AI will find that this is a very common writing habit.) Another point is that the ex-husband has always disliked the fact that the heroine's mother smells like braised food, and he uses the same words to describe it back and forth. Many times, more than 6 times in my impression. I think this is very much like the emphasis on AI, which is very human-machine. The last part that I don't quite understand is that the heroine overemphasizes taking down the physical store as a war. It's very strange, and it looks like an expansion of AI after the author described the situation in a few sentences. Also, the author really likes to have heroines and other characters. The character records things by taking notes, or a running account of memos, but it would be fine if the heroine was the only one, but it would be very strange if the catering consultant who appeared later was like this. Of course, these are just my personal suspicions. If the author typed it by hand, it may just be a matter of personal habits. I apologize here, and I will send you a 4-star review. See you in the next book.

A very nice food article. The braised meat and sour plum soup described are both delicious. The system is okay, it just completes tasks and gives recipes, etc., And it doesn't have a particularly strong sense of presence. The villain in it is also relatively smart, not the kind of villain who says "My conspiracy is easy to reveal, come and slap me in the face" written on his face. Watching the protagonist and her mother grow bigger and stronger step by step, and constantly unlock new food, is very healing. Moreover, the punishment of villains is straightforward and neat, without any sloppiness. At present, I can complete the sanction in about two or three chapters, which is very, very comfortable and the rhythm is very good. I look forward to more updates from the author [Blow Kiss], this book is really the best among the best in Persimmon.

Tied to Chapter 104. I have followed two books about routines and setting up food stalls, but abandoned them both because they were too long and I couldn't read them. This is the third book. It has the same AI flavor as Emergency Department, and the protagonist also has a robot-like character, but it is better than Emergency Department. I couldn't stand Emergency Department until Xiehe. It's too exaggerated. As for catering, although I think you can make a lot of money just by guarding the stall (I have seen it in real life), but the heroine is also okay if she is ambitious, but the monster hunting is the same as deliberately giving experience, her father and the old man are so stupid... I especially liked the bidding part, I felt nervous. If the flavor of Emergency Department drops below 60%, then this one is between 70-80% and you can continue to pursue it. Based on the scores of the novels I have read before, this one can maintain this level until the end. The number of chapters should not be too many, it should be 8.0-8.5

I watched it for women who don't have CPs and copywriters to help each other. First of all, I feel that the protagonist's character is relatively fixed and calm, which makes it boring to read. Second, there are too many male high-profile roles. Whether they are the ones who make things difficult or the ones who help the heroine slap the face, they are basically men. I don't know if there will be any changes later. The food is well written, and overall it's pretty good.

It's not easy to find a food story. The heroine's vision makes it even more difficult. The heroine has no CP, so it's even harder! And the most valuable thing is! Female friendly! ! ! The author can also hear what the readers are saying! 100 Points! Talking about the plot, it is my favorite mother-daughter story, and the proportion of food is also very suitable. I look forward to the follow-up dishes! There is a system, but the golden finger is not big, and the auxiliary effect is greater! I selfishly hope that there will be more solid female high-ranking roles in the future (it's just my own selfishness, I don't mean to give guidance), and it's totally ok to keep the current female-friendly attitude! The writing is also ok, I will continue to follow it! Chase every day! Author, please keep writing!