Hard Times: Six Devil Fruit Choices from the Start

People with fruit abilities in the Pili Puppet Show world obtain fruits through the system. The system needs to change the destiny to obtain it. The specification of destiny is not low, and it cannot be obtained by just killing a BOSS. The base is Fengyue Tower (where Wanlusi is). The protagonist is currently on the line with the right path and is leaning towards the right path. Collecting multiple beauties, but whether it will cause threats later is unknown. The protagonist's abilities are mainly based on fruit abilities, and he is learning Thunderbolt martial arts, but his body seems to be unable to generate internal power. I wonder if the subsequent domineering will be able to solve it, or it can be solved with heavenly materials and earthly treasures. Come on author, please update quickly

It is recommended that a plug-in system can be used by one person with eight magical skills. There are almost no shortcomings. The world of high martial arts has been strengthened at an epic level. A Qimen after the Wind can change in thousands of ways, cover a plane, and become a real god in it. It can live forever, breastfeed, and can learn any other people's skills. Many people are really baffled. Is there any issue that needs to be discussed about the combat power of Baqiji and Pilifa? The eight magical skills I want to talk about refer to the eight conceptual abilities. Liuku: Can make people live forever Two-handed hands: can change the body and read memories Queen of the Wind: Able to divine, change, stop, and control range. Qi Ti Origin: Ability to imitate other people's techniques The Spirit-Restraining General: Can control souls and spirits. Tongtianlu: All your wishes come true Magic machine: making puppets, practicing things, and transforming things Ronaldo: I don't have much performance so I won't talk about it. Devil Fruit can be localized, and some conceptual abilities will be amazing. And the Eight Magic Skills can only be at the level of one person. What kind of logic is this?

The writing is very good, everyone has his own character, but the protagonist's martial arts are not very good, there are not many devil fruits, and the development is not very good. The protagonist is not yet able to practice the exercises. But overall, the writing is very good, so keep writing.

I have just read the latest chapter 44. The first 25 chapters are pretty good and feel very thunderous, although I have only watched Sword of Spring and Autumn and Sensational Martial Arts. But after 25 chapters, sometimes several consecutive chapters seem to be the plot of the original drama, without the protagonist at all, making it a bit unbearable.

Come on, author, the fanfic you wrote is considered to be a good one among Perak. In particular, some details are well written, such as some of Qin Jiaoxian's lines that do not fit the style of the painting. Moreover, it is difficult to write some plots in the early days of Pili. Moreover, after the protagonist travels through time, the most correct way to play kite is to not look for opportunities and practice martial arts everywhere. Because Pili martial arts are not the most powerful, they all reinforce and inhibit each other. It is best for the protagonist to play with the mechanics later, so that the protagonist can make up for the trouble of practicing martial arts. If the strong among the thunderbolts don't have the heart to be strong, no matter how good their martial arts are, they won't work. I really want to see the protagonist going crazy when he attacks the Qi Tian Emperor with shit? [Laughs] Come on, author, don't be a eunuch. Not many people who write Pili fan fiction in Tomato can read it. Your writing is quite good. Just write it according to the character of the protagonist, and don't write it in a pretentious way. The biggest problem with this protagonist now is that he cannot live forever. Because of your setting, he cannot practice martial arts. If he cannot practice martial arts, he cannot live forever. He needs to use other means. There must be at least a few hundred years between the beginning and the end of the plot like yours. I remember there was a plot in the old drama where Su Huanzhen lived in seclusion in front of her grave for several decades after Feng Cailing died. If you don't want to live forever, the logic of writing later will not be correct, because there seem to be too few characters in One Piece who can live for hundreds of years.

I haven't watched One Piece, but my ability is easy to understand. It's quite comfortable to watch this kind of protagonist who is not in the front and is biased towards the right path. It has the feeling of watching things in the pool before. It is much better than those stories about the domineering CEO Pili, which are too embarrassing [face covering]. The timeline is relatively early. Maybe some Taoists don't understand the plot well so the data is average, so the progress can be accelerated a little.

It's very well written, don't stop.

It's so well written, don't give up, I'll help you promote the book in the next few days. Come on

Very well written, each character has a very similar personality

Not bad, support me