The World's Intruder

I personally quite like the martial arts in the Pili series, so I kept reading. To be honest, the pace of this book is too fast and it feels repetitive. I hope the author's next book will be about Pili martial arts 👍

The sectioning is a bit poor, one section is too crowded.

You want to spiral up to heaven (#ﾟДﾟ) I was stunned for a moment. I will be lenient if I confess, and strict if I resist. Have you studied it? 🤔 You won't start cultivating Taoism just by writing about it, right? Please, finish writing first before talking.

It looks good, but it's a bit messy. The author should update it soon. I want to read it.

It's nice to watch, but the first part is hard to watch without segmenting it, but from what I've heard, it's not bad.

It's so exciting to see Bu Ya's combat power

The front is pretty good, but the back with Chen Duo traveling through different worlds is quite speechless. The lack of a heroine does not only refer to the male protagonist's partner. Chen Duo has so many scenes that she has already occupied the identity of the heroine, which is very uncomfortable to watch. Moreover, there is no need for the protagonist to bring Chen Duo with him, and he has no idea what her role is.

The writing is so bland, I feel like all the pent-up anger is gone

It's just that there are a little few segments.

After reading the first volume of Swordsman, I feel very comfortable. I feel that if the author tells a story, people in the audience will definitely follow the crowd.