Online Game: I Don’t Want to Be an Elf Knight!

Don't let there be a plot where the male protagonist uses his sister's body to get married. I see that there seems to be this trend now. It's better to stay single.

The main plot is clear and reasonable, the world view setting is relatively traditional but still complete, the characters are vivid, the emotional bonds and conflicting plots are reasonable, the narrative and wording fluency are not bad, and there is no abrupt feeling of a running account. The character creation and transformation of the protagonist are pretty good compared to other transformation novels. The atmosphere of the scene is a bit stiff, the way the female body improves her performance in the first few times is a bit awkward, and the pace is too slow. Sometimes the daily chapter cannot even cover a complete plot, and the content is too little [face covering]

It has been changed to a single version at the moment, and the writing is excellent, with good descriptions of women's clothing and bodies, and almost no description of female abortion. It is a very excellent transformation text that affects the reality of online games. It has a perfect world view, a secret writing method, a lot of foreshadowings such as the protagonist's transformation secret, the disappearance of his sister, etc. The most important thing is that the writing is very detailed, especially the battle scenes are full of descriptions and have a sense of substitution. Several supporting characters also have distinct personalities. Judging from the current plot, there will definitely be a huge crisis in the real world in the later period. The protagonist must raise both accounts to level 50 to unlock new information. Regardless of whether there is a love line or not, this book must be updated! Very interesting, the writing is worth collecting.

I saw the latest and asked my questions. The target audience is unclear. You said you wanted to write slowly, one chapter a day. After all, no one is reading it. If you want it to flow slowly, that's okay, because the ones who can keep following it are the ones who have the patience to follow your updates. But the target audience has not been identified accurately. After 200 chapters, everyone does not know whether your core audience is single/hundred/narcissus or married. What I mean is that the core audience is not a single target audience. If you want to eat them all, you must have a main core audience, because this affects the outline and writing style. To put it bluntly, if you write the order, you can start your career with peace of mind, discover the conspiracy behind the game, improve your own strength, and become a strong woman. If you are Narcissus, then there must be interaction between the male and female accounts in the plot. Regardless of whether the male and female accounts are pretending to be ambiguous or really ambiguous, at least there must be a plot, and this is also what is on your profile. However, there is basically no progress after 200 chapters. This has nothing to do with your slow update, because I am talking about 200 chapters, which is the progress of the novel. Then there is marriage, which corresponds to Shan. If you look at Dan's novels, they don't write too many feminine words. They mainly talk about the beginning and then start a career. In your novel, the male protagonist needs to adapt to multiple female characters and he is just acting. How do you control it psychologically? What kind of person do you want the protagonist to be? Judging from what you wrote, I am definitely not a devil with broken shoes, nor a strong woman who only pursues strength without physical desire, nor is she a woman who really likes others. To put it purely, it would speed up the independent progress of the female account, and write about the interaction between the male protagonist and the female account to build a career. Isn't it good to fit the title and the introduction? Moreover, it will not affect your writing about fighting monsters and people in games. Now you want to bring each character to life and write in depth, so the progress is slow, but because of this, you want to finish writing everyone, and it will take until the year of the monkey. What readers dislike most is not that the update progress is slow, but that the novel is too watery, and there is currently no interaction with the male protagonist. All in all, the core writing point of playing the role of a female protagonist to support the male protagonist and making the male protagonist a soft meal was not reflected.

So beautiful. Slightly toxic, mainly because there are too few books of this type. And it looks like this book still has potential. The author's writing is getting better and better. Things changed later. There is a yandere. Chase and kill the protagonist.

Lao Zuo, I came here after seeing the emotional interaction between male and female accounts in your profile, but now it has been updated to 182. Let alone emotional interaction, male and female accounts cannot even appear at the same time. To be honest, it is more or less a profile fraud. I'll give you five stars first. I'll look at it later.

It's good. It's indeed slow-paced. The sunk cost of reading this kind of book is a bit high. Don't stop updating it. Heart] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's a pity that no one is watching. I still like this slow feeling. But it is indeed a bit too slow. Can the update be faster? I'm a little anxious as I wait. I hope you can write to the end

There are no big problems with the plot. It looks good and the pace is not too slow. It's just that the mode will make it frustrating for those who want to see Lily. In addition, the cover doesn't have the feeling of making people look at it forever. The main reason is because the cover looks too ordinary. It is too difficult to attract readers with the cover now. Anyway, I am following this book, I hope I can stick with it.

Judging from the content of the introduction, the author has a big plan for this book, and the content is also very rich. Judging from the content, the author's writing style is also very good, and he does not deliberately delay the plot. The content of the story is not slow to advance (objectively speaking, the update speed of one update per day makes the plot feel very delayed, which affects the judgment and makes it easier to maintain the book). I also hope that the author can persevere and finish the book.