Transmigrated into an Online Game and Pretended to Be a Little Girl

It's very good. It's not toxic at the moment and contains a lot of stems. Also, I hope I won't get married 😳

As far as it is shown so far, its background structure and narrative structure are particularly interesting, but it lacks a macro-epic feel in the narrative, especially when describing the more ambitious goals and world background. Maybe you can add some environmental descriptions? However, the characters are not as good at controlling the daily routine and game rhythm of OC. At least it makes me feel comfortable to watch, and the length is appropriate. But because of this, part of the sense of expectation that belongs to foreshadowing and hooks is missing? (Come on, author, I may not be right, that's all)

Generally speaking, it's pretty good, with no obvious poisonous spots. Although the small details are a bit confusing, it doesn't matter.

Good-looking(๑>ڡ<)☆ Ask the author, will it change later? If it changes, what about Shan Baiyuan? It's acceptable as long as you don't get married.

The subject matter is very interesting, and there is nothing poisonous about it. I hope you stick to it.

It's good-looking and non-toxic. The premise is that the noble's revenge is avenged. I haven't seen it yet. I will comment if there is any. There are typos, but the author listened to the advice, but the data is not very good. It's a pity.

Since it's brass for life, why don't you just keep opening treasure chests and pack it with pure gold and sell it to pay off your debt?

Very good, very interesting

Not bad, give it a five-star review

Although it is still a seedling, the current part is pretty good. I also see that some small foreshadowing has been laid. I hope that the current style will continue in the future.