As the Qichao Manifests, I'm Forced to Transform

I thought the setting of the protagonist of this novel was interesting, so I read it. But as for your content, there are references to Alien Ring, but you didn't mention it in your introduction, so I came in with ideas that I thought were almost original. However, Su Qianyu's organization allowed me to see Yiboen from Alien Ring, and some school plots are all influenced by Alien Ring. I clicked in to watch fresh plots rather than déjà vu, so I suggest you either say something about Alien Ring in your introduction, so that subsequent readers will know that you have learned from Alien Ring, or try to have as little déjà vu as possible in the subsequent plots. Other than that, I think it's still okay. I hope you can continue to improve yourself. Come on.

Only now do I know that people can really laugh when they are helpless, because I really laughed when I heard it [covering my face], which really made me lose my hearing. I don't know if I am the only one who feels this way [covering my face]. But I still like the author's setting very much. I just want to give the protagonist some mention of his combat power. The plot is also very good [eating melon]

First of all, let me give you a five-star review to support the author. After all, it is not easy to create every book, and it is even more difficult to persist in creating it. After reading almost half of the books that have been updated now, I consider myself an old bookworm. I have a few words to say, please forgive me if I am wrong. First of all, the advantage is that the setting is novel. In this situation where there are a lot of repetitive books, the novel setting is naturally more eye-catching. Second, the writing of the fighting scenes is okay, much better than most books. Third, there are no major problems so far, the writing is okay, and the character creation is no problem at the moment. Then the shortcomings, first: the settings are not clear. The most representative one is the current core setting. The setting of Qichao itself is not clear. What can it do? Why does it appear? Has it always been there? What kind of damage can it cause? How is it contained? What does the ambiguous value that only appears once mean? How should its (E, D C B A) intensity be embodied? What is its scope? Is it a realm or a different space? What are the classifications of Qichao? Wait, wait, etc., I don't know any of these, either there is no setting introduction, or it is just a brief expression, causing readers to read more and more confused, which is why I did not finish reading this article. Of course, it's not just this setting, but also what the protagonist's abilities are, how to manifest the superpower's abilities, etc. There is too much missing in the setting introduction in this aspect. Second, the pace is too fast. The most common rhythm is climax - daily - climax - daily. This is the simplest writing structure. If you add the three golden chapters and the like, you can complete a good book. But now the climax is not high, the daily is too short, there are no ups and downs, and it is very dull. Maybe the author wanted the rhythm of constant climax, but obviously he did not do it well. Third, the plot is bloated. The most representative one is the plot in the world of cultivating immortals. It is novel, curious but boring. It may be to promote the relationship between the two and reveal the heroine's (?) Superpowers, but it is obviously not well written and the plot has not been changed. I don't want to change anything and just go with the flow. It is completely useless to the protagonist. There is no problem in skipping this plot. It is even said that this plot does not help the main plot. The above are some of my suggestions. I hope the author can write a more beautiful and engaging story.

Please give me five stars, please update me, and please comment. If you have any comments or suggestions, please feel free to point them out [Blow a kiss] This book is stably updated with two chapters and 4,000 words every day. I will add more chapters if the results of the previous day are good or if there are a lot of reminders on the day. [Blowing kiss] If you have any comments or suggestions, you are welcome to point them out. The author will read and correct them! However, some of the issues in the previous article that are too fast-paced and have few daily routines may not be corrected. However, in the following articles, I will add more content about daily life and the transformation of the protagonist, and I will also try to write some events in an interesting direction! Also, the protagonist of this book likes girls, and the harem is also made up of girls (maybe there are also girls who turned into boys) [I understand]

Borrowing the world view of Alien Ring, the writing is good, but there are no obvious highlights yet. This is a problem. [Chigua] The characters appear suddenly, a bit like Zero Zone. It can be used as a foreshadowing in the front but it is too rushed, but this is also what Venucia can do better for the rest. Also, can we have a female protagonist with dual forms [laughing evilly]

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It looks very good, please develop more abilities and increase the number of masks [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Five-star support Haha, come on, come on, there is nothing that particularly affects the viewing experience, I will continue to watch [Thinking]

It feels like Two Phase Paradise and Alien Ring

In the first part, a man puts on a mask and transforms into a woman. The next step is whether he can be a man or a woman [laughter]