Can't Even Date Without a Superpower

Progress 103, good-looking, but not exciting enough. To be precise, it laid the groundwork for the ending of the story for a long time, but the sense of explosion and guidance given was insufficient. Just like the first volume, I thought that multiple events burst out together and finally contributed to something. I didn't expect that the core was to write about the transformation of the female lead. Maybe the scenes of the vixen and the reasoning girl were not enough. Anyway, I saw the transformation of the female lead. When I changed, I felt like "this guy's story has come to an end for the time being", and then the Taoist priest was introduced in the second volume. How should I put it, it was too bland and not refreshing at all, but the reading experience was very good, the story flowed very well, I was very interested in reading, and the character creation was very successful, but I hope it can give everyone a perfect ending. Life is so bitter, so the novel is here to sweeten it up.

I've read a lot of this type. The writing is pretty good so far. The female characters can be seen to have a lot of shadows of their predecessors. But as for the weekly rotation of super powers, you are relatively rare. After the rotation, the last super power disappears completely. As for the ability, the cool thing is that it has been reduced a lot. After reading Chapter 74, my evaluation is, what does it mean? But this is a tomato, just be happy

I have read 99, and I think the author can improve the mentality and logic of the protagonist. He is obviously a person in two lives, but when he returns to the young student days, he is still soft and soft, like a melancholy boy. He has some embarrassing complexes when facing girls and cannot explain clearly. A person who has lived two lives is still so weak. He was already 30 years old in the last life, and he still feels like a fifteen or sixteen year old. The author should think about the psychology of a middle-aged person. If you want to write a coming-of-age story about a young person, you shouldn't start by writing about the soul traveling through time at thirty. Since we have been reborn, we should be redeemed and healed, rather than redeemed and redeemed. The adult world does not need salvation. Being warmed by life and people is the greatest comfort. However, the author's content and world structure are very interesting and worth reading. The subject matter is innovative, and the content is plain but not lacking in taste. It's just that the psychological setting is a bit inconsistent. I hope the author will work hard and get better and better. I look forward to changes in the future. I give it a five-star rating and recommend everyone to read this book.

I read the latest chapter in one night, and although it has flaws, it's not bad. (After all, saving a poor student who wants to commit suicide is a tricky story in the novel world. If you don't write it well, it will be a poisonous point.) However, it seems that the author tried his best to write this story better, so it won't be too poisonous. This story tells that an ordinary person (really ordinary, without the height and appearance of the protagonist of the Internet article, and not a model), after having super powers, he did extraordinary things. As for the villain... Except for the heroine's father, the classic scumbag, no one else can be seen at the moment. More everyday style. Then, the protagonist uses his strength to make the heroine like him. (Although the current plot has not yet reached the point where the heroine falls in love with herself)

Rating: A! It is a work with great potential, but it is a pity that the number of words is too small. It can reach the level of A+ or even S in the future. The most important thing is that I personally feel that the author does not use AI or uses it very little, and it does not have that weird mechanical feeling.

I have finished reading it, and I personally feel that this book is quite good. Mainly because after reading too many stereotyped routines, I finally felt like a bittersweet person after reading this book. However, this book also has its own shortcomings. The first is the climax of each chapter. It may be that the description is not enough, or the writing power is insufficient. I personally feel a bit rusty or Anyway, it feels a bit weird to be empty, but the author's daily descriptions are actually very good, and in terms of emotions, it finally doesn't feel like a set love. After reading a lot of urban articles, I feel that the emotional scenes in them are like playing, because the male and female protagonists don't have too much interaction, and the author has to make up his mind here and here. , Just like the evidence, it shows you that they both like each other, which makes me sick. But in this book, when I saw the male protagonist and Yu Bai approaching step by step, I really felt throbbing. Another highlight of this book is that it brings people to life. I can really clearly feel the personality traits of the main characters. The most important thing is The thing is, you can't just feel the setting. In many books, one character has a setting. This character is as if he is destined to die. The author does not describe it very carefully and just mentions a few sentences related to the setting. But people are complicated, and this book can clearly feel the vitality of the character, and finally it does not feel like a dead person. Save time: This book has two major highlights. One is the extremely delicate emotional description. On the contrary, this also results in the emotional line being pushed very slowly. The other is the vivid character creation. These two points are also the reasons why I read this book. This book also has quite a few shortcomings, but I personally feel that it is not satisfying enough, or if there is no Having considered the above two points, it's easy to get turned off by a long article that doesn't have any interesting points. In fact, the author can put more effort into emotions and regard this as one of the enjoyable points. There is no need to push it too fast and let the readers get it. I will continue to read this book. In the end, Yu Baiqianfei and the others, I am optimistic about you.

The author's writing style is okay. From my personal point of view, the article is a daily life article. The protagonist is a bad guy, but the good guy is a bit humble. And then I feel that the male protagonist is always easily seen through by the female protagonists. It may be due to the subject matter. The perception will be very frustrating. From the article, there is a feeling of being neither good nor inferior. If the male protagonist has special abilities Lidang Shuang is very frustrating to read. If you read it as a daily light-hearted novel, it is quite depressing and slightly dark at the beginning. The male protagonist also keeps teasing himself for showing off his depression, and then the female protagonists basically express it directly when they see through the protagonist. It feels a bit socially awkward, especially when they are all new acquaintances. But in general, the author's descriptions of emotions are quite delicate and can touch people. I hope the protagonist can grow more and not always be so weak in front of the heroine. Good luck to the author!

I watched episode 75 of [Eating Melon], which seemed like an incident had come to an end. Then, reading the novel gave me a feeling like the anime "The Street Only Where You Are Not" [Chigua]. Of course, I just feel that I don't know if it is the kind of situation where the heroine gives birth to a child for another male partner [Chigua]. It seems to me that overall it feels a bit depressing, with only some interesting parts. I personally don't like this kind of depressing subject matter. After all, reality is so depressing and I still watch depressing things [eating melon]. But the writing is quite interesting and looks very good, so I gave it 4 points. But apart from commenting, I still think it might be more interesting for the author to develop more interesting abilities, or solidify some "super powers"? Of course it's just a suggestion. Overall, is it worth watching? I think it is worth watching. After all, it is well written. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

So pretty! ! ! ! Especially the part that redeems Yu Bai. Although Yu Bai's final transformation is a bit abrupt, it doesn't hurt. The novel is a pseudo-harem party struggle type (it should be), and the writing is good. If you like youth love-themed novels, you must not miss Kouya!

In fact, the writing is okay. It is rare to see a protagonist who looks like a normal person. I really think this is a plus. The handsome guy in the protagonist is the same and makes me sick to my stomach. The protagonist is a typical gentle and good man. There is no problem. It is completely understandable to write it like this for stability. As for the naughty thing, I think it is a painful disease of this kind of literature. Is there really a Japanese novel that is not naughty? After about 100 chapters, I suddenly saw the author saying that I can't continue writing. I don't think so. At the moment, there is no need to be too obsessed with a single female protagonist. I can open up more emotional scenes and write multiple female protagonists. I have no objection. I've tried the setting a few times. At present, it seems that the city of a giant fox monster in disguise is not deep enough. Maybe there will be supplements later, so I won't make a conclusion first. I don't know if the author will read the comments. What I want to say is that I feel that this book can be considered a hit if it has less than 2 million words. Really, this subject is completely for long-term daily use, and hydrology is also inevitable. Don't be too demanding of yourself. If you add some sugar to the water, you can definitely drink it. Come on. It's a pity that it's unfinished. Please pay attention if you want to see it.