The Girls Who Occasionally Torment Me with Their Techniques

It's a very good light novel that makes me spin. It has a strong Japanese flavor, but it is more suitable for Chinese babies. In fact, many Japanese writing styles cannot be read well, but this book does not have this problem at all. It seems a bit green at the beginning. After the end of the first volume, it can be seen that the author is getting better and better. Although it still looks a bit green, there is obvious progress, "It's a good thing." At present, the quality is good, and there is still a lot of room for improvement. Well, it is a potential masterpiece. In addition, there are two regular updates every day. I have finished writing the first volume, the second volume, and the third volume is in progress. The story of the second volume itself involves some important settings, but the writing is not so clear. I just mentioned it a little bit. It is also the same in the first volume. It feels like a lot of foreshadowing. It can be seen that there is a certain outline (゜-゜)つロ Sister, it's time for an update. It's been a few days and I feel uncomfortable ("><)" Two weeks... Where are the people? I sent a gift of 5 yuan but didn't even call it back (T▽T)

This book not only scores 7.7, It deserves a higher score. In my mind, this book is a masterpiece with a score of 9.9. Why? The author's writing style is natural and smooth. Some people may find it verbose, but when you really calm down and savor the lines of words, you will feel the inexplicable throbbing from the bottom of your heart, a feeling like memory and hope (human words, experience the taste of life) Then there is the author's story, which is pure magical realism and truly uses words to influence people's mood. The story of the work is eclectic (free and unrestrained), but restrained and reserved. He is telling us a story, teaching us an emotion, and the content of the story that realizes humanistic significance. I like it very much. Finally, I hope the author can create better stories and go further through good or bad reviews! It's a pity that the update is discontinued... I really like this book, but the rating of this book is too low, which leads to a poor score. The style of this book is very unique and I like it very much, but this may also be the reason for the low rating of this book. There are a lot of environmental descriptions in this book, and this kind of detailed description of the environment is actually in line with the rhythm of the plot of the whole book - soothing, daily exploration of skills. But tomatoes don't welcome this kind of thing, it's a pity... I hope the author can bring better stories (referring to new books). I will read this book from time to time to see if the author has updated it (can I secretly add another chapter...) Come on, the author! Hope you can write your own story! Instead of succumbing to public opinion! I love your novel! I really like it!

The setting of Liji is quite interesting. The writing style is more delicate, but sometimes it is too forceful. Some paragraphs also have an AI flavor, and the form is slightly more important than the narrative. In terms of plot, the first volume is actually well laid out, but some parts are not done well and some are a little awry. It feels like it almost went down the path of a ghost story. Secondly, the character creation is quite clear, but the distribution of relationships and roles is a bit confusing. In short, the advantages and disadvantages are relatively clear, and those who can't stand the long prose description must be a little dissuaded.

It's amazing. I didn't expect Tomato to see a novel with such delicate writing. It's a bit similar to Japanese light novels, but completely different. It should be said that the boyhood of the male protagonist is very similar to the male protagonist of Japanese light novels. However, in terms of writing skills, whether it is the description of scenes or people, the description of external actions or the description of psychological demeanor, it is impeccable, which shows the author's intention. The characters of the male protagonist and the three girls are very profoundly portrayed. I like each one of them very much. The most rare thing is that this book has a sense of enjoyment without destroying the logic of the plot. It even maintains an epic feel similar to a famous book, such as borrowing from "Kafka on the Shore". I thank the author for letting me see such a good novel. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's very beautiful, and the writing is very good. Although some of the routines are a bit old, but as long as it's well portrayed, it's fine. But I want to ask the author, does it have multiple heroines? I was a little scared when I saw the sign that there weren't multiple heroines. No, I still don't like Zoji very much

The writing style of this Japanese light book is very good, leaning towards the stream of consciousness type, with various metaphors and borrowed objects to describe people. It should be considered that they are very interested in radio waves. Some people seem to be very good, while others may not be so good. In terms of character design, the male protagonist is of the Jiahao type (with character arcs), and the female characters all have their own characteristics. For example, Xiao Zuo is like Jiaxin, but the setting does have this capital. And it will have its own growth and character arc later on. The twists and turns in the plot are not abrupt and very smooth, making it very comfortable to watch over and over again. The emotional line is written very vaguely, without any clear expression, it is all side effects and metaphors. There are possibilities for harem, party fights and so on. I personally think they are very good. I look forward to the development of the plot in the future. In terms of rating, I feel it could be a score above 9.3. Supplement: Some of the elements in this book include brother-control-sister-control, redemption, fantasy (a bit like CL), growth, passion (probably), etc.

The purest taste of Nikkei, although the character is a little familiar. But overall, it still expresses the author's own thoughts. Whether it's the technical setting or the author's writing style, it's very interesting. Not to be missed if you like Riqing.

Nikgaru is the most suitable to be adapted into animation, and I feel that it will do well if it appears in Nippon Bunko. The story logic and writing style are not inconsistent, and are quite similar to the Monogatari series or Green Pig, but there is no overlap between the characters. Each is wonderful. Although the characters are common, they are always innovative, making it easy for people to take in and arouse a lot of curiosity to read. The author obviously has extensive knowledge of many excellent works and nooks and crannies, and has good literary attainments. Therefore, it would be a pity if this book could not achieve better results and break the circle. If it could be adapted into an animation, it would probably go a step further.

Great praise, the tomato has a lighter upper lip, a little bit of aphrodisiac, but it's okay, and some minor flaws are acceptable. Sasanagi gives people a feeling of spring, but it's not as uncomfortable as spring. It's getting more and more interesting, but why no one is watching it?

Very pretty, when are you going to learn how to remove clothes stuck in your clothes 😢