Divine Beast? How Many Traits Does It Have?!

It's very good. It's an original elf novel. I can see that the author has thought carefully. I think the reason for the low score is the routine slap in the face. It's so typical. The protagonist slaps the face and then gets the opportunity to [cover face]. I feel that every thought can be realized.

Is this the comment section of those who don't buy the real thing? [Pause face] Telling the truth clearly stands out among all the AI articles and crappy articles on the street. I didn't notice the plundering entries at all when I read them. The protagonist of entries with negative attributes (such as "doer") was changed. I think the change was okay, and his very interesting "blessing in disguise" was later changed to a copy and Replacing the entries, there are only a few chapters in total. The first part is really cliché and the second part (not much more is the early stage) has been greatly improved (no better than So-and-so Dali and So-and-so God [face covering]). There are no inexplicable beauties throwing themselves into their arms, beast mothers, who seem to control beasts but actually have harems, and deliberately satisfy the hobbies of some pig brothers. Men should have fun fighting men (male elves)! I want to see a river of blood! The imagination is pretty good. I quite like the unique way Victor and Roland appear, such as Victor's sense of madness, and the sense of security and image of the civilized staff hat when the protagonist is in danger. Skill name suffix agreement, distance walking, etc. Are also very appropriate. You can really try it. The rule-based skill gameplay is a great test of imagination and control of the sense of fun. I hope the author will continue to work hard and be responsible for his own work!

It looks good. Come on, author, keep at it. As long as it doesn't collapse, it will be a Tomato T0 beast-controlling novel. It's just that I don't understand what the original elves are and what's the difference between them and the newcomers. Another thing is that the title of the book needs to be changed. I read this book several times without the desire to click into it. When I was playing the game, I found out that it was a treasure.

This dramatic beginning left me hahahaha, and I experienced the Golden Three Chapters theory for the first time. The author's descriptions and level of humor are just right for me! The design of the first secret realm is very impressive. It has been reviewed and will be updated in the future.

Very funny: "Electricity, computer... Brother?" [Computer brother? It sounds great! Just tell me, how many points do you want? ] "What's the score... Of course the higher the better..." Chen Zang was still a little confused. "Ding!" "The entrance exam for Ganquan Elf Academy has officially begun. Candidates please——!" "Ding!" "The candidate on the 30th completed the submission and the exam score is 100 points." Chen Zang: "?" But are there too many female supporting characters? Although there is no ambiguous plot, I feel that the woman is a bit biased. The pet story only needs to be about the bond between the pet and the pet. I hope there will be no female protagonist [laughs] My suggestion is to reduce female supporting roles and reduce female supporting roles [laughs] I feel like I have a headache watching this kind of thing that involves history, the future, illusions, and mental illness [thinking]

The original sprites and world view of the author's book are quite attractive. From the current point of view, the writing style is quite comfortable. It should be written by hand and will not have the uncomfortable feeling of AI writing. But there are some problems with the setting of the protagonist's golden finger. I think the protagonist cannot at least not directly replace the purple entry of someone else (hereinafter referred to as a) with a piece of garbage (you can gain double skill proficiency through combat, and have a probability of obtaining permanent skills, but you cannot learn the knowledge in the book) a: Because I suffered so much for this entry, I finally got the elf, and finally I was able to participate in the elf battle to show off my talents. You simply and easily snatched it away. Some comments below said that a doesn't know that he has that talent, so he may not be able to use it. But from the moment he obtained the elf at the elf academy, he couldn't avoid fighting. Whether he is in the academy, exploring secret realms, or leveling up, he always has to fight, and he can always grow. The author writes at the back that the protagonist thinks that this approach may help a, and he will be content. This idea is absolutely wrong. Although it is undeniable that A will be able to learn knowledge from books in the future, his grades may soar, he may receive some of the resources from the academy, and he may become a master of the big-mouthed gull with the new talent given by the protagonist. But his original talent may also bring him a better life. In life, most of us are not as talented as the protagonist in the novel. We may also go through countless hardships like A, and finally wait for the flowers to bloom and the heart to be full. Then we should not destroy the beauty of others at any time. Some comments say that a is standing on the opposite side of the protagonist, but is that his own wish? Whether it's fighting the protagonist or giving the elf a potion with side effects, isn't it all being forced? Whether he takes the initiative to greet the protagonist or apologizes to the protagonist, it can be seen that a is not a bad person. Furthermore, A's doer cannot determine the outcome of a battle. It is a late-stage developmental talent, and there is no need to replace entries in order to win. There are also some comments that think it is not good to replace the entry with the Holy Mother. Then I would like to ask what is the definition of the Holy Mother, and what basis do you use to judge others as the Holy Mother? If you have to teach me to bring down the world, then you are not the Holy Mother? If you have to be egotistical and willful, will you not be the Holy Mother? If everyone has to sweep the snow in front of their own door and don't care about the frost on other people's tiles, is it not the Holy Virgin? As a lyric says, if everyone gives a little love, the world will become a beautiful world. I'm not forcing everyone to have any dedication, but don't be harmful to others.

The world view is too big and the progress is too slow. Awakening, transcendence, leadership, overlord, epic, king, legend. Chapter 178, guess which level the protagonist has reached [Thinking]

It's quite interesting. Except for the three female characters whose configuration is relatively typical (but the author said that the protagonist is a career party, so he can let go of the harem suspicion), the plot and abilities are all quite interesting, and there are many funny scenes. It's quite interesting.

A non-traditional beast-control novel, more of a fantasy novel. (Spoilers below: In general, pet beasts rules. The first part is still about beast control, but after the protagonist enters the dark realm, the values begin to expand. Because of the so-called entries. There is a saying that the level remains unchanged and the values are inflated, and then adding the values that need to be arranged for the plot. As of the latest chapter of the book, the values are already a bit outrageous. Especially when observers appear. ♾️Infinite time travel, infinite timeline, plus two similarly similar characters, Victor and Roland, as well as unappeared characters from hostile countries who can also observe the ability. Coupled with the fact that Sin Titan is a bug that is not affected by entries, it is impossible to imagine how the plot will develop later on. Extraordinary fight against mythical beasts? Does that mean I'm going to play the world's best mid laner? I couldn't believe it. But I have to say that it is indeed an enjoyable book, well, except for the boring part at the beginning of Dark Prison. (This is how the map changes) It just depends on how round the author's back is. I estimate that the protagonist's strength will either have a high explosive period later and fill in the gaps in realm. Or just reopen the world line and reshape the wind, fire, water and soil. Well, that's probably it. Thousands of people have different views. This book is generally readable and has great insights. Come on! Here comes Ollie!

First of all, this book can be called a masterpiece before the prison chapter. Although the writing is a bit immature, the overall writing is smooth and exciting, with a humorous and interesting style. Characters such as Roland are also remarkable. Unfortunately, the fly in the ointment is that after the prison chapter, the world view is too large, which leads to the gradual collapse of the combat power, and the main line deviates too much from the theme of the novel. In fact, this is also the advantage and common problem of system novels. With the help of the system, the plot can be advanced quickly, but it also causes the entire plot to be fragmented due to unreasonable advancement. For example, the colorful entries behind the prison make the plot advance very quickly, making the concept of combat power at the beginning of the novel inapplicable. Generally speaking, it is recommended that the author can observe the main line writing of other excellent systematic novels. If some connecting plots are added after the prison chapter, the novel may be more eye-catching. I also wish the author will become a famous writer soon