Dragon Raja: Reborn Lu Mingfei Gets a Trait System

How can I put it this way? The writing of this article is actually not bad. You can see the care in writing and it also has its own atmosphere. It's just that I always feel awkward when reading it in some places, like the wind blowing out of season. After all, Lu Mingfei is the one who goes back with memories of the end of the world. He has seen the blood of dragon slaying, everyone's ending, and he has been burdened with regrets that he can't let go of for the rest of his life. When such people face their parents and old friends, they should have hidden in their hearts the dull pain and numbness that has lasted for many years, the exhaustion after seeing everything through, instead of the frivolous and inconsistent emotions. I didn't want to comment too early, I planned to wait until the end quietly before making any judgment. But when I turned to the part where Kassel and a group of people were sitting together for a meal, I really couldn't turn a blind eye anymore. Tiny inconsistencies are piled together, and there are incompatible grooves everywhere, as if something that should be heavy is written too lightly and too sloppily. But in the end, it's still a story worth reading. Flaws can never cover up the light of the text itself. I only hope that when I write it later, I can understand a little more about the loneliness and wrinkles in Lu Mingfei's bones. Take your time, there is still a long way to go, I wish the author a lasting life

The writing is so damn good, I jumped with excitement several times after reading it, and slapped my thigh several times. My thigh hurts so much now. Damn, the author is awesome. I hope it will end without CP. I still like reading without CP (I didn't pay attention to the book introduction, don't complain) Looking at the back, there are some plots that the author can't match, so you can try to modify them. For example, the copy of Shilan Middle School, didn't it say that it has reached 99.9%? Why is it described at 85% later? (Question mark) 😱😱😱 (scared to cry) I recommend watching it while listening to the song, it won't be boring😍😍😍 Well, I probably watched it for a long time without realizing it and made me cry. The connotation is double zero 🤔 It seems to have elements of road painting 🤔 It also seems to have a little bit of Lu Nuo (I'm here to step on the thunder to prevent you from being confused later) I hope the author can Mark out which CPs you are interested in. I finally found a book that I like to read, but I was disappointed (vomiting blood😭, probably because I stayed up until dawn just to read the book). Well, I have no interest in reading it now (os: I have already read half of it) (personal opinion, please don't criticize), but it can still be recommended👁👅👁

The writing is actually good, that's why after seeing life and death, parting and the destruction of the world, I still look like a bad boy. Where did President Lu go after the Nibelung plan and come back like a little daughter-in-law? The plot is very interesting.

The text of this book is exquisite, the story is warm and powerful, and it makes people think calmly after reading it. It is not deliberately sensationalistic, but it touches people's hearts in its plainness. It is a good book worth reading slowly and pondering for a long time. Those who like to watch Dragon Clan can give it a try!!!

Lu Mingfei was reborn as a foolish child. Long Si only went through the Nibelung Plan to strengthen his body and fighting ability. Lu Mingfei got all A's in the course by himself. After being reborn with memories, he can't even do high school questions... He can't even fight... Is this Lu Mingfei after he ascended the throne? It turns out that after sitting on the throne, there are still side effects 😄 This book is simply shocking and delicious, and more people must taste it 👍

The beginning of the game made me sick. I was reborn as Lu Mingfei and Tom was bullied by his uncle's family. I had the idea of ​​going out to live by myself. After a while, I felt guilty and felt that I was ungrateful. It was just that I was abused too much and it brought out my emotions, right? Anyone who likes the suffocating style of Jiangnan's original work should watch it.

The author's writing is very good, but the writing is a bit "poor". It doesn't have the feeling that the flowers in the original version are all numbers.

The writing is good, and it's refreshing enough. However, some of the plots are directly copied from the original work, which is a bit fragmented and cannot be connected.

The writing is very comfortable. There are some minor issues in the plot, but they are innocuous.

Highly recommended, a very interesting fanfic that is different from most others.