A 200,000-Year-Old Lovesick Heartbreak Flower

Men are menstruating when they see menstruation🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘It is God and my rose illuminates It saved my dark life and gave my world meaning😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The knife is just right, not too much and not too little, I like to see this [admiration]

It was very touching when I went there. The family ties and bonds in the early stage were written very delicately. There are very few derivative works of Douluo Dalu that do not write mindless and cool stories. Every time the protagonist grows up, it is not easy. Author, you must continue to provide such high quality🥺

To be honest, it's okay. It's not an AI novel. It has a lot of words. Although the protagonist is a bit weak, the arc of the character is very complete. In the early stage, because of the poison, I had to endure the pain and transformed the fairy grass into a ninja god grass. But it's not boring. I can keep reading. It's good.

I have read twenty-seven chapters so far. The subject matter is good, but it is a bit OOC (personal feeling). It can be said that it is the influence of the protagonist. The first dozen chapters are very well written, but the later chapters are too AI-heavy. Maybe the author did not notice it when revising.

The writing is quite good. The protagonist is a little bitter melon, which makes people feel distressed.

The writing is very humane and beautiful. I hope the main plot will not collapse later (I hope there will be no cp)

This book gave me a feeling: depressive In order to explore love and hatred, the protagonist transforms into a human being, and then goes through a series of conflicts and tragic experiences. It is quite uncomfortable to watch, and it keeps making me cry [crying]

It's a very good book. It's very sad to read and keep saying goodbye. From Gray Rabbit to uncle and aunt, they left the academy and the training camp. Obviously I don't feel that the connection with everyone is deep, but being separated again and again makes people feel distressed.

The story is there, but the main character is too bitter and hateful, and it's too sad. There are story lines that break away from the main line, but not many. I can only say that Xiao Wu's sacrifice is a must-have for Douluo fans [you can taste it carefully] and the writing is okay

It's so excellent, a rare Douluo fanfic with a lot of fireworks and human feelings [Sending my heart to you]