A twist on the original.
When Luo Chen transmigrates to the era of The Legend of the Dragon King, he starts with Innate Full Soul Power but pretends to have only level-five soul power and a Trash Martial Soul: a lizard dragon.
In Aolai City, he saves a silver-haired girl named Na'er who has lost her memory, bringing her home to care for her.
At a blacksmith's workshop, he meets the child of destiny, Tang Wulin, and becomes the big brother he trusts most.
He secretly makes his moves, dismantling Tang San's ten-thousand-year plan step by step.
When the whole truth is revealed
“I knew from the very beginning that you would leave. But I brought you back anyway, because it was what I wanted to do.”
“Tang San, the piece you thought you were moving has been the player all along.”
It feels like a pool of stagnant water, with no fluctuations, and the psychological description feels a bit lacking, but I still support it. After all, it is indeed okay, so support it. Score some points.
It looks good, but why doesn't the protagonist forge iron ore to make money to support the family? Aunt Su Yun no longer has many sources of income. If one person's salary is not enough for the family, the single clothes are washed and hair styled, and sometimes they are mended. I feel sorry for Aunt Su Yun! 😢
Wasn't the God Realm blown away at the beginning of Dou San? [What] I still remember the side story comic eight years ago, where life and destruction were sacrificed, the God Realm was finally blown away, and the Golden Dragon King was sealed on 50. So at this point in time, you don't have to worry about being noticed by Tang San. If it's the author's personal opinion, then I have nothing to say. The writing is quite good. Please support it with 5 stars. Here to help the author score points
If you haven't read the original work, you can read it. I don't recommend it. Since the author is a new writer, give it five stars 😄 And it doesn't match your character. I personally recommend not to write fanfics using unfinished novels. I'm a normal person, so I didn't scold you. If you meet some god, it would be hard to say. And people who have read the original novel will generally not like what you wrote. I suspect that the author is farming monsters, but I have no evidence 😄
I hope there has been an emotional transformation, but now the protagonist feels that suppressing emotions is too rational? Supplement: I hope to write a plot similar to the one where Big Shark defeats the entire world by himself🍉
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There's not much to say, I just think this Douluo fanfic is interesting.
Can we add more every day? It's really not enough. Score points, hope to keep them for a long time
Single heroine or multiple heroines?
It's very beautiful, but unfortunately not many people see it.