Lin Wan transmigrates to Douluo Dalu and lives in Holy Soul Village alongside Tang San.
He thought he had the classic “cling to a powerful ally” story, but on the day he turned six and awakened his Martial Soul, he became bound to the [Insane Narration Editing System].
You can edit the narration? And it can change reality?
Looking at Tang San, who was calm and composed as he got up early to practice, Lin Wan let out a wicked laugh.
And so...
Tang San's Blue Silver Grass was changed to “Rotten Silver Grass.”
His Clear Sky Hammer became “a Clear Sky Dog that barks and has a dog's tail growing from its handle,” before it had even made its debut.
The porridge he cooked for his father was described in the narration as “a steaming bowl of freshly made shit.”
Su Yuntao's understanding, Tang Hao's fatherly love, and Tang San's own state of mind all gradually fell apart amid a chorus of “woof woof” and piles of “hot shit.”
As Lin Wan gained more editing privileges and turned his claws toward Soul Rings, soul skills, and even key lines of dialogue in the story...
The Grandmaster's theories went off track, Xiao Wu's gaze grew increasingly confused, and the whole world of Douluo raced headlong down an unpredictable, unhinged path.
Tang San (staring at the hammer in his left hand as it happily wags its tail, lost in thought): “Does my hammer... have a mind of its own?”
Lin Wan (hiding in a corner and frantically grinding System experience): “Third Brother, hang in there! Your legend is only just starting to go crazy!”
Tang Hao (clutching a wine jar and questioning his life): “So... is my son's hammer a weapon or a pet?”
In a nutshell: Once the narration starts spouting nonsense, the whole world starts acting weird!
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Don't expect the logic to be clear, just enjoy the picture 🤦 This kind of novel is mainly about laughter, just read it casually. Anyway, Douluo novels can't be broken here before they're shut down after a few hundred chapters. Just read them and cherish them.
I feel that this fanfic is unique among Douluo (at least on Tomato). Secondly, its style is funny with a bit of humor (that is, joy). The protagonist is relatively good at living, making it quite relaxing to watch. So, the author, please continue to work hard and update! (Five-star praise, I have sent it) 💕
The writing is quite interesting and funny and abstract, but I still have some suggestions. This kind of ability to change the plot should be behind the scenes. You can act together every once in a while. You can't always be next to the protagonist. Or occasionally come out to clean up the aftermath after other people have gone crazy. This can also increase their favorability. If everyone else is going crazy, the protagonist is fine. No matter how stupid you are, you will be suspicious. I want to ask if there is a female protagonist [laughing]
(`Dis´), this is possible. Let's not talk about other things. The scenes that make people laugh after playing with this transformation are very interesting. Although I have only read a few chapters, I decided to follow it.
To be honest, it's quite funny. I just thought that the protagonist was still traveling with the group. I felt that I could go alone or take Catwoman, Rabbit, and Pagoda with me. Anyway, there is a water mirror so I can see Tang San at any time.
Not bad, not bad, very good-looking. Although the emotional line is not very good at the moment, the funny elements are full. Do you know how uncomfortable it is for me to hold back my laughter late at night?
It makes me laugh to death. If you still have one star, just think of it as the compensation you gave me to make me laugh to death [cry with laughter] [cry with laughter] [cry with laughter] [cry with laughter] [cry with laughter] [cry with laughter]
Decided on a good book, but it's a pity that the update has been discontinued. The idea is good. If you change a word in the narration, the reality will be reflected. It makes me laugh when I am deceived.
You can take a look, it's still very interesting