Reborn as a Beautiful Immortal Girl, Then I Decided to Lie Flat

There is nothing sinister about it, and the plot makes sense, but it is a bit too hasty. When the protagonist encounters a crisis or opportunity, and other characters appear too quickly, he goes out without reacting. It would have been better if it took a little time to set the stage.

Since the author's novel account is temporarily unavailable, some comments in the backend system cannot be replied to, so I specially opened a small account to talk about it. If there are any harmful points, the author will seriously modify them. Already honest!

The writing is pretty good. Regarding combat power, it should be impossible for the protagonist to be chased by someone in the early stage. With the perfect Dao foundation of the God Transformation inheritance + Lingbao + Heavenly Spiritual Root, how could it be possible that he could not beat the late stage in the early stage. [Thinking] Except for the combat power, I can give 5 stars to other parts. Many parts are very well written and tasteful.

It's very interesting. I've read thousands of books. This book is very suitable for reading in leisure time. The plot is not poisonous and the writing is very charming. There are only a few flaws occasionally, but since the author is a newbie, it is completely understandable. However, there are a few points I want to say. It is said that it is a male-to-female version, but in fact it is a male-to-female version. Part of the memory is more reflected in the experience of things. The author probably wants to use this to make the heroine smarter. To put it bluntly, she goes from being silly and sweet to a thoughtful person. Then the title of this book is actually not very good. If the author can see this, I hope it can be changed. How should I put it? The more I write, the more I feel like it is no longer the same book as the previous one. For me, it means that the genre I like has changed from the genre I don't like.

This book has a bright setting and good use of words, which can make people feel like they can see the sun through the clouds. However, the events are deliberate, the story lacks depth, and the world view needs to be improved. I hope it will not lose its combat effectiveness in the future. The overall game has potential but needs to be improved. [Please update]

Yes, it has a very spiritual feel, and the author has made visible progress in his writing, especially the description of the scenes is very good. And I am very, very friendly as I am extremely uncomfortable with the overly humanistic books on the market. I don't want to read a book about fighting and killing. I highly recommend this book. There are still some fighting parts, but it is much better than the mess I usually see.

It's quite good-looking, not too toxic, and very comfortable to read. It's just a bit bland. It's quite good to read when I'm short of books.

Hmm... Not bad, it has the feeling and flavor of normal cultivation. [Learned]

It's okay, but the writing is too bland. Nowadays, Tomato is full of cool articles. It might be better if the author switches to another platform. [Think]

Compared with other ordinary articles about cultivating immortals, I would call it silly and sweet, but in a more normal world of cultivating immortals, I would probably have just finished the aptitude test on the front foot, and then the back foot was enlightened [thinking], and then the foundation-building cultivation base was wandering around. If it had been anyone else, he would have been randomly shot to death.