Reborn as an Online Game NPC, So I Became the Villain

The writing is decent, though somewhat formulaic, with no descriptions of cross-dressing, female body alteration, or female corruption. The premise is well-developed and the ideas are quite imaginative. The female protagonist belongs to the undead faction, destined for a life-or-death struggle with the Church.

It's pretty good, although I didn't see the rest. And, well, I can only say it felt a bit silly. Did becoming an undead lower your IQ? And you're already an undead, and a silver-rank one at that, and you're still being threatened. That bodyguard is just a jailer? He even deliberately blocked things. You could say he's pretty strong. And without a forum or anything, it's all fine.

This is a very good book; I'd give it a 9.4 out of 10. The plot is well-conceived and flows smoothly. Although there aren't many chapters yet, the storyline is clear, and the overall world structure and timeline are quite complete. The character development is excellent.

Titan writes self-promotional content, pampering his own book—and if you have any opinions in this thread, feel free to tell me, I'll try my best to revise. Finally, I wish all my darlings happiness every day and that you live forever!

Actually, all you have to do for the Church is give them a side quest called "Sweet Poison" and stuff some Holy Light Grass into it, and their reputation will be ruined by the players. 😏

In the early stages, the female protagonist was a top-tier subordinate. When she encountered her first god stronger than her subordinates, the god was not malicious and even gave her a talisman that could switch forms and provide protection. However, the female protagonist became a bit irrational every time she went berserk later on. Overall, it was quite enjoyable.

It felt pretty good; the content wasn't formulaic and had its own unique characteristics.

It's supposed to be a villain story... But it's actually quite lenient; the protagonist hasn't done anything really bad so far, at most they might be at odds with this so-called divine realm in the future... Also, the plot involving the beast-eared girl is a bit excessive and somewhat boring, but overall, the book is still pretty good. 🍉

I'd like to ask, will there be any melodramatic plot twists like the sisters turning against each other later on? 🤦🤦🤦

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