Why Isn’t This Card Game Turn-Based?

Although the progress is a bit slow, the author has written his own unique style, which is very distinctive, and he has slowly improved his deck. The disadvantage is that he cannot change the deck, and it feels like there is no diversity. He can only go all the way to the Angel deck. It feels like the plot is too stretched and the pacing is too obvious. I won the championship bonus of tens of thousands and can't use it. There are no blank cards. There is no improvement in the five chapters after the championship. The weakness of the deck is that it is afraid of AOE and it has not been solved. The Angel deck naturally occupies a certain size, and its data is a little weaker than other decks. This is nothing in itself. The offense and defense can be improved in other ways. It mainly depends on the card effect. It seems that the deck cannot be changed. It seems that the protagonist can only use the Angel deck. It is too single. It feels too monotonous if the deck cannot be changed. Instead, the 20-card deck is not very exciting. I still can't understand that after winning the championship, I should get bonuses to buy cards and improve my deck severely, especially if it has obvious weaknesses. Now I don't feel like I won the game and there is no positive feedback. This is quite speechless. Let's change the rating. 2 Stars is really not enough. If you exclude the battles with a single deck, it's quite interesting overall. However, the deck is too single and it feels repetitive. It will be interesting to release a new deck after graduation. Love the part about designing the Fallen Angel deck

Very good so far! Except for some nonsense related to the fourth wall at the beginning, and sometimes the author doesn't like segmentation in the early stage (especially related to card effects), there are no big surprises. The advantage is that the logic is clear and can be understood by novices, and the plot has no particularly huge poisonous points. After all, I have never played Yu-Gi-Oh!, Hearthstone, I don't know about Shadow Verses, and I have never played Clash of Clans... The only thing I can understand here is the content related to Rock Kingdom and Pokémon (actually I just like to read card fanfics. I have followed several books at the starting point next door and they are all eunuchs, and now I only have one copy left... In short, except for the inexplicable one-way emotional line in the middle and the angel's rescue when the mental strength is insufficient, everything is stable and good, but it feels that the world view has not been fully developed. Looking forward to the follow-up! That's right, it always feels like it's not exciting enough. The bond between the card player and the card has not yet developed. The protagonist doesn't feel like he has many friends, nor is he an old enemy who can play cards with him...

Great card battle. The only drawback is that as someone who plays Yu-Gi-Oh, I still hope to see the protagonist have more soul and be more middle-class. Follow-up review on the day of book review: The plot is a bit awkward, but the cards are really great. The writing is a bit awesome. It feels like I was reading an online game article for the first time. It's just that the game type is different, that one is legendary. This is a card. It hit my favorite spot. Updated on 6.15. 5 Stars. The plot is really mediocre, but the card battles become more exciting the more you watch them. It's even more amazing than when I first watched the Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic when I wasn't into Yu-Gi-Oh. I reviewed it again on 9.17, But it's still five stars. The setting is really good, but unfortunately the writing is lacking and the plot is over. Interruptions are also expected. Will comment again on 9.19. Modified to 4 stars. I really like the card setting, I have been thinking about it these past two days. As a result, the plot became more and more boring the more I recalled it. I really finished it and was convinced. I knew I wouldn't recall it. I deducted one star😡. I hope there will be improvement in the next book😡.

It is a very good development, and it is obvious that the author has thought about the world view. Under the premise of accepting the setting of cards, there are almost no abrupt things in the article, including the construction of the protagonist's advantages, thinking and plot development. Including the part about the original protagonist, it is a sudden turning point, but the construction of the plot is above the passing line, and it is excellent as a beginning to expand the world view. "Angel... Awesome!" But the writing structure needs to be optimized. A lot of dishes are too scary together.

It looks good. It's finally not a mythical card like the Great Sage. Come on, good luck

It is not recommended for people who simply like to watch professional deck duels. It can be seen that the author is deliberately controlling the intensity. The most written thing in this book is the protagonist's thoughts on card making and card grouping. The opponent's card author also worked hard. If you want to enjoy looking at careers in the early stage, forget it. The author lets the protagonist draw a bunch of cards, which is too big a step. Omitting the process of the protagonist making cards makes it feel like the protagonist has become too strong. In the past, card making was used to expand the world view, but now it is just to let the protagonist defeat the opponent in seconds. The relationship between the protagonist and the cards is separated. It's broken. Before, it felt like the protagonist understood the story of the cards and became stronger after going through trials. Now new cards suddenly appear, the plot suddenly accelerates, and the rhythm of the entire story is destroyed. The show is full of Riddlers, and the villain's appearance is revealed after 200 chapters. There was no foreshadowing before, and I thought the male protagonist was the most likely to cause harm.

Although the writing style is obviously male, the tone of voice is cold and humorous without being too outrageous. There are stereotyped characters but it is harmless, and the logic is very smooth. Even though the people in the card fighting world are generally weak and have low card skills, the protagonist is not mindless and forcibly crushed but has personal growth. The serious narrative construction ideas and the occasional joke rhythm are very easy to adjust. The readability is very high. Even as a female card game player who doesn't even understand the terminology, the reader can read smoothly. I say the author It's really interesting, don't you understand... Of course, in terms of the world view, this overly realistic physics engine-based card fighting setting must have a flaw that is difficult to convince the public. The reader's view of the playability of the cards and the hope that the characters in the book can use benign bugs (e. G. How to use weapons to get rid of them) may not be the same as the author (and the protagonist). This is also something that can be discussed, but I think the flaws are not concealed and do not affect the evaluation of this book as a well-written book from the perspective of genre literature.

Anyway, it seems pretty good so far, and it suits my taste. However, some of the male protagonists I saw only play angel cards. However, when the male protagonists create cards, they always give me a feeling that there are only female angels in heaven. I am more looking forward to the kind of male angels who wear sacred full-body armor and hold swords in the future, or some relatively well-known angels, such as Michael and fallen angels. They should also be considered angels, including Lucifer. It's a bit small, but it suits my taste. I should have found this book because it didn't have a female protagonist. Looking at the all-female angel card in the male protagonist's hand, I always felt like sighing.

New book, finished reading, five stars for encouragement. This is the first time I read a novel of this type. Apart from 3D card battles, there are no other supernatural phenomena, which is a bit new to me. Because the protagonist is immersed in the card battle, has goals and actions, so even if I don't understand anything, I can be led along by the protagonist and watch with gusto.

It's a great card story. Although the general plot is about playing cards, playing games, and going to school, the characters in the author's writing are very delicate and the author's own composition is quite complex. [Look at it carefully] It's interesting to see all kinds of familiar card jokes. However, although it is labeled as having no heroine, do you really not consider the sister who controls the dead sister? [Look at it carefully][You taste it carefully]