I Called the Actress My Wife on the Wrong Account and Got Kissed to Tears on a Dating Show

The shortcomings are the supporting characters, plot, character behavior logic, and flat background. It can almost be said that they are deliberately arranged to promote the relationship between the two. Classic villains, beauties, and forgotten memories (it's understandable that it's a classic, but the treatment is really too flat and mindless...). And there are some places that are suspected of eating books, such as the personnel composition and so on. The advantages are obvious! It did not deliberately create conflicts or entangled psychology (of course, the emotional pull was naturally not compressed), but used more than ten chapters to directly bring the heroines to the window paper stage (although a little bit of background rationality was sacrificed... I have complained about this above and I won't go into details) ~ In short! As long as you read it without thinking too much, it's a nice little sweet article! [Laughing][laughing][laughing] There are a lot of loopholes... Some are even outrageous common sense mistakes... Audiences appearing out of thin air, accidents without follow-up treatment, a past that gets longer and longer but is inexplicably forgotten, and illogical audience attitudes... Looking at the writing style of some fragments, there is a sense of fragmentation: on one side, there is even good writing and processing, and on the other side, there is rigid and flawed writing logic and plot processing... This is simply the author eating the book... But this is a serialization, not the type where one chapter is published every few months. It would be a mistake to say that it is forgotten... … ... Or there was an error in data loading processing when text was generated.

It's very good. It looks great overall. It's just that some parts are repeated. And it seems that some plots have been skipped in the middle. Author, you are not copying other people's works, are you?

Very good work! The cp I knocked on is so sweet [adoration][adoration] But it can be seen that the author is still a novice, and his writing style is a bit immature, but he is definitely a potential stock, so work hard! [Please update]

It's super interesting. I'm not very interested in entertainment-themed articles, but I think this book is very interesting. I just feel like some of the content is a bit of a left-brain conflict.

Starting from more than 30 chapters, the plot is weird and confusing to me, but it is indeed a good article, the author, please give it a thumbs up [code hold] [code hold] [code hold]

So pretty! ! ! It would be nice to have more cars

It's pretty good-looking. There may be some minor issues in some parts, but it's okay. It's just that sometimes the words I say are a bit awkward. Overall, it's still good-looking. [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

It's beautiful and sweet. The two protagonists must be happy. The Meaning of the Moon 99 [Love] [Love] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

This book is quite sweet, but it is repetitive in some places, but it is understandable. Anyway, it is quite interesting.

I really like the character of Queen Jiang. The contrast between being cold and reserved in public, but showing extreme preference and possessiveness towards Lin Zhiyi is so sweet. Especially in the early stage of the variety show, she fought and fought for the team. It was so sweet that she had agreed since childhood to get married when she grew up. It's a pity that the narrative logic in the middle of the novel is a little confusing. In the early stage of the live broadcast interaction, it was clear that the confession was public, but in the later stage, it feels like an undisclosed relationship. This disconnect in the setting somewhat affects the immersion of reading, which is a pity.