Reborn as a Villainess, I Kissed the Heroine by Force in the Basement from the Start

A Lily Yandere two-way redemption novel. There are some inconsistencies in the plot, which makes readers feel uncomfortable while reading. This is a deduction item. However, the overall plot is quite good. It is in line with the system novel Lily Yandere to give readers a little pleasure + abuse, but the character creation is a bit lacking. The author's writing style is a bit green. If the plot bugs are fixed, this will be a very good Lily Yandere article. Generally speaking, it is recommended for readers to read and appreciate. There is a paragraph that is better written. I copied it. "The essence of the torture article is that two incomplete souls bite each other until the flesh and blood are blurred, and you can no longer distinguish between you and me." I think this paragraph is well written. Overall, this novel has many flaws, and I highly recommend reading it.

Author, please don't give up. Your writing is really good. I can't praise it enough because I'm a scumbag. I can only give five-star praise. Although few people have read it, it doesn't matter. I will support you from now on and check in every day [laughs][laughs]

How should I put it, this book is actually very good overall, but the plot in the middle feels weird and the connection is not so natural. Then the characteristics of the characters are also well described, and the sense of crazy criticism is "acceptable" haha~(¯▽¯~)[Chigua][Chigua]

It looks good and the ending is not too sloppy. I really like reading the author. I will read it again, three times and four times later... Because when I read a book, I really know the cover, title, characters, etc. If I don't like it, I won't read it. @086'S book is directly put on the bookshelf, and everyone can take a look at it. It's really beautiful [Admiration] And mainly I like this setting [Admiration]

I feel like Lin is like a kitten with fried hair and Shen is like a yandere [laughs][laughs]

The beginning and the process are more interesting. You want to start to redeem the heroine, but in the end, the heroine falls in love with you, and you fall in love with her. In the end, you can't help yourself, and you forcefully change the world. The overall performance is very superior. I feel that the writing is particularly powerful. I have a feeling of getting back together after a broken mirror. At the end, it feels like a broken mirror is reunited. The ending is also very sweet. The only thing I feel sad is that the system left. The system pulled him in to do an experiment. The system is also very good, and it is not a cold machine.

It's awesome. Although the plot is a bit cliche, I love watching it. Like Xiao Linzi, I look strong but are actually very fragile. Lin Chen99, you must always be happy [crying]

It's a very good redemption article. The sentence that impressed me the most is "What will happen if a kind-hearted person becomes a vicious female supporting character?" (It should be this sentence, I forgot the original sentence, but the meaning is similar), but the author's writing style can be improved. The book appears many times and emphasizes "She is most afraid of pain." Although this sentence is very important, but It will affect the perception a bit if it appears multiple times, and at the end of the article, the system changes to a matchmaker, and then marriage. Personally, it would be too fast, but this is my personal suggestion. There are many advantages, such as the plot is not dull, the characters are three-dimensional, the feelings are really delicate, the emotional lines are clear, etc. Personally, I love this book very much.

It's so beautiful, the heroine is in white and black, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh looks good, watch as many times as you like [crazy]

The king descended from the sky, and I made a sound on the ground