Simulating Immortality: A Chinese-Style Femme Fatale. Heaven, Come and Face Your Death

The story is really good, and the protagonist's strength in suppressing the battle is reasonable. He won't be so happy that his battle strength collapses every second, nor is he so overwhelmed that the plot becomes suffocating. However, this is only the early stage, so I can't say it too fast. Then the length control of the simulation chapters needs to be strengthened. The second simulation chapter is too long. It started from the tenth chapter to the latest chapter eighty and continues, without mentioning the actual situation at all. At the beginning of the third simulation, the main character was able to convey the experiences of old friends in the previous simulation to the people being simulated now. It was not my cup of tea at first, and then I didn't know what I was looking at, so I gave up.

I'm sorry, I saw that the writing here is really good. Although it is in the same genre as the previous author, he doesn't have the common problems of the previous author. You can get multiple entries in one simulation. Unlike the previous works which were very rigid, you can only get one entry in one simulation. Moreover, this simulation is based on the future, that is to say, it is something that has not happened yet. None of the events written by the author so far are abrupt and well written. I was fascinated by it. It's worth reading. I feel like it would be on the list even if I put it at the starting point. There's nothing wrong with the writing. Anyway, it's pretty smooth to read. Come on, author, I hope you won't collapse in the rest of the book, and I hope you can write about 1,000 chapters. [Think]

The writing is good and well written. Shennong has tried I can't understand the back part.

It's all about interests and calculations. There are no permanent enemies, only permanent interests. In the simulation, the protagonist may have one or two wives, but in reality, the protagonist is still stable and focuses on doing what he wants. The plot doesn't have too many flaws, just some minor flaws, but they're not harmful either.

It was smooth and natural to watch in one sitting. As long as I don't use big poison or insert big swords in the future, I will definitely get a rating of around 8.5 Or even above.

It's pretty good, I think it should be around 9 points. The whole article is relatively smooth, but there are weaknesses in Goldfinger, and the entry level classification is not very good. The blue epic is too strange, and there are too few entry levels, only about five levels, but the content is really good.

It feels good, because it is different from a bunch of other simulations where I don't always know how the author writes it. It feels like there are four different things. I am trying to suppress the combat power, but at the same time I want to write this book into a good novel. I can only say that I have finished it. This one is at least the same as the one simulation entry a year.

It's quite good to watch, maybe because the subject matter and content don't have a wide audience, but if you watch it patiently, you'll probably like it. There are some minor problems that are innocuous (for example, the female characters are relatively flat and stereotyped, and the main male characters are all pretty good), and some people watch it themselves. The cover and introduction of this book may be aimed at cultivating immortals, but this book is a bit biased towards the strategy of fighting for hegemony and cultivating immortals, which is not a pure cultivation of immortals. I can accept these. The strategies and plots are quite interesting. It is a mildly enjoyable article, not a brainless one. Come on, author.

The writing is really good, the author is not a newbie, he looks like an old Bidden at first glance. You can get into the trap, I'm reading chapter 41 now. There is not a single nonsense word in the whole text. From a novel perspective, characterization and plot description. Psychological description. The plot is also coherent and well written. This comment is limited to Chapter 41. I haven't finished reading the rest yet. [Working on draft] Chapter 104, so what is behind the door. Let's get here first.

The vocabulary is fluent and gorgeous, and the portrayal of the protagonist is clear and powerful. It is not a pile of words, but a few distinctive features that allow the imagination to deepen. At the same time, every simulation is of high quality. At the turning point of fate, different choices, different encounters, there is no cliché plot of killing people and seizing treasures, but letting people constantly see through the truth. A few strokes, the words are elegant and elegant