Infernal Prison: A Gap That Never Existed

So far it looks good overall. The protagonist is the bus's... Emm foreign aid. Although he doesn't take action most of the time, it can be seen from most of the plot that the protagonist is still trying to maintain his incompatible sympathy in that "hell". Whether it's letting former L Division employees join his firm and giving them dignity. Or else, you can see that the protagonist is flesh and blood and focuses on friendship. But the protagonist also has his own ambitions, goals and secrets. Act as a bystander or indirect counselor in the process of self-reconciliation for the bus group. Independent but not detached. The interaction with the people on the bus was interesting. I hope the author will update more Praise the author for his eloquence (^-^)

Judging from my reading progress so far, the author has grasped the urban setting and plot very well. At the same time, the protagonist is strong but not invincible, and can save some knives from the original work. In addition, the setting of the protagonist's abilities and side effects is really attractive to me. I personally think it will be a monthly book with great potential [Sending Hearts]

It finally tied up in two days. Even though I haven't read it for a long time, this book still attracted me. Zixu's fight scenes are always my favorite, hahaha, I get very excited every time I watch them. What I was thinking about when I saw the plot that revealed Zixu's past finally came to me. It was so attractive to me. Although it was uncomfortable to watch and I felt depressed. After all, even though I have seen many knives, the theme of a wanderer unable to return home always strikes me. Zixu, Zixu, can you still return to your hometown? Regarding Zixu's name, does it mean that he does not belong and should not exist in the city. He just came here by accident and is a traveler who has been looking for a way to return home (the word traveler seems a bit inappropriate?). Perhaps it is Jiang Mou's goal to remind himself that he does not belong here to prevent his memory from being completely confused and forgetting to return home? Putting it this way, I really want to see if there are memories in other worlds that are completely confused and forget that they want to return home, but vaguely feel that they must go back to a place, and then bravely venture into the city) But I really want Zixu to go home. Every time I see the author's words about going home, it hurts like a dull knife cutting my flesh, but like M, I still want to read more) In short, why does this book only have a score of 6.7? The monthly calculation is too cold. It is obvious that Zixu and the sinners get along very well, and Zixu's goals are also very clear. Why does it only have this score🥺 Suddenly I discovered that Jiang Mou was the same as what Zixu in Rhode Island said to Dante before. "I don't know what Zixu in this world thinks, but I don't want you to associate this surname with my current name..." "If you insist on using this surname, you can call me... Jiang..." Jiang Mou, Jiang Mou. Got in touch! Intentionally or unintentionally? Zixu still secretly told his real name, right? (Start guessing🤨)

The writing is still very good, especially in the middle and later stages, but it looks a bit stretched in the early stages, but it gets much better later on) Then, there are a few poisonous points in the writing, but they are basically gone in the later stage. However, sometimes some plots will be skipped, which may seem a bit strange to those who have not seen the original plot. Overall, the writing is still great~ [laughing] Of course, it can also be seen that the author really put a lot of emotion and thought into it. I hope I can bring you some success. No matter what, try your best and tomorrow will be better~ [Blow kiss]

A+! Great, this issue actually has a protagonist with a brain! We are saved! Great, she is actually a tsundere! We are saved! Very good! The author is so diligent, we are saved! Praise you ya gua gua gua

⚡⚡Xū⚡⚡Xū⚡⚡Xū⚡ Great book 😋! ! Whether it's the interaction with Thirteen Silly or the fierce fight, it's so exciting! They're all bookmarked, you know? Don't underestimate this book! Unlike most novels, it may not be that outstanding, and may be a bit confusing in places (in fact, the author doesn't want to copy and paste, but just wants to code for fun). This kind of retention of the original plot may seem a bit naive, but it can be seen that the author really pays attention to the interaction between the protagonist and everyone, which is very fun and natural. I like it. The writing style has a light feel. The author is very good at writing about melancholy. I went back and read it a few times about the alienation and melancholy plot and description in the early stage. I like it very much! When I watched it for the first time, I just recalled the plot in school until the end of five days in jail. I don't know if it seems a bit exaggerated to you, haha, but it's really true! The author also said that there will be an original plot for the protagonist, recycling foreshadowing and so on, so I'm looking forward to it. Maybe it's not as good as Younuo's, xixi. What it lacks is more original plots and excitement, well, but I must say that these two are my favorite monthly books to read. Are you updating every day because you are too lazy to update? Haji, you guy? Ps: The duration I have is not the real duration. Many of them were watched without logging in or on another device. Pps: Author, I didn't copy, I didn't use AI, I didn't use voice, I just typed it by hand, please make me happy [punch out]

The Prison Bus fanfic is relatively original. Although no new stories and plots were created. Instead, follow the main thread. But for someone who wants to read fanfiction, this is not a drawback. And the author is quite talented in telling stories. The story is clear and crisp. What is the protagonist group going to do? Why do you do this? It's explained clearly in one sentence, very comfortable and smooth to watch. And there are some other chapters. Very interesting too

Although the protagonist is like a foreign aid to the protagonist group, I feel that the author's description is a bit too little involved. You know, there is no difference between you and without you. And in Mama's battle, I feel that the protagonist can show his strength. Of course, it is still the author. I like the author's writing style. If the subsequent battles are more exciting, or the protagonist takes more actions, change it to five stars. Although the author is talking about the original scene of the protagonist's performance, I feel that the most suitable cushion is actually the middle finger brother. However, the author writes that at this time, in fact, we are faced with this kind of group, and then it is weak at the beginning, and then gradually warms up to this kind of character. An uncomfortable shortcoming is It's because the original work already has a rough description of the characters we are familiar with, and now we have to rely on the author to have a lot of detailed psychological descriptions of the characters he created, and the significance of this battle is actually very important. Little brother, middle finger, this wave, if Lao Deng didn't come to save it, this wave would really be a disaster. The car overturned. Looking at the previous pictures, these are of great significance. They are given by the official. The current situation of the car overturning without anyone to save the situation can only be seen in the author's later description, because there are actually not many situations in which no action is necessary. Xiaofu and the others don't actually have this one, and then they have to go to the drinking fountain. There was a wave, and then there was Lei Heng, and the author fell into a very embarrassing situation. The author felt that the protagonist was integrating a little too quickly. In fact, it was not that fast, because looking at the entire Prison Bus, the pace is actually a bit slow. Of course, this is purely my own feeling. Please forgive me.

Nice! ! ! ! Author, you must continue to write more! ! ! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

I really like this feeling of being an expert hermit