Dark Lord? No, Please Call Me the Pokemon League Champion

You don't have to press it, hang it or don't open it, it's great when you open it. The invincible half-screen flow is also good. The values ​​are all according to the illustrated book, and you can also move sideways when placed in the mezong.

Beautiful! Relatively speaking, the pace is slow and relaxed, but that's what I like. There is no particularly deliberately pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot (I really don't want to watch this, it's so ugly [crying]), and there is no pornographic or other descriptions of Pokémon that look more humanoid. (I have only seen it before,,, and there are several books,, I am really thunderous, I can only say what do people who are in love with cute Pokémon want to do..., The introduction of Pokémon into this world is not too rigid or excessive, some professors will disagree, it is quite normal, I have read a lot before, and it seems that they immediately accept a certain thing, which is very strange (anyway, people are good, Pokémon is good🥰🥰🥰Good luck, author) By the way, I feel that this AI cover is really not as good-looking as the original cover... (The protagonist on the cover looks like a woman (..*) (Then, can the author give a description of the protagonist? I forgot whether it is in the book and I am too lazy to look through it. I want to try to draw it... Okay, although I may not draw it very well (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The pace is slow, and the focus is more on the integration of Pokémon and the world. The protagonist can be seen to be a very responsible person. Although his original purpose is to spread Pokémon, what cannot be refuted is that he sincerely treats Pokémon and the students of Hogwarts, and sincerely promotes equality among the four houses. It has great potential, come on

Honestly, it's great. If I insist on no cp in the end, I think it is very likely that I will become the next magic text professor, but I am a little worried that I will suddenly be paired with Hermione or other witches. The two IPs are integrated very well. The author of the bug that everyone is afraid of must have planned it before starting the book. In the end, there can be an ending where the magical world and the Muggle world coexist peacefully. The battles are also well written, with the kind of feeling that makes people nervous about the outcome. Also, is it worthy of being a fusion of Japanese IP? Even Filch can be so good (laughs) I'm very happy that the author can see that the little characters in HP, whether it's Quirrell, Filch or others, can have different opinions. The main reason is that Rowling didn't describe it much, so it's not OOC by any means. It's just a personal setting. However, I'm surprised that Quirrell is described as a jealous, proud, and pretty good magic character. This is something I haven't seen before. Last wish: no censorship, no harem, no ambiguity, pure teacher-student love and friendship

It looks good, except for a few flaws. My main concern now is the improvement of the rules, about the elves, about the series of measures surrounding them, the training house, and the Pokémon hospital. They need to learn CDs as they grow, or learn the skills by themselves, and then their bodies need to be carefully cultivated as they grow, otherwise they will definitely be worse in the future, and they will need professional treatment if they are injured. What's more, the main problem is their treatment and psychological problems. Some Pokémon will receive bad treatment due to their special characteristics. I don't like the ones that are not very careful. I hope they can be improved. Those people should be educated and can only have Pokémon again until they truly repent. He cannot simply hurt him because of personal prejudice. He does not take the will and life of Pokémon seriously at all. It is very bad! ! ! ! They are just children now, and they don't have any thinking skills. If they were adults, they might treat this kind of thing more viciously. Of course, I don't mean that children are not vicious, but they are not that smart.

It's interesting to see a fanfic that combines Harry Potter and Pokémon for the first time. The plot is ups and downs but not far-fetched, and the writing style gave me a light feeling. Although it is not very emotionally arousing, I have a strong desire to continue. The description of the Iron Triangle is great, and there is not a lot of focus on the plot. Instead, there is a feeling that the relationship between them is slowly getting better over time. In addition, Draco was also added to the Iron Triangle, transforming the incompatibility in the original plot into a close-enemy relationship. The style of painting gradually shifted towards Pokémon, but such a friendly and harmonious plot is the embodiment of the combination of Harry Potter and Pokémon. Regarding Pokémon, the description of bonds is not very obvious. Many places emphasize "transaction" or "giving" rather than "bonds." I like Harry Potter very much and I also like Pokémon. I personally think that establishing bonds between wizards and Pokémon is more important and more appropriate than direct buying and selling. As for the protagonist, John's image is very similar to the movie version of Newt. They are both juvenile-like images. This makes people feel that the protagonist should be Newt's grandson and an expert on magical animals in the magical world rather than a time-traveler who inexplicably allows readers to enter. I think this is particularly good. In addition, John always calls Newt "Grandpa" in the book, and the same is also said in other plots. This may seem a bit strange. It is enough to mention it once or twice to let readers know that Newt is John's second grandfather. It is actually not a big problem to call Newt "Grandpa" when Newt's brother is not present, and it will be more comfortable to watch. Of course, this is just a small suggestion. The above are just my personal feelings. The specific experience varies from person to person. Call me Sima.

It's quite interesting. To be honest, the idea is very good. In order to integrate Pokémon and HP, in order to reasonably make them appear as native creatures, the author found the breakthrough point from Scamander in Fantastic Beasts. Everything is in the Ganges. What we are doing now is to expand the influence of Pokémon and prepare for the birth of other mythical beasts. The mythical beasts here should actually belong to the world law mimesis, but the protagonist is already invincible. Mew, Mewtwo and Ho-oh have been born and can walk sideways (Suicune:?) [Laughing] And with magic, the skills and props in the Pokémon world are instantly reasonable [Like] But I am still in France. I don't know when I can write about the entire magical world and the Muggle world. By the way, this is a slow-growing game. So far, there is no show-off and slap-in-the-face scenes, so it is similar to the cultivation system (mainly because of the sense of accomplishment). I've been writing about Hogwarts for a while now, so it's estimated that the plot will be fully developed when it's around 300,000 words [Chigua]

It's okay so far, and the description can still be expanded in some places. As long as you don't do some unintelligible plot later, it will be fine. I suggest you change the introduction, otherwise others will think you are pretending to be a slap in the face.

Full marks! ! ! ! I really like the combination of Pokémon and HP. Deok-ha's relationship in this book is similar to Ji-moo, which I also like. Come on, author!

This book is still very good, but I personally don't like it very much. What I thought was more selfish was that the protagonist was alone with his Pokémon all the time, which was similar to pretending to be slapped in the face. I had read too much shit before, and a small part of it was about dividing strength and the like. The main reason was the confused old lamp. Beating him was not enough to calm him down. The five king numbers were divided into four bronze numbers and one king number. Because of this at first, I was so angry. Then I read the novel. When I saw this kind of dividing strength and things, I felt an inexplicable disgust. There are not many novels about Harry Potter and Pokémon, and I should say that there are not many Pokémon that I recommend here. To sum it up, the novel is well written, and if it is a slow-burning novel, you can add it to your bookshelf and read it slowly.