Harry Potter: Slytherin's Shining Star

I like all the novels that hate Lily and the Marauders. I hate them more than any other character, even Voldemort, Snape's father, but there are too few novels that dislike them.

Oh, Merlin's pink lace stockings. [Smile][smile][smile][smile], Hostess: My father doesn't have that kind of thing [crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy]

Very good, love all the articles that are unfriendly to predators! ! ! Although this article is not friendly to predators, it does not deliberately criticize them. . . The heroine has a strong background and strength, and has changed a lot within the allowed range. A fair and just Hogwarts can change the lives of many people. The butterfly wings flap, and the ending becomes completely different. . . Is it because the second half of the plot is poorly written? The plot feels too big and the ending is too hasty. There are some small details that can be adjusted, but overall it is excellent.

It's really beautiful. I hope the author will write more.

The plot is okay, but the lack of quotation marks made me uncomfortable [face covering]

I thought it was okay when I first read it, but it was inconvenient to speak without "". I hope it can be improved.

Not bad, but there is also a part of Tomb Raider Notes interspersed at the end, which is a bit of a spoof [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering]

Good looking, Severus had a just school life

It's really beautiful, believe me [blowing kiss]

Not bad, recommend it!