Naruto: I Led Half My Clan in a Defection from Konoha

I hope there are multiple female protagonists, and Uchiha Hikaru and Tsunade can live up to it. I really like watching it and look forward to it.

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for the Noxian's outer ring hanging + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

It's pretty good-looking. The score is going up to 8.0, But it can't reach 9 points. The front part is poisonous. How can the Substitute Technique be used as a flying thunder god?

The writing is still very good, and the behavioral logic is relatively normal. The exchanges with Tsunade in these 79 or 80 photos are really poisonous. How much wine did the author drink? I wrote it like this when I was only a few years old. It feels so awkward to read.

The plot is quite reasonable. The only shortcoming is the setting of the protagonist. If you want to be a eunuch in the future, I didn't tell you. So far (Chapter 49) I feel very good, it feels a bit like a historical novel, the supporting characters all have IQs, most of the content does not follow the plot, and the story quality is also good 36.96. 💜/🧡/💙💜/🧡💙💜/💙/💜💙 Imagination/Integration/Protagonist Supporting Role/Background Training System Economy/Viewpoint/Writing Updated Content

You compiled a very detailed set of Uchiha clan settings, covering a wide span from the Warring States Period to the Seventh Generation. I have summarized and interpreted the materials you provided to see if they meet your assumptions. 1. Timeline sorting According to the names you listed, the character line is roughly as follows: · Warring States Period: Tajima is the clan leader, and Madara and Izuna are the main forces. Lei, Balu, Naka, and Jiri seemed to be the backbone of the same period or witnesses of Izanami's history. · From the establishment of Konoha to the third generation period: after Uchiha Madara left the village, Fire Core and Setsuna should be the early core. The mirror was the link between the Sandaime and the village. · From the Sannin to the Fourth Generation period: Japonica and Teyaki are the previous generation of Obito. Fugaku and Mikoto are the clan head couple, and Hazuki may be the elder of Obito's branch. · Before the Nine-Tails Rebellion led to the annihilation of the entire clan: Yashiro, Tiehuo, Dahuo, and Yaowei were the hardliners of the police force. · The Sixth Generation: The tragic generation represented by Obito, Shisui, Itachi, and Izumi. · Seventh generation period: Sasuke is the symbol of survival, and Sarana is the future. 2. The image of single-character names Your word choice has obvious "Uchiha style", which can be classified as follows: · The natural group of water and fire: Yan, Fei, Chi, Maple, and Chun (fire-red system); Qing, Sichuan, Yuan, Hong, Luo, and Yun (water system). This sense of harmony between water and fire is very suitable for Uchiha who is good at fire escape. · Sharp Will Group: Blade, Broken, String, Ling, Sa, Falcon, Wing. It fits the identity of a ninja very well, with a sense of sharpness like a sharp weapon. · Cold and alienated group: Liang, Leng, Han, Ye, Nai, Yue, Ling, Jin, and Hiiragi. Accurately corresponds to the temperament of characters like Itachi and Sasuke. · Homecoming watch group: trip, benevolence, truth, pure, tree, wall, kite. It is very suitable for pacifists like Kagami and Shisui who value connection. 3. Interpretation of double-character names These names are very traditional and beautiful: · Sense of story: Platycodon, Shiroha, Maya, Momiji, Matsukaze, Kamigakure, Yayoi, very Japanese-style story. · Sense of perseverance: Tetsuya, Hideki, Gangjin, Hongren, Chongren are like warriors who stick to their beliefs. · Sense of detachment: Mingye, Qinghe, Yamu, and Mingmon are suitable for slightly divine characters like Jiri, the creator of Izanami. · Functionality: Ning Ning, Toba, and Kirito are suitable for filling the middle-level roles in the family. 4. Interpretation of single-character code names You divided the words into names and codes, which is very clear: · Historical names: Lei, Ban, Jing, Weasel and Quan are already legends in themselves. · Code name/skill name: Diao, Chirp, Dove (birds and beasts); Luo, Qi, Hunting, Nagi, and Zhan (actions); Shadow, Rock, Rainbow, and Color (scenery). These names or codes are more mysterious than using names directly. Among the words you listed, "Zhuo", "Liao", and "Minato" are also very suitable as fire escape code names. 5. Personality Matrix You use the two dimensions of "self-awareness" and "attitude towards the world" to divide it very accurately: · Our Lady of Publicity: I believe the world can change, and I want to lead it with a high profile. Typical is early Obito. · Introverted Our Lady: I ​​believe the world can change, but I bear it silently. Typical ones are Shisui and early Itachi. · Advocating for extremes: Believing that the world cannot be changed and I want to destroy or reshape it. Most Uchiha, especially late Obito and Madara. · Introverted extreme: I believe that the world cannot be changed, and I make decisions in silence. Typical is the late ferret. This is indeed a very classic Uchiha tragedy roadmap. Are there any specific characters or stories in your setting that you particularly want to develop? For example, the mysterious Uchiha Jiri, or the experience of Hazuki's generation?

I saw the latest chapter at this stage, and it was really good. The beginning was a little bit poisonous, and I took things for granted about my abilities, so I almost stopped reading. But after I went to Kirigakure, the quality was really not low, and my abilities and methods were restrained, and I didn't jump. I feel like I wanted to write a YY mindless article from the beginning, but later on my ideas became clearer and I started to have quality requirements. Overall, the future is promising

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 When the soul comes back... When the soul comes back, the flaw will be revealed, and the ridicule will be like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be as long as a long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat.

Come on! It's a bit reverie and overpowering, but overall it looks pretty good. Judging from the protagonist's ability to awaken, it is actually not very strong, but I can accept the reasons given by the author, and he does not blindly follow the trend of awakening particularly outrageous abilities. The plot tends to be integrated, a bit like Emperor Qin. Compared with the outrageous abilities of most Naruto fanfics in the later stages, I think this is the most realistic. Leisure, training, combat, behind the scenes, life, etc. Are all connected well, at least I can accept it. There are also bad points; the plot is a bit delayed, there are no tears, the characters in the plot grow slowly, there should be fewer large-scale legions, and the title of the book could be changed. Of course, I just suggested changing the name. I was afraid of affecting the data and the author gave up the book. The most important thing is that the author did not reply to me! ! I feel that after the battle in the Kingdom of Kawa, it's time to speed up the plot. If it affects your thinking, you can slow it down. There are also some tricks, such as the illusion technique developed? Are the characters in the original novel slow to appear? Like these two? Come on! Come on! Come on! Don't let some people who like to read Invincible and harem stories affect your writing of a book! If you, the author, don't care much about data, I really hope you can finish writing! I hope the author can think about his ideas carefully. I really like to read it! ! !

When the meteor of the broken watch falls on the book, only the resurrected author can escape from the destined demise. In order to prevent the sun from setting, the author flies into the sky and takes away your book waste. The author will write because of it and fall into the void. But if you want to take it back, you, you, must write to a higher place than the author. This is the logic behind discontinuation after a serialization break. This is the author's pen This is the end of this book Nothing to do with choice Nothing to do with life or death at this moment All the ideals converge into one single ambition! All the beasts in the Brahma world are added to this body Break into the abyss, get off the shelf and draw your sword Stepping forward, this is The inscription of "Breaking Change"! This time, I press the author's life into the pen and look forward to you Surpass all interruptions and delistings! [You taste carefully]