In Marvel, I Am the King of Dual Cultivation

The tone at the beginning of the story is a bit depressing. The golden finger of the protagonist is not very important, and due to the background of the world, the protagonist has always been in a relatively tense environment. The setbacks encountered are relatively dense and there are no major excitement points, which makes it feel a bit unenjoyable. You can try to lengthen the protagonist's crisis plot, and set up more strong positive feedback, and the viewing experience may be better. At present, it seems that the author's writing style is acceptable, but the plot setting and rhythm control are still lacking. Come on.

Let me talk about the conclusion first. I gave 0.5 More than 3.5 Because I hope the author will publish a book with Spider-Gwen as the heroine. This is definitely a buried Spider-Man fanfic. What a pity. I rarely use the author to ruin a good thing to describe the creativity of a book. Personally, I suggest you start reading from the second half of Chapter 26. The more than 60 chapters I have read so far are written from the edge of the Spider-Verse, breaking into the major events of the Spider-Verse and then moving to the Spider-Man Parallel Universe. It is very smooth and the author is very ambitious. I want to reasonably achieve a perfect ending in each story. There is also a sweet part in interacting with Spider-Gwen. If I keep it up, I can't get a 4 or even 4.5 Article out of a chapter list where Spider-Gwen is the heroine.

The writing is pretty good. If you can read it on Tomato, it's considered a good novel [face covering] But I don't know if it's a matter of deletion. Many plots feel inconsistent. For example, how did the female Deadpool forgive the protagonist? How did you end up living in Gwen's house in the second world?

Just read the part about the female Deadpool. It is indeed a very good book and the story is well written. It's just that I didn't like it very much and lost my memory the second time. I read the author's reply under other people's comments and said it was similar to pseudo-homosexuality. I'm not sure...

Not to my taste, but it should be fine for some people who like Deadpool

After a cursory look, it's okay.

The author is very suitable for writing emotional dramas

Track subdivision, very novel

I really like watching the scene with the female Deadpool (∀)

I really want to give it five stars, but five stars seems to be a bad thing? I really like the love between the protagonist and the female Deadpool [shy][shy][shy]

A good book, with its own ideas and a compact plot

It looks good, but then it turns into a Spider-Man brawl.

I really enjoyed watching it, but I still prefer the female Deadpool plot, but the female Deadpool is too short.