
Harry Potter: The Snarky One Won't Become Everyone's Favorite
HP:吐槽役不会成为万人迷
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Please recommend a book.
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It's pretty cool, why hasn't anyone seen it? Too new? So let me explain briefly. ①Thousands of people are currently single arrows. Emotional processing is not abrupt, goes from shallow to deep, and is reasonable. I like it😋 ②The protagonist is very talented, but the protagonist doesn't like to stand out. He is a capable complainer (the kind who has been beaten up by society and has a bit of a social animal feel). How cute! ! ③The plot is logical, not embarrassing, not abrupt, and fits the character. And it's age-appropriate! ! ! (What?) Looking forward to the follow-up development, I will recommend the book
Good looking ones, Harry, Draco, Gemini, Cedric, Theodore, and a Ravenclaw The second editor should change the rating, what should I say? Personally, I liked the heroine's character very much at the beginning. She had a light but under control feeling. But the problem was that the emotional line was not handled very well. The heroine wanted to study the Patronus Charm, so she decided to fall in love, and then got together with Gemini. So far it was okay, but then, Harry acted coquettishly, and agreed to be with Harry again, and she didn't tell Gemini that she was with Harry. How should I put it, it would be good if everyone knew each other openly and competed for favor together, but now I already have a boyfriend, but I am with someone else in private. Maybe the subject of heartthrobs is not easy to write about. If everyone openly and directly opens up a harem, that is also possible, or write an if line. Now it feels like the heroine is very casual, but I don't feel that she likes Harry or the Geminis much, but she agrees to them as soon as they ask, and then goes to kiss them. [Face covering] The main reason is that we can't see the psychological and emotional changes of the heroine. There is a feeling that you don't like him, but you kiss him for the sake of the plot. It feels very awkward. (I'm just expressing my personal opinion objectively. The heroine's character development was pretty good at the beginning)
So far, this is the best HP heartthrob story I have ever read. Although the relationship between the parent generation is rather abrupt and I don't like it very much, the child era is well written. The Geminis are the first batch to be served. My God, this sandwich biscuit is so well written. Everyone is really fighting for it and using all their means. The heroine is also very charming. She is not the kind of "delicate, soft and cute kitten", but a cold-faced kitten with strength, wisdom and personality. It's great! ! !
The heroine's comments are mostly cute. The writing is pretty good. Draco seems a bit ooc to me. After all, the heroine is a Muggle wizard, but Draco had feelings for the heroine from the beginning. Everything else is OK. The book is quite nice. Although the heroine has been following the main storyline with Harry and the three of them, the writing is very natural and does not feel like what the heroine does is abrupt. (There are no changes to the plot, they all follow the original plot) The fake romance with Blaise was very sloppy, but luckily it wasn't much. All in all, it has its flaws but is worth watching. The writing is pretty good. Another point is that the introduction said that Lu Tang would not be removed, but in the end, it was added again... On March 6, it was said that Lu Ping would be added, but the introduction was still not changed. I don't mind that Lu Ping is also one of the male protagonists, but I don't dare to criticize the female protagonist and him until I know I want to tear down Lu Tang. There are Harry, Gemini, Draco, Theodore, Sirius, Remus, and Diary Soup. (That should be all) I can still understand Sirius' emotional line. Lupine is portrayed in such a way that I think he looks like a wretched uncle. (Lupine's feelings changed too quickly, so we just saved him, right? But it's okay if everything is over.) It's a good fight with Riddle. I really like the cat sculptures hhhh. And Ced, I forgot to mention it and didn't think of it for a moment.
It's very delicious. The heroine completely hit my strike zone. She is calm and detached as an adult but not indifferent. She is old so she only reacts to her own preferences. The character is not OOC and the writing is good. I will follow the teacher. I quite like the description of the reaction of the male guest after being favored by the female protagonist. After watching it continuously, it is not too abrupt. It is an increasing favor. He loves to knock and is very all-in. I am also attracted by it. I was obviously attracted by the setting of complaining about stars in the beginning. I like it very much. The reaction of the male guest is also in line with his age. Everyone knows his emotions, which makes people look forward to the changes and growth after increasing age.
A very good book. It is my favorite among the hp heartthrob series. The character of the protagonist is diverse and not flat at all. I like her character very much, and each character has its own unique charm. The author has a particularly good grasp of the background of the characters. The plot is smooth and there are no abrupt twists. They are all reasonable [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]
Emm is good-looking. The first part was quite enjoyable. He is the coldest and cutest one in his age. He is also quite comfortable getting along with some of the male guests. It is not very inconsistent. But after about 120 chapters, it feels a bit tiring? Harry's white and black make me feel a little em and it will bother Elle. I happen to be a bit of a female protagonist, so it may be a bit annoying to watch. In fact, I am a Seder. I hope that the main text does not have cp. I can open one for each extra chapter. If there is, I will run away first. But overall, this book is still good to read (although I didn't read the back part), and it's something I'll read and play in my spare time.
Very nice! ! I've seen Chapter 138. Alberta is not the kind of person who complains a lot. She is a cold-faced and cute girl with dark circles under her eyes. Although others always say that the heroine Xianyu loves to sleep, the heroine in the author's novel is not like this. Aier is a person who loves to learn, explore, experiment and is very careful. She is rooted in warm places and libraries. She learns things she doesn't know and practices things she is not proficient in. She is a really good character! The heroine is really a girl who is always learning and working hard and grasps the key points very well! After reading it twice, it still looks good (up to Chapter 283) Alberta really has a strong flavor of the year. She has complete control and is really strong. Even if she has all O's, she also has private tutoring. The emotional lines are also very delicious, the twins sticking out from the darkness, the direct and dark Harry, the coveted but sensitive senior group, the clingy roommates, etc. It's so beautiful.
I saw a complaint about the heroine, and thought it was similar to the one in Gintama, but there weren't many complaints, just normal. However, I like the character of the heroine very much, maybe because she is at least 40+ before and after time travel, so she is very stable, decisive in doing things, and the whole person is very reliable. I quite like this kind of character, and she is also a heartthrob. I don't know who else will follow, but I am looking forward to it anyway.
It's a very interesting book. It's fun to think that the heroine originally wanted to make a fortune when the Soviet Union collapsed, but she became a wizard and had to give up this idea.