Harry Potter: The Genie Doesn’t Do Romance

Advantages + explanation of what everyone calls demining (my own understanding) Not bad. I have read the latest chapter now. I think the writing is good and the added plots are not too abrupt. I like this kind of slow process. Regarding the characterization of the original characters, I think it is very delicate, especially the part about Harry. I think except for Draco, who is a little OOC, the rest are pretty good. Regarding the grievances, it was indeed very grievous in the past, especially the family of Aunt Dudley. In it, Dudley bullied the heroine, and the heroine did not resist. I remember there was a plot where Harry had a birthday. The heroine gave Harry a rabbit made of dog tail and was thrown into the fire by the aunt's family. It can be seen that the heroine has an inhuman feeling, and it is very light. She directly stretched her hand into the fire. I saw the latest chapter, when the first grade was not over. The daily life in school, especially the heroine beating Draco. And the part where you refute Pansy is not aggrieved anymore. Regarding the heroine mentioned in the comment section as a magic lamp, why is it so weak? But it was mentioned in the previous chapter that the heroine has a magical disorder and changes from an adult to a child. I think she has changed from an adult to a child and her mind has also changed. Because from the front, the heroine becomes impatient and indifferent when she becomes a fairy in order to fulfill her wish. So I think it is a bit arrogant. When Harry made the wish of his friend, the heroine turned into a child. From the later chapters, it can be seen that the heroine is obviously more lively, frustrated and compassionate. Etc. The feeling of being alive is very strong I think it was foreshadowed because the heroine in the middle childhood dreamed of the heroine in the adult stage and persuaded the heroine in childhood to let Harry make a wish. And I felt very disconnected about Harry's Mirror of Erised. The day before, I was trying to trick Harry into making a wish, but on the second day, he was back to normal again. And actually I have a curious point, and I am thinking about how the author will arrange for Harry to make two wishes, and at which nodes they will appear. Will the heroine change the target after discovering that Harry only makes one wish, and will not grant the remaining two wishes, or will it only be possible for Harry to fulfill his wish and become an elf?

The front is good, but the main thing is whether the protagonist can become stronger. I feel that the main character has no big role 🤦

Looks good! Very well written, with detailed descriptions of those scenes! I suspect there are only two wishes left, one is to destroy Voldemort, and the other is to set the heroine free? Or resurrecting a person?

[Admiration] Needless to say, everyone understands.

It can have a fairy tale feel, and the plot so far is pretty good and not draggy.

Author: Your writing is really good 😳

It looks good, don't stop updating it.

Nice! It's just that it's too hard to wait for serialization 😢

From the introduction, I knew it was unusual.

It feels so sweet and pretty