Aotu World: The Chessboard

I tied it in one breath, so cool. The teacher is so strong. No character is a background. Who knows the feeling of everyone having brains? This is called a group portrait. I finally saw the comfortable plot of Thunder King (every character and part written by the teacher is very good, I just cited one to express my feelings). It can be said that I have got rid of the diode shape. The two-dimensional dimension cannot always be so flat. Damn it. This work is really excellent. Forgive me for my lack of language and I don't know how to praise it, but it's really, really great. It really makes people see that every character has their own place (everyone is seriously walking on their own path). Come on, teacher O(≧▽≦)O

Don't be fooled by the book reviews. The plot of this book is smooth and not sloppy at all. It is a follow-up to the previous seasons of Bump. The writing is very good, the plot concept is excellent, there is a lot of research, and the development direction and scene changes are smooth. The personalities of the characters are vividly portrayed. For example, Rey's personal relationship turns to the inviolability of the sovereignty of his family and country. Paius starts from contempt for mortals, and then becomes emotionally confused and hates the actions of the gods as the plot reveals, and then uses his brain (enlightened.? Although his personality is still a bit violent.. In short, the plot is good, don't read it! Highly recommended by old fans of the concave and convex section! [OK]

I Found a Treasure, it's beautiful (♥∀♥), the plot is tight, and the characters are well grasped, especially Xander's |•'-'•) ✧, come on✊The author will always support you♡⊂ Super nice recommendation, please make it popular, please please [Praying] ੭ ˙ᗜ˙ )੭

I saw the teacher's post on Old Ford, and when I came here 🍅 I found that there are more than a hundred chapters, and the plot is smooth and not laggy or OOC... What a terrifying cooking power, Goddess, it's great to have you in this circle now! Worship!

I am Feng Feng. I must give the teacher a good review. This article is definitely the second most and most personal article in my six-year career. The key is that it is still a long one. It made me so happy to read it. You know, everyone must click on this article immediately to give the teacher a good review!

The author's imagination is very rich, the plot is also wonderful, the story is very reasonable, and the characters are very close to the original setting. I especially like the Thunder King chapter. The spirit of Thunder King who rises up to resist and no longer is the slave of the God's envoy is really like the Thunder King I imagined. This is what Thunder King should be like. The author's literary talent is very good, and the character creation is also very good. In the original work, I was looking forward to Camille being recognized by the King of Thunder, and Amy being able to get rid of the title of "devil" and be recognized and respected. In this work, I saw Camille being respected and cared for by Rey, and I saw Amy apologized and protected by the people who bullied him when he was a child. I was really moved. I really hope that there will be a new season of Alto-convex World, but I feel that Alto-convex World is not as good as it used to be. Although I am out of touch now, I still have feelings and tears when I see this fan work written by the teacher. I like the author's works very much. I hope the author will get better and better. Come on! I will always follow the author DaDi✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

Overall, the author's writing style is really superb. The words are particularly powerful and the character's personality, words and deeds are well grasped, and the plot is reasonable. However, I feel that the progress of the plot is a bit slow in the later period. Many dialogues and plots actually express the same meaning. There is no need to emphasize it back and forth. I think it is still necessary to grasp the details appropriately.

This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. The plot is very novel and tight, the logic is very clear, and the characters are very three-dimensional. I particularly like the characters in it, and I think there are relatively few OOCs. It is really interesting. If you are interested, you can check it out.

Since I don't have time to read it, I took a look and found that there is almost no OOC. It can be regarded as a relatively high-level work in fanfiction, especially the continuation of the fifth season. I was looking forward to it for two years but did not wait for the fifth season. The new version only has two episodes. I am very happy to see this. I am optimistic about you.

It's very good-looking. I tied it in two days. The language is clear and logical, and the plot is not laggy. In addition to the original plot, there are also many stories of small characters. I was very moved by it (´••`).