Livestreaming Folk Customs, Every Call-In Is a Paranormal Tale

Let's give it four points for now Reason: As far as what I have read so far in chapters 40 and 50, the protagonist encountered two accidents. The first accident happened because he had no experience and did not expect that someone would trouble him, which led to a sneak attack. It can be understood that the first time he encountered it, he had insufficient equipment and insufficient experience. However, when he was searching for a grave for the second time and encountered a red and white collision, he still did not learn from the experience of the first sneak attack. He went into battle naked and did not have any talisman papers that should be prepared (either attack talisman papers or defensive talisman papers. Even the talisman papers were drawn on the spot). This was when he was a child. When the protagonist's grandfather asked him to practice drawing talisman, he failed several times before he succeeded in getting a talisman paper. I know it may be to show that the situation was urgent at that time, but the situation was urgent at that time, couldn't I prepare to draw the talisman paper before departure? Not many, at least a few emergency talisman papers should be prepared. [Stare][Stare][Stare]

The beginning and the rest of the story are well written, but the part where I went home and got involved with the association was not so good. You can write some plots that help netizens solve difficult problems, but don't go too far and start a live broadcast. The characters in the later stages can also be more mature and stable. After all, I have experienced so much. Come on, a little suggestion [smile]

The pacing is great and the writing is also good. The only problem is 1. The protagonist's temperament is unstable. He matures at one moment and escapes from the second phase at another. 2. Minor plot roles receive little feedback

The beginning really gave me the feeling of reading folklore novels earlier. Returning to my hometown brought me back to reality. It's a pity.

Not bad, very good, very interesting, keep up the good work You still give me a thumbs up, hurry up and write a book.

The writing style is logically clear, the three views are correct, and it is well-founded. It can be read as a "metaphysics" article. It is excellent.

In fact, I think it's well written. The author cares too much about what the outside world thinks. I watched it with gusto from beginning to end. Come on, author, don't belittle yourself

A little wobbly but the content is okay

It looks good, keep up the good work💪

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