Immortal Martial: Invincible from the Dragon-Tiger Tendon-Transforming Sutra

The story is well written, but it is too secular and lacks fairy flavor. I personally don't agree with the author's secular principles and logic, but it's not embarrassing. It's a good story and worth reading. I suggest the author simplify the settlement process of the plug-in. It is too complicated. Writing such a long paragraph is like an eight-part essay, which makes it a headache to read.

Let me talk about my senses. I was a little discouraged from reading the first chapter and the second chapter because I couldn't understand it and the writing by Goldfinger was a bit complicated. But the next few chapters retained me, and I read to the end. The writing is good, and it can be regarded as an invincible novel. The protagonist's experiences and origins are well written. The author should keep up the good work and don't let it suck. I believe the rating will go up. It's a good novel. Please write less about folk things in the future, otherwise it will really become a nanny article.

The best of the invincible novels. Some of the invincible protagonists follow the same routine after becoming invincible. The author of this book combines the invincibility of the protagonist with the construction of a feudal society and the realization of equality for all. He also avenges any grudges in the next chapter, which makes people read without skipping a chapter. Five-star praise

The author has a profound knowledge of writing. This book is a rare good article. The protagonist uses modern thinking to gradually unblock his feelings for his family members and kill decisively. The story is told smoothly and the plot is cleverly constructed. Five stars are given to him. I hope the author will be more diligent. .

Real fairy grass, revenge on the spot, the author is very strong in writing, don't be fooled by those little black comments, the core of this book is the word "refreshing", and the pace is not sluggish at all If I didn't say anything, it would be hard to say what follows.

It's a bit of a mess, but the characters are well drawn, and the family's demeanor and conduct are better than most novels. Personally think it deserves five stars

There is a poisonous point in Chapter 27 (Personally, I feel that I put my sister in the yard and went out to handle the case myself. I said that my sister is the most important, but in the end, I entrusted my safety to a few ordinary servants, under the premise that I have offended the new county magistrate) - (Personal argument: The background is in troubled times, the protagonist is a time traveler and has martial arts, and may not have a good impression of the locals, except for his sister, in a world of high martial arts, the protagonist knows his identity as the son of a noble family) The choice of the protagonist - I want to be an official (Xiao Li) Reason-I want to create a stable small county town for my sister Personally, I feel that the author's time traveler protagonist should not read novels. His real age may be a young college student who is well-nurtured by his family, at least he has never been out of society. Guess about the author: A part-time worker or freelancer who is not very happy in life and is interested in taking the public examination

This is one of the few excellent works in Tomato. Although it is a cool article, it is not mindless. The characters are well drawn. In my opinion, this is at least a 9.5-Point or above work. In my mind, there are few works with such a high score. It is worth a read. Of course, this is just my feeling.

Yoho, it's not bad, it's a good start 😏 Wang Yiyan met a young woman online, 30 years old, and we have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet, I hesitated, I said you have a family, it didn't feel good, but she said it was okay and we were just ordinary friends, so I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She is not far from my city. We made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. I didn't choose to meet somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. When I was waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have a beauty function, but when she got out of that Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. I'm much prettier than in the photo, and I'm my type. She also recognized me. She didn't know what to say. In order to break the awkwardness, she suggested hugging me. I said yes. She smelled very good. I jumped up and sat in the milk tea shop for a while. We went to eat, but she basically didn't eat much. The whole process was spent peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me. After dinner, she walked out of the restaurant and held my hand. I didn't break away. She said she would take me home, and I said I would take a taxi back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag and said: Update ten chapters to unlock the subsequent plot.

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: Start today and never change. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.