Harry Potter: Who Put a Galleon on My Desk?

It's quite good-looking. On the Tomato platform, even at the starting point, it can be said to be a high-level HP fanfic. The best part is that the novel begins with being an Auror directly outside of Hogwarts, and doesn't fall into the trap of most HP fanfics following the original plot around the trio. It's quite clever to move around the main plot and have more room to play. The protagonist is considered to be a very mature Auror, not a naive one, he is very resourceful and capable. I hope that the subsequent plots will maintain the current level. Grindelwald's son appears, does the author want to create a new branch? It feels less interesting. Also, starting from about Chapter 80, the character dialogue becomes a bit inconsistent. It is not the words used in foreign language dialogue, but completely Chinese speaking. Apart from this, everything else is fine and quite exciting. After reading more than two hundred chapters, it has completely deviated from the original work. The background story I created is honestly boring.

It's okay, it just feels like it overwhelms the protagonist's combat power, and the part describing the battle feels like the 55 opening of the American team (the description is a bit vague, and overall I feel that the protagonist is a bit aggrieved. I'm in charge of my feelings. The more I fight, the braver I am, I still need 55 opening). The daily life and themes are good.

Undoubtedly a great book. The writing is very clear. It is not purely a novel, and it does not rely entirely on the main plot. The plot is smooth and the connection is natural. The protagonist wants to use tricks to gain a foothold in the magical world. He is not very strong in the early stage, and he doesn't know most of the original characters. Why should they help you? That "Golden Finger" can be overcome with talent. The more you fight, the stronger it will become. So it's not a drawback. Needless to say, there is a battle of wits in the early stage. If you watch the Harry Potter movies and the original text, you will know that the battle of wits is not very deep, and is mostly foreshadowing and hidden clues. Therefore, the battle of wits in the early stage can only be regarded as a little shortcoming. Personally, I don't like time travel. I prefer native characters or characters from the original place of birth, so this is a disadvantage for me. Moreover, other characters in the book also help the protagonist just right. There is no illogical logic in "helping" and there is no "forcible loss of respect", which is very good.

Soul travel, and he has a girlfriend, this is a poisonous point

As a reader who has followed the book from the first chapter to the present, I must admit that the reading experience this book brought to me is quite unique. In the highly homogenized HP fan fiction, the author moved the main stage of the story from Hogwarts to the Ministry of Magic, changed the protagonist from a student to an Auror, and changed the core conflict from "fighting the Dark Lord" to "surviving in the cracks of power." The Lin Ze described by the author is a very recognizable image. He is not the kind of savior who cares about the world, nor is he the kind of avenger who suffers from great hatred, nor is he the kind of morally obsessive person who spends all his time worrying about "should I change history?" He is a smart man who, after traveling to a dangerous world, relies on his foresight to accumulate chips to survive. I look forward to getting more and more exciting in the future.

This author wrote his own story based on the world view of Harry Potter. As an Auror, the protagonist's perspective begins one month before Voldemort's defeat. After Voldemort's defeat, he captures the scum Death Eaters and collects the criminal evidence of those noble Death Eaters as a threat, which serves as the protagonist's future advancement. Interspersed with Aurors solving crimes, Japanese shikigami, ancestors of vampires, etc. The writing and story are good, but it may be slower and less people will read it.

There are too few elements about magic. I hope the author can add more later.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a novel with the author's own writing ideas, instead of directly borrowing HP content to write a cool novel. I feel like I can add some elements to make the world view not only stick to the original Harry Potter text, but also add the feeling of Chinese flesh and blood cultivating immortals to form a complete magical world.

Okay, this is the real magical society

Very few people read it. It's really good.