Equestria Girls: The Frail Boy Has a Sharp Tongue

Although it does not completely follow the original settings, the OOC of some characters makes the characters more humane and complex. Sunset Shimmer is no longer the school bully villain on the surface, but a confused girl with past pain. "Please don't believe everything the protagonist says" is the finishing touch, making the whole story full of lies and truth. Summary: This book is not all about easy daily life, but also adds novel plots. The author integrates his own experience and complaints into it, making the protagonist's storyline more realistic. Compared with the previous one, it has been significantly improved. If you are tired of the same main plot and want to see unique creations in fan fiction, this book is worth reading.

It's too dark, Sunset can't be captured, it's too scary The contrasting setting of "sick boy + tough talk" has its own tension, and is highly compatible with the original characters like Sunset Shimmer, who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. The rhythm of "the tough talk is exposed → each other heals each other" in the interaction is naturally not stiff. It not only retains the magical school atmosphere of Equestria Girls, but also adds a sense of sweet sadism that Internet readers like. Overall, it is more suitable for readers who like "character first" rather than those who pursue the logic of the original work. If you want to get into the trap, you can first read the first three chapters where the protagonist meets Sunset Shimmer to judge whether you like this interactive style.

The story is very novel and the characters are very distinct, but there is OOC, and the plot is smooth and generally good, but many details are not handled well. Sometimes the character dialogue is very stiff, and it is still uncomfortable to watch.

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The battle was great, it was the first time I saw him fighting directly against the senior sister [laughing]

Give yourself a one-star negative review first

I'm optimistic about you, work hard to code

Please add more female protagonists (M5, the girl gate of Crystal Academy)

Come on, keep an eye on you, I personally think it's okay, but the plot hasn't unfolded yet and I don't understand the rest of the story.

I've only read three chapters and the author's writing skills are pretty good.