My Little Pony: An Abstract Redemption Tale of an Overworked Wage Slave

The writing method is extremely interesting, as is the dialogue method, which is relatively simple and blank, and the narrative has a calm feeling that allows the characters to maintain the tendency of blank space that combines characteristics and similarities, which is pleasant and very cute. In terms of story, except for the middle part and some specific aspects that seem to be slightly awkward blank spaces (the language structure and the narrative method begin to conflict), it is very smooth (it has become relatively mature and stable by the end). In terms of the main characters, it is pretty good and relaxed; but in terms of special personality, it is a bit insufficient. In terms of repetition, which is a common writing problem for everyone, this is actually not a big problem. The problem is that I really don't know what to do and leave blank spaces. The description has always been relatively restrained in this aspect. In fact, it is okay and passable. It is the performance in the relationship between the key role (all important roles) and the male protagonist, especially the other female protagonist. It is indeed written and written between them, but there will always be a sudden realization that something is wrong. Feeling too light? This is also the reason why I think it is more restrained. Maybe it is also the reason for the author's characteristics? Of course, the problem is not too much sin or pressure, it's just a not fatal way of writing, which is generally good. Also, Jiang An is very comfortable.