With Rebels in Hand, the Journey to the West Script Is Void

I think it looks great! I saw someone in the comment area saying that trying to practice Zen is not good. I think it's very good. Moreover, the label of the work is romantic. If you don't accept it, you can first check the label to see if there is anything wrong with it. I'm so afraid that the author won't write it because of that comment. There are also people who say they don't want all. I think all is also very good. So, teacher, if you plan to write a 1v1 ending, can you write a side story with the other two? I think the heroine is very sincere, hahahahahaha, I feel like I have told Brother Monkey everything about everything. It's so funny especially when I'm drunk. The plot and emotions are very good [Blow kiss] Teacher, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's very interesting. Unlike other Journey to the West spin-offs, this book describes the process of the three rebels agreeing to learn the scriptures. This is something I haven't seen in other books. The heroine is also well portrayed. The timidity, cowardice and lack of boldness of the minor characters are described, but there is also some kindness, sincerity and liveliness that are unique to the heroine.

At present, this pair of cps are very good. The brotherhood between Nezha, Yang Jian and Sun Wukong. On the way to learn from the Western Heaven, they have gained a life-and-death friendship, and the charm of friendship has made them flesh and blood, no longer a thin and simple label. They are well written. I will listen to some suggestions, but not all. It is always best to maintain your own writing style [Sending Hearts] No matter how good the work is, there will always be criticisms, so maintaining yourself is the most important thing. Your words bring me happiness, and I am very grateful to the author for creating such wonderful works [Blowing Kisses] I am here to urge you to update [Blowing Kisses]

It's both good and bad... I've always wanted to read these three speed readings. The author's writing is very enjoyable and the overall quality is very good. I'll just talk about the bad parts and hope the author can write better. First of all, as soon as Sun Wukong's emotional line is written, he will turn into a melancholic boss, with a deep voice, intangible emotions, and gentle eyes... It feels very different from the original work, and it's a bit awkward. Then Nezha and Yang Jian are a bit like each other. Nezha has always been "little master, steal towers and steal towers", and Yang Jian has always been "the true god, the true god". Tathagata Buddha is a little... Too philistine? I know they are not good people in the original work, but there is no divinity in what the author wrote. It feels like they are just a group of little demons who think they are refined and self-interested. I still hope the author can mention them again. Finally, I want to know if this is a Shura scene or a 1v1 between Sun Wukong and the heroine? This is not a nitpick, I'm just curious.

It looks good, it looks good, and the writing is very good. Very good. Because I just looked through the comments and found that the male protagonist has a Monkey King. Then I think the author can add Nezha and Yang Jian?

In fact, I think even the clay figures have tempers. After reading more than ninety chapters, I feel that the heroine is always saying nice things, and then the three of them really like to quarrel and don't care about the lives of others. I don't think that should be the case. , After all, in mythology, they are all for the common people (I don't understand Yang Jian! Sorry!) And if they keep doing this, I think they will make me cry (꜆꜄꜆˙꒳˙)꜆꜄꜆ (Only a personal opinion!!!)

Very nice to watch, I hope the male protagonists can interact with each other more than the female protagonists

It's beautiful, I give it five stars. The angle is amazing and it almost made me laugh to death. There's a monkey with half a catty of lotus roots, one with three eyes and a dog, one openly rebels, one secretly rebels, and one rebels at any time [laughs]. The only drawback is that the monkeys should be written more lively. A monkey that doesn't actively cause trouble is not a good monkey [facepalm]

It's pretty cool, but I just want three people.

I knew that although I didn't see the relationship between Sun Wukong and the heroine in the introduction, but when it came to the description, when Sun Wukong didn't help you to talk about Lei Gong, I guessed that the heroine and Sun Wukong had a relationship. At that time, I comforted myself in my heart that it was definitely not ૮₍ ˶•‸•˶₎ა Seeing it now, I collapsed, why can't female videos have a male protagonist! ! !, A lot of things are like this, this time I tried hard and paid it wrong again ꒦ິ^꒦ິ deducted 1 point for the love line˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ Chapter 82: I know the heroine has this kind of character, but I feel uncomfortable looking at it. I just feel uncomfortable. I give it a low score.