I Handed Over the Cultivation World, Was Betrayed, and Reborn

It's very good-looking. It's a classic way of leaving the heroine alone to return to reality, a classic way of seriously injuring the heroine, then a classic way of not killing the murderer and letting him run away and keeping an eye on the protagonist secretly, and finally a classic way of saving the heroine. This is the content of the first dozens of chapters, recommended! ! ! So pretty! ! ! After reading the following, the heroine came to life within a few chapters. The author still listened to the advice and continued to eat. It's okay so far.

The overall writing style is more realistic, without exaggerated golden fingers. After the protagonist is reborn, he only has the memories of his previous life and a ring. He has to practice step by step on his own, and to obtain resources, he also needs to explore and even take risks on his own. This down-to-earth way of cultivating immortality, coupled with the main line of official revenge, makes the story both refreshing and tense. It makes you want to follow up.

This is a highly complete story about rebirth and immortality. It has a novel setting, a logical plot, and three-dimensional characters. From the layout after rebirth, to the preliminary exploration of the world of immortality, to using the resources of the world of immortality to improve reality, every step of the protagonist's operation has a clear goal, and there is no aimless wandering. The foreshadowing in the article is carefully laid out, such as the sealed ring space, the mysterious animal skin map, and the tampered techniques, all of which make readers full of expectations for the subsequent plot. The disadvantage is that the integration of the secular line and the line of cultivating immortality is not close enough at this stage, and there is little intersection between the two. In the future, the linkage between the two lines can be strengthened, so that conspiracy and cultivation can influence each other.

The story is quite interesting, and the writing is also good. It doesn't have the AI smell of tomatoes everywhere. It must have been written by the author himself [face covering] There is a small problem at the moment. The important supporting characters in the article are all women. The male protagonist has a childhood sweetheart, and there are always female friends popping up around him. This does not mean that the male protagonist cannot have female friends, but every time an important supporting character appears, they are all female, and there is no important male supporting role. After reading the latest chapter, I feel that two girls are already having a little ambiguity with the male protagonist. I was afraid that the male protagonist would start a harem later [face covering], so I backed away first.

When faced with injustice, never change your lifelong loyalty to your family and country; Start over and continue the ambition of your previous life. Good book, online IQ, exciting! [Praise]

The author has quite good control over the cool points. After the protagonist is reborn, he quickly draws Qi into his body, kills the Wang brothers, and unlocks the ring storage function. Every plot can bring a real sense of growth. There is no excessive golden finger blessing, and the improvement in strength is logical. Especially in the scene of counter-killing the Wang brothers, the calm and neat operation highlights the transformation of the protagonist. However, the description of the battle is a little simple and the visual sense can be strengthened.

After rebirth, the plot progresses relatively smoothly. From finding the ring to opening the path to the world of immortality, the logical chain is clear and there are no too abrupt turns. The combination of the identity of a high school student and the elements of immortality is not inconsistent.

A good article, the first life, handed over to another world and was shot. In the second life, I first went to explore a different world with my girlfriend, and found that it would save time and worry to turn it in, and then I was shot again. In the third life, I will continue to hand it over in another way and continue to be shot. The 4567890th was also turned in and shot. In the eleventh life, I found that I was a little resentful. I brainwashed myself that it was the first life where I was turned in and shot. Now I am in the twelfth life. I swear that after handing in this time, I will definitely avoid being shot.

The plot is compact, the setting is novel, and the writing is good. It's just the best! Remember to eat or not...

The protagonist knows that self-preservation is the right way to go. This sober setting, I think, is a few steps ahead of other novels and must be praised.