National Fate: I, Ye Shunguang, Will Defend the Dragon Kingdom!

It's quite good to watch. There are no scolding viewers, and there is no host who worships foreigners and is a virgin. The relationship between the teammates is very harmonious, which is much better than those templated national sports articles. Can the author tell me which countries have players cooperating with the protagonist team? Ah, I forgot to mention something. At the beginning of the live broadcast, we actually temporarily invited an entertainment star. He saw the protagonist wearing high heels and mocked him. The audience attacked him. After being warned by the official, he became a little transparent. He may have left. Anyway, there will be no drama at all in the future. There are only three normal hosts.

Very good Zetsuku Zero fanfics. Originally, there were very few Zekuku Zero fanfics here in Yangshizi, and the ones from the little senior sister were even more pitiful. The reason for 4 stars is that some deficiencies can indeed be seen in some places, and AI may be used to polish it, but currently it can be seen that the author should have his own detailed ideas and settings. It is roughly the Zzz world line where the protagonist failed to grow up. So far, it looks good and I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. Come on Rolls!

Yes, it's really rare not to have those brain-hemorrhaging spectators, the national team and teammates, but there are too few, and, author, I hope you don't stop updating.

It was only after I read the book review that I noticed it was AI. I said it was a bit weird in some places, but the AI ​​was good and had no flaws. The outline and keywords were well explained, and the writing was based on what I had read, and I had written it with care. Overall, it's good. I haven't played JuZero, so I can't comment on the content, but as a novel, it's good. It's not a magic book yet, but it's definitely a good book, so 4 stars is absolutely appropriate. Overall, it should be a novel that can reach 8.2~8.6, And it's worth reading. (If you don't like it, don't criticize it. I have read a lot of books, so the evaluation is of some reference)

The quality of the article is very good. It does not feel suffocating when reading like a short white article. The whole article is very smooth to read. The author is also very obedient. As long as the comments are not malicious, the poisonous points that should be pointed out will be corrected. Moreover, the original plot does not follow the rules and has a different timeline. The author obviously has his own ideas to advance the plot. You can look forward to this. Although there are currently fewer chapters, the number of words in the update is relatively large, which can be considered to be a large volume. The only shortcoming may be... I can't say it is a shortcoming. After communicating with the author, I learned that the author himself has a serious mental health problem. In common terms, it is severe depression (diagnosed in the hospital's medical record), which has seriously affected normal life in reality. Now I am completely forced to update this book. I am very distressed. I hope everyone can support it.

Phaethon, Phaethon, come to the hollow! Phaethon, Phaethon, guide the cave thief! Phaethon ah Phaethon, the legend of the Ropemaker, the legend of the Ropenet, the legend of New Eridu!

I think the biggest advantage of this author's work is that the scene is very immersive and the character description is very profound. The number of words in one chapter is also very large. The disadvantage is that it is too detailed and can be appropriately reduced - unnecessary description can be entered into the plot faster. At present, it seems that the appetite is full but the appetite is a bit slow (but Ha Ji is taking care of his health first)

It looks good. It was the if line that Ling bought the video tape and was not rescued in time. Two brothers, Zhe and Ye Shiyuan, are going crazy. They want to see the senior brother appear [thinking] and also want to see Ling. I hope Ling is okay [shy]

First of all, the world view is relatively new that I have seen. There are many different world views in the same type of national sports literature, but this kind of thing gives me the motivation to continue reading. Secondly, the plot development is very reasonable and smooth so far, without any delay, and the subtitles are just right. Finally, author, you must make it to the end [crying][crying][crying] Among the articles about the national sports of the Mi family, I think this one is considered to be of the highest quality, and I don't think there is any need to hold back on some small details. I really want to read to the end [crying]

Very good novel, made my little senior sister spin! It is considered to be the best among fan stories about the national games. You can tell that the author loves her very much. The appearance of the young senior sister, which lasts for several hundred words, is described very well, and unlike many fan stories about the national games where there are vulgar comments popping up and making pornographic remarks. , It feels good to have respect for the little senior sister (it is certainly not pornographic to be a dog of the little senior sister), everyone loves the little senior sister, and the few clowns who pop up occasionally are quickly attacked by everyone, just to amuse the audience. In short, if you like the little senior sister, I highly recommend it! After reading for a long time, I found that the author's adjectives are relatively lacking, and the number of repetitions of words is obvious. For example, the word "cannot refuse" is a very bright word, so it cannot be used every time to describe the words like "cute" and "beautiful" that are already familiar in life. In fact, in some relatively plain paragraphs, short words like "strong" can also be used to describe the young senior sister.