I, the Ancestor of Yun Kui Mountain, Am the Immortal Master of the Cultivation World

Change order, excellent writing style, flowing prose, and zero description of women's clothing, women's bodies, and women's degeneration. Transform into Yixuan and lead his apprentice in the parallel world to go about his daily life. It's an easy and invincible story. He beats the villain and takes care of the baby. Bah, he takes care of his apprentice and then makes a mess of his life. It's okay. It's worth watching. The story of the supporting characters is quite exciting.

Lay out more of the world background, decide whether to write about daily battles or other things, slow down the pace, and focus on the description of details. It is quite difficult for a novice author to write well about plots such as character emotional changes, unless his literary skills are really solid, but there is always a process from raw to mature, and the author must not give up.

Yixuan's books are quite few, but they are considered to be of the highest quality. Come on, the author [please give me more updates][please give me more updates]

It's okay, but why did you travel directly to the future in the middle?

Is the bird on the mountain still alive? I would rather die.

The transformation is a bit abrupt, but the subject matter and content are what I like better, so keep going.

It's okay, but I feel like the author knows how to eunuch, so I'll give it 4 stars for the time being.

So will we go back to ancient times? I think it's better to look at modern times [Thinking]

How embarrassing, I can't sleep at night [laughing evilly]

The author's writing suits my taste