Rising to Power Through Paper Effigy Craft

The content is good, but some details are not written well. At the first battlefield point, the tree died without saying anything about cleaning the battlefield. The tree heart did not know when it was taken, and it was patched on the back. The female ghost paper man took it secretly. Then there is the breathing method that Master Chen gave to the protagonist, and then the Qingyang breathing method suddenly appeared, and after that, the Qingyang Sect also came out. When was this told to the protagonist? I didn't say I left a letter with instructions [smile] Now it's time to fight Wuyin. After the fight, the female ghost paper man evolved into a female ghost wife, and then killed 4 old ghosts in an instant. The loot was also collected. When the loot was divided later, it was not mentioned. Did the protagonist swallow it without telling the second senior brother? [What] It's still the character of the second senior brother. When the protagonist first enters the coffin shop, the second senior brother has a dull personality and specializes in work. He is like a homeboy. He has strength but doesn't like to communicate with others. Later, Master Chen went out to look for opportunities to break through. He also said that the second senior brother worked as a thug, communicated with the protagonist and handled business matters. Later, the second senior brother came up with ideas and was the main force, and the protagonist was a soft assistant [stunned] Having said so much, I also hope that the author can write well and the plot will be comfortable to watch. It will be better if the details are improved.

Not bad, 4 stars Advantages: The writing is very good, neither warm nor dry, and the story is told in a eloquent manner. Disadvantages: Excellent but not amazing enough. It feels like it has reached the standard line but failed to meet expectations. I originally thought I could see something strange like a horror resurgence, but then I found out that it was just a fantasy upgrading practice mode, and my expectations were suddenly gone. Judging from the writing style, it feels like it is suitable for writing about the world, but the story is always superficial, and the content is still a fantasy upgrade.

There are no cheats, it is really practical, and the readers of this book are also very practical... The protagonist's outlook on life is quite good, and he makes decisive decisions when it's time to kill, but he doesn't abandon his original intention. I just feel that if I want to write this book well, it will probably take millions of words. Of course, a good work does require a lot of writing. If you have a quick temper and like to read cool articles, don't fall into this trap! It's really good, but it's too early to get into the trap. I finished reading it in one day. I hope I have more than 1 million words before I get into the trap again [laughing and crying]

The front is quite nice, with the warmth of hometown. I feel there are several poisonous points: 1. Has Xu Er's soul not dissipated and merged with the protagonist? Instant acceptance of family members. 2. When the protagonist returns to his hometown, why does he not charge for rescuing people? The nephew of the bachelor in the front also gave something, and the one who rescued later gave him two eggs. 3. When ambushing the Wuyin people, the protagonist was already named and said he wanted to settle a score with them. Why was he attacked by the protagonist again later?

It's not bad. If you see the updated part, you can check it out on Tomato. The plot and characters are good. The character of the protagonist is well portrayed, with flesh and blood. Although he is cultivating a heretical path, he is not an evil cultivator.

It's okay so far, the writing is pretty good, keep up the good work. It can indeed be flesh and blood in the early stage, but later on. The author said that he wanted to give the protagonist a golden finger. I thought it was my own golden finger. It turns out that the protagonist is given a ghost wife and they sleep together at night. I used to be able to accept this kind of plot. I can accept you and a dog wife, but now it is really a weird love story. Forget it, the protagonist is very weak and has to be beaten half to death every time. Really, you can still read the previous part. But when the shortcomings of your novel are gradually magnified, and many plots in the novel are cliche. In the end, the protagonist must be with a ghost bride, then it will be really difficult for readers to be in the mood to continue reading.

Very well written. Pretty solid. In the later stage, you can consider bringing your family members to the city, otherwise there will be chaos in the countryside due to lack of harvest, and your family members may die.

Readers find it objectionable to most family members that the protagonist cares about everything, but the protagonist's family is indeed a family that loves each other. In ancient times, the protagonist's eldest brother, 23, was unable to marry a wife because of poverty. The last five or two in the family had no intention of objecting. He personally took the protagonist to become a disciple. All the family money was invested in the protagonist, and he had no regrets. You must know that the protagonist is almost 10 years younger than him. Most people must have thought that the family money must be saved to marry themselves. This is the protagonist's native family.

The writing is really good, steady and not impatient, the writing style is also good, fine quality and fine grain! !

Delicate description, fireworks in the world, day and night. With friendship, with blessings, with the most beautiful likes, I walk into your space, appreciate your works, share your happiness, leave my footprints, and give the most beautiful likes to the best you. I am grateful for meeting you, and grateful for having you. Let happiness accompany you all the way, and let smile accompany you all the way.