Naruto: Starting with Pakura of the Scorch Release

The story is simple, the writing style is high-quality, and the writing is partial to hydrology. The description of women's clothing and body is good, but there is very little description of female abortion. It's hard to deny the idea of ​​soul-piercing Ye Cang's rescue. Being the fourth generation Kazekage will change the future structure of the ninja world. It's really a good setting. But I think the subsequent plot can be changed, such as the incompetent husband Rasa. In the current plot, Garuruo is indeed in love with Rasa, but when Rasa forces Gaara to become a jinchūriki for power, the heroine only needs to save Garuru and let her not die, or fake death, or be resurrected. After seeing Gaara's miserable childhood, this book still has the potential to change. Tsk tsk. Looking forward to the follow-up plot~

AI+ copy, there are still wrong chapter names in the text that have not been deleted.

This is the first novel with Ye Cang as the protagonist that I have seen on Tomato. The author is Da Da. I have a question. The hair in the anime should not be red, right? Great author, come on!

I would like to give you a five-star encouragement and suggest changing the cover to something else. Using an AI cover will not attract many people.

The new cover comes in several shades of red, let's see which one you like.

I don't know the settings of Taneda, Bai, and Naruto, so I won't comment on them. So far, they look pretty good, not too toxic.

The protagonist is still a bit weak. I don't know what tricks the author plans to let the protagonist play in the future. After all, the loss of warehouse in the original work is very average, and the upper limit may be an ordinary movie.

I would like to ask if there is a cp?

Is the heroine this Night Breeze? I don't remember this character in the original work

Such a delicious novel, the only drawback is that there are too few people and there are not many updated chapters😋😋😋