Food Wars: A Symphony of Flavor

This fanfiction has a lot of original ideas, with a unique portrayal of the protagonist and very detailed descriptions of cooking, showing a high level of skill. There are roughly two drawbacks: first, the dialogue is a bit too formal. While it's fine to be more formal when writing reviews, everyday speech should be more conversational; second, the handling of multiple female leads is problematic.

Good job, I hope you'll be captivated by the allure of flesh, and I hope you'll strive to be as beautiful as Erina and Alice as well!

It looks pretty good so far. The reason for this loss... I might as well just read the original work.

It was so enjoyable to watch! Food + chaotic battles—I'll write Food Wars! Novels for you forever! I can cook anything!

This is a pretty good food-themed fanfic, but having multiple heroines isn't really popular these days, especially since it's a modern anime fanfic. Since this book has Anko elements, it might be better if the ending just has Anko deciding the heroine. Having multiple heroines in the middle is fine, but I really hope the ending chooses one. Although I personally like Xiaohui, it seems there's no romantic subplot for her in this story.

Good, I like it. The author's descriptions of the female characters' expressions are quite good. However, one drawback is that the writing pace is a bit fast for a new author, making it difficult to skip sections. I hope the author can lengthen the story to make it easier to read. 8.5 Out of 10! 😄😏😏

I'm curious, why is the protagonist so resistant to traditional Chinese medicine and dietary therapy? Is it part of the protagonist's character design, or does the author have some opinion about traditional Chinese medicine?

Keep it up! I really like it anyway. Keep it up! It's really good. I wonder if it's because I didn't write much before I stopped updating, which is why there aren't many people reading it yet. Come on

The plot is pretty good, but there's one thing that feels a bit awkward to me: there are too many descriptive words used to describe the actions between the two characters. I was listening to the audiobook, so it felt very awkward, like it was edited by AI. Listen, please don't use AI; it creates a strong sense of disconnect. However, it seems to get better later on. Keep it up, author!

The writing is good, and the multiple female protagonists give it a real "transmigration" vibe—transmigrating into a two-dimensional world and wanting all the goddesses 🍉 Overall, it's a good read.