Gourmet Cells

I don't know what others think, but I think it looks pretty good.

It does look like the third person, and the layout format is not very good. You can look at the layout of other books and learn from it. It should be better if a paragraph is not too long. A paragraph of about 3 lines is best, but it is still too long and affects the reading experience.

You do have a certain level of skill in being able to use brainless turning tools like the system. After all, turning and foreshadowing are still difficult. Although there are still some minor flaws, it is still very good. The first few chapters are not very attractive. Although it is a time-travel novel, I personally relied on the IP of Food Hunter to keep listening to the first few chapters. Overall, I like your article very much and hope to keep updating it.

It's okay, it's better than those food prisoner novels that sell dog meat on the guise of sheep's heads, or the food prisoner novels with all kinds of stitched monsters, and although the protagonist is reborn, he doesn't know the plot, and there is no system or anything like that. I personally like this kind of food novels 🥰

I feel like it's well written and reflects the sense of adventure in animation. The only uncomfortable thing is that it was always in third person, but why is it suddenly in first person? People are not used to seeing it in the first person

Not bad, the writing is good but the speed is touching.

It started at 28 and started to become unsmooth.

It's no cp, right? 🤦

A captive fanfic that also writes about food I haven't finished the human world chapter with more than 500 chapters, and you have just started the universe chapter with more than 600 chapters. Can we give each other a five-star rating? 😄

It's okay, but there are too many flaws in the early stage.