Tracing the Light Through the Dark River to the Far Shore, Twilight Rain Flows Through Lichuan into Changhe

Based on my 1500 hours of reading time on Tomato, this article is a rare masterpiece. Regardless of the filter of the original work and my love for the two young lovers, based solely on the story line and logic of the article, this novel's rating on Tomato is at least 9.8. The author's writing style is very mature. I really doubt who opened a small account to write it. Sometimes fan fiction really limits the audience. The plot line is far greater than the emotional line, but this kind of description and emphasis highlights the affection between the protagonists. Even if you have not read Underworld, if you read this novel, you will feel moved by two people. As a person who has read The Legend of the Dark River, this novel is even more amazing. The author does not use CP to weaken the protagonist, turn one person into a vassal of another person, nor does he forcefully give out candy and go OOC, but writes in a reasonable and normal way. When two people fall in love, I think all his emotional lines will happen, rather than being inexplicable. More importantly, the author does not trap the protagonist in one person. His relationship line is very complete, affectionate, righteous and persevering. This is Su Muyu's background. I hope the author can finish it. For me, the ending of Shaoge Universe is not worthy of their persistence for many years. No matter how ambitious Su Changhe is in the dark river, he will have his persistence when he reaches the other side.

The plot is delicate, and the emotional lines of each CP are very exciting. It tells the story of Changhe before entering the dark river in detail, and it also allows us to understand Changhe's hatred for Zhuoqing more deeply and concretely, paving the way for later killing his enemies, and expressing the deep friendship between him and Mu Yu. The image of the heavenly official and the earthly official in this novel is consistent with that in the play. Different, they are also looking forward to seeing the new Anhe, and also describe the acquaintance between Mu Qingyang and them. Mu Bai, Xie Ba and others have exclusive descriptions. Did Chang He and Mu Yu realize their feelings for each other after solving the Ying Zong? I wonder if you can write another extra story about the wedding of each CP? As an orphan of the Hexi royal family, Changhe has been burdened with a blood feud for seventeen years. The only person he felt most guilty of during the retreat was his younger brother Su Changli. He and Mu Yu could not help themselves. If there had not been that massacre, they would have reunited with the Holy Son of the Xi Dynasty, Yun Xiu and Zhuo Yue'an, the Young Master of Wujian City. They might have reunited in another way. , There is no need to crawl around in the dark river, a place where people kill without batting an eye, and become a murderous undertaker and an umbrella-wielding ghost, which makes people in the rivers and lakes change their minds after hearing about it. It depicts a different Changhe from the play. Although he is in the dark and bears blood feud, he still yearns for the light and does not forget the original intention of restoring the country. Every pair of CP is very eye-catching, the wild and uninhibited undertaker and Shang Cun The benevolent umbrella ghost, the eccentric little doctor and the elegant and gentle Confucian swordsman, the frosty little fairy and the pure Taoist swordsman, the noble and cold poisonous flower and the humorous Taoist priest, the cold and resourceful spider woman and the cold-hearted Xuanwu envoy, the gentle and tough little medical fairy and the crazy and arrogant living Yama, how can Shao Ge finally make Changhe? Is it enough to successfully restore the country? [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration], there won't be another person sacrificed in the underground river this time [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Breaking news] [Breaking news] [Breaking news] [Breaking news] [Breaking news]

After only reading a few chapters, I realized that this is a rare and good work by Changmu fan. There is no overcrowding caused by superfluous superfluous things, and there is no pretentious and obscure language expression. The dishes with good combination of meat and vegetables are neither greasy nor boring. It is silently fascinating. The moist and subtle plot foreshadows the story. Sure enough, good works are not tied to popularity rankings. Now I have developed the habit of looking at the previous text without looking at the ratings to estimate the writing skills (but many works are very attractive at the beginning and I am very bloody in the later stage. There is also a lot of greasy industrial saccharin. Keep up the good work, Mrs.)

It's so good. I've read a lot of Changmu/Muchang articles, and this one is the most thoughtful (not that the others are not well written). Big cheers to the author [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

The writing is particularly good. My wife's writing style is excellent. The characters fit the original work without any OOC. Every word and action fits the nature of the characters. The plot is well conceived, the foreshadowings are interlocking, the rhythm is tight and tight, and there is no redundant filling. The descriptions of the details are delicate and vivid, the atmosphere is full, and the emotional portrayal directly touches people's hearts. It is easy to empathize with the plot. Breaking away from the clichés, the story is complete and engaging, and it remains amazing after repeated readings. I sincerely look forward to subsequent updates!

There is no OOC, the plot is right, the emotions are well written, some sentences really make people sigh after reading it, it is really beautiful. I was very, very touched when I saw this. Psychological committee member, something is wrong with me😭😭😭. I am satisfied with the psychological committee😭😭😭😭😭. Come and see! Sweet, mutual redemption

The author's writing is so great! ! It's super immersive, everyone is very three-dimensional, the original work and the film and television series are also great. On this basis, the author has enriched many settings. I like Nirvana.

The protagonists and supporting characters are all in line with the characters. The current CPs Changmu/MuChang, Lianmo, and Qingyang Xuewei are also very good. I look forward to the following couples of CPs Xie Xuan x Bai Hehuai, Mu Ciling x Xiao Chaoyan, Thank You x Xie Huaqing

It feels quite consistent with the prototype of Su Changhe and Su Muyu

The author's story is perfectly connected, the fighting scenes are described in great detail (this is really rare), and the characters are non-ooc. The author must not stop updating, the writing is superb👍🏻[Blow kiss]