Hollow Knight: The Failed Vessel

As a Hollow Knight gamer, I'm curious about how to write a Hollow Knight fanfic? Because it is different from traditional novels, the audience of Hollow Knight is smaller and narrower. The author is very thorough in characterization. The story unfolds in two lines, divided into the white king and the protagonist. I am really looking forward to how the main line will develop in the future? To make up for King Bai's regret? Save Hallownest? As a container of failure, the protagonist escapes from the abyss and comes to Dezhen to study and forms a bond with the bone nail master. This is a sharp contrast to King Bai's predecessor, which leaves people with a sense of expectation. The shortcomings are that it is regrettable that the main plot is not clear enough at present, which makes people confused, and the direction of the protagonist is not clear enough. However, the interaction between the characters in the article is eye-catching. After reading it now, it prefers daily writing. Those who have cleared Hollow Knight can come here to check in. As long as it keeps updating, I think it's still worth a try.

Looks good! A large number of original plots show us a different and prosperous Hallownest. The protagonist is also very likeable, has strength, is willing to work hard, and has grown a lot in terms of mentality. The other supporting characters are also well portrayed. The only shortcoming is that when it comes to the plot involving King Bai, King Bai's words are weird, and there is always a feeling that "King Bai doesn't speak in this tone"

The plot is reasonable, no OOC, no poisonous points, the protagonist is a container, and the time period is when the seniors have just been trained. Overall, it is still very interesting. I just hope the author can be faster and stop being a eunuch.

In other words, there is no need to be so rigid. Just climb the wall with Mantis Claw, double jump with Emperor Wing, and sprint with Moth Wing Cloak. Let's face it, without having to consider gameplay, spells can be made better, and you have the ability to learn teleportation, blocking and other more incredible things. There are also those deep nest weaver skills. Senbei learned one, and you can do it too. Sword skills are definitely more flexible in reality. You can follow your own path, there is no need to be so rigid. Talisman involves soul and will, and the talisman slot is for gameplay considerations. In reality, it all depends on the carrying capacity. You have all the containers. You can install them all at will. You can even learn to rub a few yourself. If you are willing, you can also absorb souls. In reality, you don't need to consider balance. Kill the enemy, absorb relevant traits, and condense them into talismans (. After the void invasion in Spun City, the mobs learned a lot of skills without a teacher. You can also let the protagonist explore them. What a good template ( In reality, you don't have to consider gameplay, and you also have subjective initiative. There are so many changes you can make.

Nice! ! ! ! Finally, there is a description of pure containers. Other books just describe them, so leave this aside! There is actually a small interaction between Xiao Chun and Bai Wang here! ! ! (It's just that the appearance of the protagonist seems to be 100 million points popular)

Yes, the plot in the early stage is stable and focuses on developing one's own strength. The character setting is not OOC. Overall, it can be described as comfortable. I'm just curious about what the author will do when the climax of the plot of sealing the radiation is revealed in the middle of the plot? If this key point is written well, then this book can be improved to a higher level. If not, it would be a pity.

No kidding, anyone who has played Hollow Knight will think this book is good, reasonable, and really good! The plot is very new, and I am also very curious about Hallownest in its prosperous period, and I feel that it satisfies this! ! ! Highly recommended.

To be honest, this book, which I have been reading for a long time, is well written, but now that I have read the part about Soul Master, I feel there is a poisonous point: The portrayal of the protagonist in this article has always been good, but the protagonist has a bit too much compassion for the Madonna, and the overall feeling seems to be immature, like a child. For deeper discussions, it is a bit too immature. For example, the anger towards the White King and the argument against the Soul Master are a bit too dramatic, as if everyone is playing house with the protagonist. The White King basically does not have the feeling of a higher being, and the argument with the Soul Master makes the protagonist seem too Madonna-like. When I express my thoughts, I don't mean to criticize the shortcomings of this novel. I just want to share what I have discovered so far that can be further improved. I personally love this novel very much and like this novel very much because it is a novel with a very delicate plot and character portrayal among hollow fanfics. It is also one of the best hollow fanfics I have read so far.

The plot is relatively logical, and at least it is more comfortable to watch than most literary works (Hollow Knight is better written except for the cp text) [Like][Like][Like][Like]

Is the author finished? It has been more than two months and there has been no movement at all.