Southern Files: Zhang Haixia Won't Die Today

I came from 🫘 to 🍅. I like what the teacher wrote very much. I have a few suggestions: The teacher really likes to use the words "laughing/crazy/standing very steady", which appear too many times, which affects the perception... And "beautiful, frivolous, in need of a beating, and inappropriate", which appear so densely, and are a bit too hard. However, I still look forward to the teacher's follow-up updates. I hope the writing will get better and better [blowing kiss]

As for the love line, you can watch it as if there is no CP. There is a kiss scene in the Nan'an chapter [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] Anyway, before the kiss scene, I thought they were Liu Guanzhang [laughing] Although I came here to kiss the CP [Thinking] Character description Ness [Like] [Like] [Like] Hai Xia's wise man is close to the demon, Hai Lou's innocence and fearlessness, and Xiao Zhang's loneliness and regret [Bird Food God's Work] [Bird Food God's Work] [Bird Food God's Work] If you like both characters, you can rush [OK] and pass by and don't miss it (Hai Xia always makes decisions for Hai Lou, Hai Lou doesn't know anything, and Brother Zhang doesn't say anything... So what will happen after the window paper is pierced [Thinking] See for yourself) A hundred years later, Brother Zhang went back to the past to rewrite his destiny and work with the Nanyang Twin Stars. It was a grand BE in itself [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] It's not a loss for those who like sadistic stories to invest [OK] Although I read it as a sweet article (before the extra if line was released)

The writing style is very natural and the characters are very close to each other. I look forward to the plot behind it [Sending my heart] The author writes very well. The most difficult part of the whole book is how to reverse the situation, successfully destroy the conspiracy, and save the shrimp boy when the conditions and information are known. I have read a lot of similar articles recently, but the handling of this part is a bit unsatisfactory. When Xiao Zhang went back to the past, his The solution is not to blindly resist alone, but to give Zhang Haixia tips from the smallest details, slowly assist and subtly protect them as they move forward. Only in this way can the three of them break the situation together, and the plot will be more reasonable and natural. If Xiaoxia Xiao Zai really survived in the end, then will Xiao Brother Zhang disappear? Although Zhang Haiyan did not die from the beginning to the end, Xiao Zhang's maturity was partly affected by the death of Xiao Zhang. If Xiao Xiao had always been around, Zhang Haiyan might not be able to become Xiao Zhang, so changing the ending, Xiao Zhang How to deal with this person is really a question. Should he teach Zhang Haiyan to mature, retire and return to his own timeline to see the awakened shrimp, or should he save Yanxia's life in the past timeline, sacrifice himself, and let Zhang Haiyan who is with Zhang Haixia become the little brother Zhang later? I look forward to the author's upcoming plot, and I must watch it until the finale.

The emotions written by the teacher are so real and immersive, and they are not OOC at all. He brought Brother Zhang to life and made me want to cry. They are all little bitter gourds [crying][crying][crying] Teacher, I will always follow your [love]

I came here from Douyin to follow up. The author's writing is really great. Every time I see Hai Yan's little actions a hundred years later, I feel so sad. Seeing the young Hai Yan being pampered and protected by sea shrimps, Hai Yan a hundred years later must be particularly jealous and sad. I am looking forward to the following plot. (Insert a digression: Hai Yan travels back a hundred years later to change history. Is there a corresponding price to be paid for changing history?)

It's very interesting. I started reading it in July. This book is really interesting. It has a touch of sadness. It makes my eyes feel a little uncomfortable when I read it [crying]. Neither the future Brother Zhang nor the current Haiyan Sea Shrimp are OOC. Yan is also growing up slowly [crying] [crying]

Invincible is super good-looking, and the teacher is really good at writing. The characters are not OOC at all, and they are completely brought to life. Zhang Haixia is smart and Zhang Hailou is naughty. I will always support the teacher!

It directly belongs to the level of Zhenquan divine text! ! ! Everyone fits the character perfectly, and the writing is so good💥Teacher, I will always follow you

It's good to watch, but I felt very sad when I watched the extra. Zhang Hailou a hundred years later, I feel like Brother Zhang is really gone. I hope the little Brother Zhang in the main text can be better. There is no such thing as Brother Zhang. Can there be a better episode?

It looked like I had seen the dawn of sunshine during the continuous rainy season. The pains in my bones in my memory were picked out little by little, and they were ironed and solid by the sun. Lou Zai didn't lack the courage to try again, so he gave him another chance. Immortal product!