
What?! I Became a Great Black Tomb and Got Killed on the Spot
惊!开局成为大黑墓,当场被嘎
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 2.3M Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3d ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
Stats
More by this author
Qingque: Watch Me Turn My Luck Around
From the Start, I Had Gojo Satoru, and I’m Pushing Carts Back and Forth Through the Underworld!
Cultivation: Lingsha's Elixir and Panacea Journal
I, Spark, Am Not a Madman!
Beneath the Moon Goddess, I Am Columbina
Rin Tohsaka? No! She’s Honkai: Star Rail Rin!
Anime Crossover: Shock! Kiana Flees with the Solar System
Xing: Let the Pioneers Smash the Apocalypse
I, Ye Shunguang, Am Disabled but Determined!
Anime Crossover: Playing Rappa from the Start Leaves Tony Dumbfounded
As Sandrone, I Have to Fight to Stay Alive!
In booklists 72
See allPlease, I'm Begging for a High-Quality Transformation Story....
Looking for books like Transformation: She Wants to Become Him Again at the Transcendent Academy. Gender-bender romance with a bit of angst.
Single Female Lead, Any Series Is Fine
Looking for books similar to "The Aloof Campus Belle? Just a Clingy Love-Struck Girl (Super Sweet Romance)". One female lead only. I want novels with a single female lead. Don't come in and recommend a bunch of unrelated stuff. If it's not about one female lead, don't post it. I hope this list will feature stories with a single female lead.
Honkai: Star Rail Has Really Fallen Off. There Aren’t Any Good Stories Anymore \(`Δ’)/
Honkai: Star Rail fan fiction, male protagonist, no harem!!!!
I’ve Recently Become Obsessed with Honkai: Star Rail. Do You Fine Folks Have Any Recommendations?
I'm looking for books similar to "Honkai: Star Rail: The IX Institution".
Cosplaying a Battle-Damaged Character, Transmigrated into That Character’s World and Fantasized Over with Endless Sympathy
Looking for books like The Star Dome: Kidnapped by a System and Becoming the Star Gods' Favorite. Even better if it's an all-characters ship.
What’s Up with Honkai: Star Rail Lately? Nine Out of Ten Fanfics Get Abandoned, and the Last One Has a Terrible Ending
I want to read books similar to "Honkai: Star Rail: Only After My Death Did Firefly Learn to Love (Firefly of Flowing Flame)". A-Qing is still the best 😭😭😭
Looking for High-Quality Honkai: Star Rail Fanfiction!!!
High EQ: Honkai: Star Rail Has No Masterpieces Left. Low EQ: Recommend Some Good Honkai: Star Rail Fics
Looking for books like "Honkai: Star Rail: Is This Spirit Cat an Emanator of Abundance?"
There Are No Good Honkai: Star Rail Books Anymore
Are there any books about Amphoreus?
Looking for a Cosplayer Transmigrating to the Luofu with a Misunderstanding-Focused Plot
I'm looking for stories like Jing Yuan, the Mara-Struck, Lands on the Xianzhou. I've been really into this type lately, but there are so few. Either the writing style isn't my thing, or there aren't many chapters. I'll even take a cosplayer transmigrating somewhere else. I really...
Any High-Quality Honkai: Star Rail Novels? Wishing Everyone Ten Golden Pulls
Any Stories About Cosplaying Battle-Damaged Characters?
I'm looking for stories similar to Cosplaying as Yanqing, the Demon of Mara: Starting Out at the Divine Might Commission. Quite a few stories recently have featured battle-worn versions of characters like Zhongli, Venti, Jing Yuan, and Yanqing. Are there any others featuring different characters, like Kiana?
Any Honkai: Star Rail Stories, But Nothing Trashy!
Any Good Honkai: Star Rail Fanfiction? I'm Out of Books to Read. Please Recommend Some.
Looking for books similar to Original Honkai: Star Rail: I Became a Stellaron Entity, and My Online Handle Is Zuowang Dao.
Any High-Quality MiHoYo Fanfiction?
Looking for books similar to "Zenless Zone Zero: Reborn Charming Rabbit". Please recommend high-quality ones.
Any Novels Where the Protagonist Can Transform into Anime Characters?
The protagonist can choose a character to transform into at any time and use that character's abilities. Not just a roleplaying story where they only get one ability.
Watching Honkai: Star Rail PVs
There just isn't much good to read. Please share some recs, and let me know if anyone's read A Thousand Stars: Beyond the Story.
Looking for Honkai: Star Rail Stories with Herta as the Female Lead 😍😍😍
Looking for books similar to Honkai: Star Rail: Herta's Husband Is a Preservation Emanator.
Herta from Honkai: Star Rail (Seems Pretty Niche)
Please Recommend New Honkai: Star Rail Fics!!
Please recommend quality new "Honkai: Star Rail" stories. No harem, preferably no romance; no dumbed-down characters, no losers, no mindless wish fulfillment, and no elementary-school-level writing. Give me something normal people would read, please, I’m begging you.
Any Novels About Herta?
Please Recommend Some Honkai: Star Rail Fics With Two Female Leads! I'm Starving Here
As the title says, preferably with an original female lead who ends up with Feixiao, Jingliu, or Acheron. Don't recommend male-lead stories! Genderbent male characters are out too! I used to be curious about them, but after getting fed too many awful stories, I really don't like seeing men paired with my favorite character.
There Are Already Several About Mara-Struck Yanqing, Jing Yuan, and Qingque. Any Other Characters?
Like General Fu Xuan, Sword Champion Sushang, Judge Huohuo, and so on.
Honkai: Star Rail!!!!!!
Looking for stories like "After COSplaying a Battle-Damaged Qing, I Became the Astral Express Crew's Favorite". Any good Honkai: Star Rail fics with no female characters?
In same booklists
Cosplaying as Battle-Damaged Otto, I Arrive at the Sorrowful Secret Garden
Honkai: Star Rail: Herta Salvages a Battle-Worn Himeko Cosplayer
Honkai: Star Rail: From the Start, I Kidnap the Mastermind and Meet Big Herta
Honkai: Star Rail: The Little Dragon Girl Will Never Meet an Emanator of Nihility
After Cosplaying a Battle-Damaged Mualani, I Became a Femboy
Transmigrating to the Xianzhou: My Fated Love Song with Jingliu
In Cangcheng, a Wandering Immortal
I'm a Galaxy Succubus, Not the Great Lord of Annihilation!
Honkai: Star Rail: Technology Ascends, and Nanook Couldn't Be Happier
I Transmigrated as a Star God, and the Abundance Apothecary Is Forcing Me to Love Her!
A Genius Wanders Through Rule Horror
Honkai: Star Rail: A Wanderer from the Void
Scion of the Godforsaken: Cosplaying a Battle-Worn Yoriichi from the Start
Honkai: Star Rail: I Transform into a Battle-Damaged Herta, and Xing Cries for Mom
I Cosplayed a Battle-Damaged March 7th and Became the Train Crew’s Beloved
Honkai: Star Rail: The Strange Adventures of Lady Black Tomb
Honkai: Star Rail: I, Welt, Am Really Not a Lord Ravager!
Honkai: Star Rail: Miss Okita Is Determined to Enjoy Herself Today, Too
Cosplaying as a Battle-Damaged Bailu, I Know Everyone on the Xianzhou
I Cosplayed as Black Tower's Iron Tomb, So How Did It Become Real?
Reader comments 78
Google Translate






























































































"Emperor III" detected. Automatic praise mode activated: "Emperor III" - Unparalleled in the world! "Iron Tower Titan" - Extremely intelligent! "Lady of the Dark Side" - Stunningly beautiful!
The subject matter is novel, and there aren't any major flaws yet. However, some details of the events are still not quite right. For example, regarding Teng Xiao, theoretically, he should have first clashed with Shu Hu, then Yin Yue Hua Long would have held off Da Can Shu Hu, falling into dragon frenzy, and then Bai Yan would have used the Black Sun to finish off Shu Hu.
Sure, that's a great topic. I think the protagonist could pretend to have both the Iron Curtain and the Black Tower personalities; that would be really interesting. (I'm just sharing my thoughts, take it with a grain of salt.)
The book is good, but the perspective shifts are too rapid, each section is too short, and the perspective changes abruptly almost as soon as you get to the point. Also, the main character has too little screen time.
The subject matter is great, and the writing is good too, not cliché. The update frequency is fast. It shouldn't be a problem with normal updates, um, author, please keep updating!!! It's not as good as before.
It's great! Please keep writing. The format you've created is relatively rare among current Honkai Impact 3rd fanfiction, and your writing is excellent. As long as you maintain a consistent update schedule and the current quality, I can guarantee this work will score above 8.0. Since you're writing an "what if" scenario, it's actually easier to develop the story.
It's really good, and I like the storyline, but there's some Honkai Impact 3 content in the middle, which I don't understand since I haven't played it 😢😄 The difference in quality is quite significant.
The writing was actually quite good, but the author got carried away with the later chapters and started writing the Fate side story, going from over 230 chapters to over 320, and it's still not finished. As for saving Huo Huo? Nobody there is. 😏 Kids, I'm back! Latest news: the author is still writing Fate chapter 367! 👍 I'm back again, with about 390 chapters of Fate.
I like the protagonist's appearance, although the general anthropomorphic image of the Black Curtain is well-known. However, the other settings—the inevitable involvement of Huan Yu and the overused Yun Wu backstory—really gave me no desire to continue reading (for personal reasons).
The Lady of the Black Curtain is unparalleled in the world; her wisdom is exceptional; the three emperors were all exceptionally talented; the Lady of the Black Curtain is outstanding in intelligence; the Lady of the Black Curtain is exceptionally clever; the Lady of the Black Curtain is peerless in beauty; the Lady of the Black Curtain is eloquent and persuasive; the Lady of the Black Curtain is…