What?! I Became a Great Black Tomb and Got Killed on the Spot

"Emperor III" detected, automatic praise mode activated "Emperor III" is unparalleled in the world! "Tower Titan" is extremely smart! "Shady lady", sinking fish and falling wild goose!

The subject matter is very novel, and there are no major poisonous points for the time being. However, the details of some events are not very good. For example, regarding Teng Xiao, in theory, it should have exploded with Suihu first, then drank the moon and turned into a dragon to drag the big can Suihu into dragon madness, and then Bai Yan used the black sun to end Suihu. Not buddy, 5 open? Three books were updated today, with a total of 9 chapters. One was a day ago, and the other was five days ago. It's a bit scary, brother [salute]

Okay, okay, this topic is very good. I think the protagonist can pretend to have two personalities: the Iron Curtain and the Black Tower. This would be very interesting (I'm just saying what I think, just take a look)

The book is very good, but the perspective changes too quickly, and each part is too short. It felt like the perspective was cut off when I first read it, and many of the perspective cuts were very abrupt. Also, the main character has too few roles.

The subject matter is good and the writing is good, not cliche. Update frequency is very fast. It shouldn't happen with normal updates, huh? Author, please continue to write more! ! ! Not as good as before

It looks good, please be sure to write it down. The format you created is one of the few among fans of the Collapsed Star Railroad, and your writing style is very good. As long as you can maintain stable updates and the current quality of creation, I can ensure that the rating of your work is definitely above 8.0. Since you are writing an if line, it is actually easier to develop. You don't have to worry about running out of inspiration. The Collapse Star Railway has a very complete background setting, which can be found in the game text. You can use these things and combine them with your own ideas to write. If you really have no ideas, you can actually discuss it with everyone in the comment area. Many people actually have very rich inspirations, but they are unable to realize them due to various reasons. The above is my little evaluation. I wish you a happy life and serious creation [Love]

It's very interesting to watch, and I like the plot, but there's content in the middle of it that I can't understand because I've never played it [crying] [laughing] ? The skewers are a bit different, right?

The writing was pretty good, but the author was really happy with the writing later on. He wrote the fate branch, from more than 230 chapters to more than 320 chapters, and it's not finished yet. As for saving Huo Hao? No such person found [laughing evilly] Kids, I'm back. The latest news is that the author has written Chapter 367 and hasn't finished writing fate yet👍 Here I Come Again. It looks like it's about to be finished with more than 390 chapters of Fate, but I don't know if Huo Hao has been found yet (suppressing laughter) Children, the latest chapter is still writing fate [laughing evilly]

I like the setting of the main character's appearance, although the rough anthropomorphic appearance is well known. But for the other settings, the joy of participating in it no matter what, and the almost-to-be-written Yunwu past, I really have no desire to read it (for my own reasons). As for why Bai Heng, a soldier who participated in Star Wars, would play master-servant play with the protagonist, I just jumped on it, so I won't comment. The character setting of the protagonist is quite satisfactory, and it doesn't bother me at all. My idea is how the huge data of the Iron Tomb + the memory and thinking of the Black Tower will come into contact with it as a time traveler. Will he be overwhelmed by the huge amount of information and feel like he is the Black Tower or the Iron Tomb or Rupert III and need time to slow down, or will he be strong-willed and able to anchor himself without being affected? Then because he was cut down and had to regain his strength and was restricted by his happiness, he played the role of a bad guy who is neither good nor bad. . . It feels even less interesting than shaving off the traveler element and letting the black tower operate and steam it again. . .

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