Honkai: Star Rail: From the Start, I Kidnap the Mastermind and Meet Big Herta

There is no explanation of the reference setting, which may lead most readers to preconceptions that the protagonist is the protagonist in the first chapter and thereafter. After reading it, they will think that the protagonist is weird and behaves too strangely, which will easily lead to complaints and negative comments and make them unable to read it. However, after reading it a few times to understand it, it is generally good. I think the author can explain the setting and relationship between the protagonist and the boy in the first chapter in the discussion of this chapter or the first paragraph of the first chapter. The writing is acceptable, and I am very optimistic about you. It's a pity that I'm used to seeing strong men and time-travelers, so I feel a little uncomfortable and uncomfortable seeing it from the perspective of an ordinary staff member. But I think many people will like your book. Come on, I'll give it a try. If the book becomes popular, please remember to @me.

I have a question. I am a book listener, and I have a very small question? How did the protagonist fall in love with the Black Tower? Or how did you fall in love with Shady? And the character of the protagonist is not developed enough. The male lead gives me one. Do you know the feeling of being a character specially prepared for the dark side? What I didn't see in the previous plot is what is the character and characteristics of the protagonist? If the protagonist does not have a black tower or a shady scene, what are the characteristics of the protagonist? I read Chapter 11, but I didn't feel that this was what happened. Let me say that you shouldn't just set up the interaction between the two people as much as possible. Even if it is not too much, you should try to give the male protagonist a sense of intelligence, otherwise it will give me the feeling of the male protagonist being shady. Do you understand? If you sit down and see it, please reply to me. But I will finish reading this book first and then think about whether I will give it five stars later.

It's okay. If you like slow-paced things, you can watch it, but it's not suitable for people like me who like fast-paced things. Besides, remember to add something better next time and explain the relationship more clearly. Not everyone will read comments and the like.

I really like this type of book. The author loves you ヽ(*´з`*)ﾉ. I look forward to Sanwu Xiaosha's recovery of memory and doing such and such things to the protagonist! 🥰

Very good article, just like the introduction says, everyday slow-burning article.

By the way, the shady curtain looks the same as the black tower, so why aren't the space station's staff surprised?