Cultivation: Lingsha's Elixir and Panacea Journal

The reviewer is indeed right. The plot is urgent and the protagonist is reckless. The author arranges too many situations for the protagonist to suffer, and I feel that the protagonist is not ruthless enough. It does not mean that the protagonist kills innocent people for profit. For example, there is a section in the middle where the protagonist saves people from gangsters, but the protagonist does not kill them immediately. I don't understand why. In the world of immortality, just kill such people directly, and then destroying the corpses and eliminating traces will not cause any trouble. It feels a bit poisonous. But the writing is actually very good, and I quite like this style, so I award five stars.

Personal feeling needs to be improved. The system's presence is too strong, the inner drama is too contrasty, and the plot arrangement is poor. The protagonist is always deficient and reckless, and everyone knows that her golden elixir master has just died?

At the beginning, the protagonist's master dies and goes to a nearby gathering place. Even though he is not very strong, he still buys the hidden realm props and says it is a life-saving artifact. . . . He said he didn't want to cause trouble, but he just wanted to hide his realm in a place where he often went and everyone knew his strength. Even if his master had just died, people around him were still drooling over him. . . And the props to hide one's strength were bought from among the crowd. . . .

It's not why you always pretend to be weak. The weaker you are, won't others say they are looking for trouble for you? It's okay to dress up when facing a high level or the same level. How come you still act like a coward when facing someone who is one or two levels weaker than you?

Although the plot has shortcomings, I still give it five stars for the sake of your book. I hope you can finish it. Suggestion: Describe the beauty, inner activities and strength of Lingsha more. At present, the inner activities are somewhat inadequate. Also, try to make the protagonist as enjoyable as possible.

There should be more authors of good books. To be honest, there are so few spiritual works. Authors like this must keep writing!

It's good to watch, but the main character is a bit frustrated. Maybe I've read too many cool articles. I also feel that the golden elixir is made of paper and is too weak.

Come on, keep living 😢

Not bad, but I felt the plot was too rushed

It's good to see this, but why is the protagonist so miserable? He's always being crushed. After all, this is the first spiritual sand cultivation novel. Isn't it true that the protagonist shouldn't be strengthened?