This Was Supposed to Be a Simulation, So Why Are They All Coming to Find Me?

In simulation novels, especially harem simulation novels, the highlight and explosive point are the reunion and Shura field in the real timeline. Especially now that various templates have long been written badly, unless one has very outstanding writing skills and imagination and can write each simulation story in a fascinating way, many people will jump directly to the chapter to watch the reunion. Fortunately, the author seems to have discovered this problem. After the lengthy first simulation story, the second scene was simplified, which is good. You can consider breaking up the simulation story into pieces, blending it into the real-life timeline of the protagonist, and "triggering" it through certain key points. For example, when you see the peach blossoms blooming, you recall accompanying the empress to enjoy the flowers, and then recall an event story, you can use one or two or three chapters. The focus is still on what happened after the reunion. New authors are encouraged.

The writing is very good. I'm tired of reading ordinary simulation system articles. Either the simulation chapter is too long or the plot is boring. However, this book uses a rare narrative writing method to cleverly integrate the normal timeline and the simulation timeline. Every insertion of the simulation is just right. The length of the chapter is just right. It is not offensive and summarizes the emotional line of the male and female protagonists. There are also few system factors and it is basically OK. Ignore it, except for the assigned tasks, the emotional interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is the protagonist's independent consciousness. Unlike some system novels where the female protagonist is completely in love with the system, there is almost no poison. If I have to say one thing, it may be that the male protagonist is a bit passive and weak, but is not as strong as the female protagonists and feels guilty. It is acceptable. I don't understand why the score is so low. Overall, it should be 8 points.

I don't understand. The writing style of such a beautiful book is better than some books with a score of 8 points or more. But only 6.9 Points! Logically speaking, this kind of book should have at least a 7.5 Rating! ! !

It's okay. The simulation novel is a novel that focuses on emotions. The simulation mainly explains the emotional origins of the heroine and the protagonist. The emotional rhythm of this kind of novel is much stronger than those novels that have hundreds of chapters and are still playing the edge of the love war between you and me without feeling anymore, and the pure yang enchanting demon stallion novel.

Very well, the simulation scenes use a narrative approach and constantly switch between reality and simulation to describe events. This makes the simulation have a deeper sense of immersion. After all, the main focus of the simulation is the emotional line. Looking forward to the follow-up plot development, author, cheers.

This is a very nice book among simulation novels. The plot is fast-paced and very suitable for those who like to read short stories.

This time-travel fantasy harem cultivation novel is very interesting. The storyline is interlocking, the plot is ups and downs, and the details are well handled. The male protagonist is unsmiling, calm, calculating, and resourceful. The female protagonists also have their own characteristics. I strongly recommend it to those who like harems and time-travel cultivation genres! ! ! [Thinking]...[Like]...[Like]

So far, the perception is okay. Although the plot is a bit old, it also has new ideas. There are not many interspersed stories about memories. There are several female protagonists who can be said to be semi-invincible to the male protagonists. There are currently no too many negative points. I will see how the author handles the relationship between these people later. It can be read as a daily novel. Come on.

Generally speaking, it should be about four stars, but in the Tomato genre, this one is already very good. Although the past life is very interesting and important for this kind of book, the important thing is the combination of the present life and the past life. Some books tell a story with more than a hundred pictures or even hundreds of chapters, and then After it came out, there was no delay of two chapters to continue the next story. This led to a problem, that is, the heroine in the front will basically not appear in the later, and there will be no role. At most, the protagonist will mention a few words. Maybe the heroine in the back is also interesting, but she has already left the category of multiple heroines, right? If you pick out every story, it will be a book with a single female protagonist. So what was the highlight of your book at the beginning? So this is very good, the progress is quite fast, and when telling a story, it will also be interspersed with real-life scenes, although not much, but after the narration, I will write several chapters of real-life stories, and the main plot will also be opened in reality [Like] On Tomato🍅Liangcao [Like]

It's okay. Before the Immortal World chapter, it was well written, with good writing style and interspersed narratives. It was quite novel. Everyone's relationship was well handled. The Immortal World chapter got worse and worse, but it was okay. The ending was good. You can still watch it.