It's Over! I'm Surrounded by Gorgeous Older Women!

The system looks like the original version of the system, well written and detailed! Unlike other systems, it is delivered directly to the brain! After reading about twenty chapters, there are no general garbage plots about buying clothes or a car and meeting an ex-girlfriend, which is also very good! Come on, author!

Let's make a sharp comment. As the author said, there is a big problem, which is the same as the Korean dramas of the past two years: start low and go high. It starts to get exciting around chapter 90. The previous content is average, very watery, not even as good as other novels of the same type. After chapter 90, it starts to get exciting from the case of Su Wanqing, especially the Chengxi Villa case that I just caught up on. It made me feel like I was inside the room when I read it at night. Someone 😢, many cases are well written. As long as you survive the urban part, this book is definitely a good book, especially the original genre. It is not a fairy tale, but more like a supernatural novel, wrapped in the shell of a fairy tale. Come on, the author, and look forward to the follow-up content [Please update]

The male protagonist has a relatively stable personality and may appear serious in the eyes of others. The development of the love line is also gradual. Although the cause is more abstract, it is a tomato after all. It's 49 chapters, and the world view is a little slow to unfold, but it's eaten up quite quickly, two of them. Looking forward to the author's follow-up

I dropped one star because I was not very satisfied with the previous content. I still wrote the urban part according to the routine of old urban novels. I didn't like it very much. The focus is actually on the volume of the Special Bureau. There are many hooks hidden in the front, but I haven't used them yet. Talking about novels, what I am most satisfied with is actually the special part. The case in Kurokami Village is based on reality. This is a very real tram problem. Are you going to save one? Or save a group of people? There is no answer in itself. The villagers knelt under the water. Some people thought it was atonement, and some people thought it was the black god asking them to fear it. Everyone had different ideas when watching this paragraph. Another one is the scene where Zheng Jianguo and others solve the case. This kind of group portrait, everyone works together and works hard in one place. I really like this feeling, which makes me feel a kind of warmth from the text. Of course, the above is just my humble opinion. You can also leave comments and book reviews. I will basically read them. Thank you all.

In the current era of big AI like Tomato, it can be said to be pretty good, but at first I thought it would be a low-level martial arts at most, but now I guess I will turn to immortality in the future. The rewards of this system can be said to be of the relatively old type (feiwu). You have to practice martial arts and martial arts by yourself (given a time room). There is no problem except for a little pressure. But it is said that it will not change the physique and bloodline of the protagonist. The reason is that these two things will be taken away, but muscle memory and training memory will not. It can only be said that the author still reads too few novels and comics. He has long had the ability to directly deprive/confuse body memory and concepts. There are several books like Tomato , a certain heroine directly erases the concept of "sword", you can't remember what it is at all, and you will know from various fantasy novels, those geniuses with a lot of physiques and various bloodlines, one day of training is equivalent to ten years of training for you. If you don't have low-level martial arts, I can understand it. Cultivation of immortals does not require talent and relies on hard work. 🍉

I read Chapter 20 and it was quite interesting. Ex-girlfriend No. 1 Supporting actress Chen Shuyi Female Supporting Number 2 Landlady Lin Ruoxi Female Supporting Company No. 3 Boss's ex-girlfriend's mother Chen Yun Female supporting role No. 4 Colleague Su Qing Female supporting role No. 5 Qingmei Song Qingya There are currently five female supporting characters. Are there three female protagonists or four? Everything else is easy to understand. What happened to No. 4? Is the protagonist very handsome?

Start low and go high. After getting through the first hundred or so chapters, the world view becomes more and more exciting later on. It's difficult to retain readers in the early stages. After surviving the early stage, it's no problem to get a score of 9 or above. The writing style is cold and restrained, and is very sophisticated. It's not something a novice can write. The large amount of white space shows that the author's aesthetic is online. The only shortcoming is that there are too few dialogues between the characters. Many times they are written in the form of narration, which seems to lack tension. But overall, it is an excellent work and highly recommended.

In fact, it's already pretty good if it doesn't write about daily life in the city about cultivating immortals. Come on, I don't have the desire to read anymore [full]

There is no deliberate exaggeration. The male protagonist does not rely on cheats, but relies on steadiness and sincerity to slowly develop, showing restraint and enthusiasm between adults.

This novel is so enjoyable to read! The male protagonist graduates and is rejected by his girlfriend who has no money and breaks up with her. He turns around and activates the system to counterattack all the way. The mature sisters have their own charms. The part about slapping his ex-girlfriend in the face is super relaxing to watch, and the daily plot is also very enjoyable!