Lin Chan traveled through a family of cultivators and became a waste without spiritual roots. He was abandoned by the family and demoted to a commoner.
Don't worry, I choose a super talent every year.
First year:
[The power of an ox: Strength grows rapidly, and you will gain the strength of an ox when you reach adulthood.
[Spirit Gathering Body: No need for spiritual roots, automatically gathers spiritual energy.
[Fire Spirit Affinity: Fire attribute spells, the effect is increased by 10%.
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Year N:
[Huang Liang Meng: Enter other people's dreams, experience and influence other people's life segments, realize the difference in time flow speed and the rapid improvement of abilities.
[Fate-knowledge: Able to know the fate of oneself and others and what they have done in millions of lives.
[Ruyi Tong: The body can fly freely, enter and exit the three realms, and change its body, without being restricted by time and space.
Lin Chan: I am a numerical monster and a mechanical monster. What do you use to fight me?
Reader comments
I hope you don't deliberately overwhelm the protagonist, and don't just write about one result of selecting one of the three new talents that appear every year, because the most attractive part of this book is the idea of selecting new talents every year. If you remove this, it will not be much different from popular fairy tales.
It's a pretty good book. The pace is okay. There's nothing toxic about it. The author's writing style is okay. The merits and karma are quite interesting. I feel like this book might be popular. I just hope it's not written by the author's hand.
The writing is quite good so far, the logic is quite reasonable, and I highly recommend it, because the author's content routines are not cliche. It's not like a matryoshka doll, beating up the old and the younger. It's not a life-or-death feud between a woman and another licking dog. So it is still worth reading. After all, it is a different kind of article about cultivating immortality. It is not the kind of routine article where you can know the content of the process and the end after seeing the beginning.
This novel is still somewhat interesting. As for Haha, Tomato has so many poisonous points, but I can finish it, which means it's okay. The setting is actually pretty good, but the author probably doesn't have that kind of million-word work. So it always gives people the feeling of being ready to have a hasty ending at any time. But I still hope that the author can persevere. After all, when it comes to writing novels, the more experience the better, and the more you write, the better.
Being cheated, this guy is short.
It's all cheating, but it's not a very enjoyable article. It adds things like merit and karma, and it's a bit annoying to make sense there. Wouldn't it be better to upgrade it? Alas, it's not the type I like to read, but if the author wants to praise it, I will give it to it.
So far, it's so-so. The main reason is that the main character has a cheat, and the cheat gets better and better as he gets older, but his mentality is too impatient, and he feels like he won't survive next year [facepalm] (Obviously, the cheat gets better as he gets older.
It should be because the ratings for the new book have just been released. The author of the current chapter has vividly described human nature, interests, and character. It is a new book with great potential. I have read Chapter 46 so far and haven't found any poison points. Although the second meeting with the Tiger King is a bit uncomfortable, this is my personal opinion. According to the development of the story, they are already mortal enemies. My idea is that the protagonist can help according to the Taoist and Buddhist ideas of the previous life and then get help from the Tiger King. It can only be said that good and evil all depend on whether the interests are sufficient. The protagonist has not yet understood it, and is still thinking according to the thinking of the past life. According to me, it is a meritorious deed for Shushan to condone the Tiger King to kill so many people. The protagonist and the Shushan girl have already become enemies. Why not abandon the thoughts of the past life and help the Tiger King to write like this. There are three chapters in advance. In order to survive, the Tiger King will not betray you, and the Shushan girl will not know about your deal with the Tiger King, and the master will be your guarantee.
It's okay, it's okay. This kind of thing seems to be late at first glance, and the fifty or so chapters are starting to work now. There are not hundreds of chapters on this kind of subject matter, especially the readers of systematic articles who want to be happy. Too few chapters are easy to get negative reviews. They all like to read cool articles. It is easy to be biased by other people's negative reviews. Some people read the negative reviews first, but when they read it, they feel that it is somewhat consistent, and they will have a sense of identity in their hearts. I did read this book before and it was indeed a bit poisonous. The author also made many mistakes (many of the settings in the front are not mentioned first, but will be discussed later) , like secretly patching, this kind of good negative review, I really didn't say it at the time), I couldn't help but read the comments. Usually I read other people's reviews, and then I comment. In the end, I just gave it a three-star rating. I saw many people saying that the later part is good, so I read on. The later patches are added to improve the bad points in the front, and the content in the later part is also good. It was changed to five-star, so some people just give two stars to be too malicious. I don't like it very much, but the author does not mean to disgust people. Three stars is enough.
The author's book is not the best, but it is much better than most. I have read dozens of chapters, and except for the fact that the protagonist rarely behaves like a teenager, there is nothing wrong with it. After all, in reality, people in their thirties and forties often make small mistakes, but there are some criticisms in the comment area. I can't understand it and those who are looking for trouble. If you don't like it, just delete it from the bookshelf. If you like it but are not satisfied with it, you can ask the author to change it. But you are just saying the old tune and not making trouble. Just like Elder Gu Yue in the real person, this sentence still needs to be polished, and then I suggest not to mention it.
It's really okay.
Rating: Plot: Above average (the plot is okay, but not exciting enough)
Settings: Upper-medium (settings are also pretty good)
Enjoyability: middle to lower (a little bit more enjoyable, I hope the author can improve it, I suggest you not to have to suffer so much in the later stages. Modern readers like to watch the sky and the earth every second at the beginning)
Support [eating melon]. The quality is good, and the data is still read by many people. In Tomato, this word count is considered good. The author should ignore the speeches of a very small number of Tang people. In fact, many people like to read your book, but they just don't say anything (such as me). Come on [note]
So far, the writing is okay, the logic is smooth, and there are no big poisonous points. The subject matter is also innovative, such as merit. Although it is not particularly outstanding, it is not the kind of being chased and scolded.
I feel a strong sense of immersion. After reading this novel, I always have an indescribable emotion. It is joyful and pleasant. I feel that my body and mind have been sublimated. The writing is very good and delicate. Every time I open the next chapter, I will feel surprised. Although I feel that most of my talents are useless, but in summary, it is beautiful and beautiful! ! ! !
This novel is quite enjoyable.
But there are also some little bits of poison mixed in.
But if you understand these little poisonous points in depth, you will find them quite interesting.
What to say.
These little poisonous points can make a person...
Forget it, let's not talk about it.
Quite interesting.
Not too bad.
People are selfish, forgetting the bad in everything, being cautious in everything, and taking every step carefully. Everything has a price. Whatever you gain, someone will always lose something. The cause and effect relationship is often caused by the unpredictability of the human heart. In cultivating immortality, everyone is walking on the same road, and the road becomes narrower and narrower. Either you die or I live. Selfishness and the supremacy of interests are the mainstream in the world of immortality.
The book is quite good, but I should change the title of the introduction. Because of this title, I missed it several times. In addition, because of the negative comments because it was not a good article, I almost blocked it. Fortunately, I came in and read the book.
The plug-ins in this book can only be regarded as small openings. Small openings are not openings. I feel that there are no entries for that kind of mechanism. They are all talents or related entries.
It's very immersive to read and very well written. Good luck, author.
Highly recommended by an 11-year-old bookworm. It is a story that can be read and immersed in.
Come on
The setting of the book is worthy of praise, but the title of the AI book does not match it. It is not completely cheating. The small opening is not open [laughing] and can be classified as a developmental farming novel. It can be regarded as a good short novel. It can be used as a world framework. A new one can be used for farming and leisure. It is usually small opening and big opening at key points. (Small openness does not count as openness [laughs crookedly])
Objectively speaking, the author took the time to conceive the plot and settings of this book, and some of the plots are quite harmonious. This is my motivation to keep reading. The author may only be poor in writing skills. I don't know this. You can tell it by reading the book.
It's good, but the early upgrade is slow, slowly, and the pace is good. It's just that some people deliberately bad reviews to affect the author's mood. They are afraid that the author will not update, so I will give it a five-star rating. I personally think this book is four stars or above. It depends on the author's follow-up. At least this book did not make me feel aggrieved. It is not as bad as the comment section said. I recommend it.
In fact, it's really good. Many people are used to the fast pace. If the protagonist is not invincible immediately, it is considered a burden. They can't stand the development process. The problem is that the talent of this kind of meat pigeon usually only develops in the later stage! The Meat Pigeon game does not let you take shape all at once in the early stage. There is a process of development and matching, and you can kill it without thinking in the later stage.
Overall, it's pretty good. It's a slow-paced novel with no bad points.
Very good, the more I look at it, the better it looks. I hope there will be more powerful magical powers in the future, after all, the incarnation has appeared. The foundation has been established, and at least I have some cross-border combat capabilities. If I insist on finishing it, I think 9.0 Will be fine.
I've read Chapter 72. The content is pretty good so far. Big boost to the author~
So beautiful, author. I will just use chopsticks and cement to bless you
This book is okay. Even though there are many little black writers, I still wrote this book. It is a bit like the slow pace of the past. The protagonist is not invincible at the beginning, but the rhythm control is not very good in some places. The author is a new author anyway, so it is normal and appropriate to understand. It's just a bit unreadable, I hope the author will update it more. 😁
I feel the writing is very good. Don't worry about people who don't like this subject matter. Some people are like this. Some people like it and others don't like it. Don't pay too much attention to these brainless things. Just do your own thing well. Why do you care so much?
The writing is quite good, with a bit of the flavor of traditional mythology. As long as the quality does not decline and it has orange potential, it can be given a "purple evaluation" in the early stage, because novels about cultivating immortals are easy to read.
Good stories will never be buried, keep up the good work! [Laughing][laughing]
It's well written and the talent settings are quite interesting. Come on
I hope you don't deliberately overwhelm the protagonist, and don't just write about one result of selecting one of the three new talents that appear every year, because the most attractive part of this book is the idea of selecting new talents every year. If you remove this, it will not be much different from popular fairy tales.
It's a pretty good book. The pace is okay. There's nothing toxic about it. The author's writing style is okay. The merits and karma are quite interesting. I feel like this book might be popular. I just hope it's not written by the author's hand.
The writing is quite good so far, the logic is quite reasonable, and I highly recommend it, because the author's content routines are not cliche. It's not like a matryoshka doll, beating up the old and the younger. It's not a life-or-death feud between a woman and another licking dog. So it is still worth reading. After all, it is a different kind of article about cultivating immortality. It is not the kind of routine article where you can know the content of the process and the end after seeing the beginning.
This novel is still somewhat interesting. As for Haha, Tomato has so many poisonous points, but I can finish it, which means it's okay. The setting is actually pretty good, but the author probably doesn't have that kind of million-word work. So it always gives people the feeling of being ready to have a hasty ending at any time. But I still hope that the author can persevere. After all, when it comes to writing novels, the more experience the better, and the more you write, the better. Being cheated, this guy is short.
It's all cheating, but it's not a very enjoyable article. It adds things like merit and karma, and it's a bit annoying to make sense there. Wouldn't it be better to upgrade it? Alas, it's not the type I like to read, but if the author wants to praise it, I will give it to it.
So far, it's so-so. The main reason is that the main character has a cheat, and the cheat gets better and better as he gets older, but his mentality is too impatient, and he feels like he won't survive next year [facepalm] (Obviously, the cheat gets better as he gets older.
It should be because the ratings for the new book have just been released. The author of the current chapter has vividly described human nature, interests, and character. It is a new book with great potential. I have read Chapter 46 so far and haven't found any poison points. Although the second meeting with the Tiger King is a bit uncomfortable, this is my personal opinion. According to the development of the story, they are already mortal enemies. My idea is that the protagonist can help according to the Taoist and Buddhist ideas of the previous life and then get help from the Tiger King. It can only be said that good and evil all depend on whether the interests are sufficient. The protagonist has not yet understood it, and is still thinking according to the thinking of the past life. According to me, it is a meritorious deed for Shushan to condone the Tiger King to kill so many people. The protagonist and the Shushan girl have already become enemies. Why not abandon the thoughts of the past life and help the Tiger King to write like this. There are three chapters in advance. In order to survive, the Tiger King will not betray you, and the Shushan girl will not know about your deal with the Tiger King, and the master will be your guarantee.
It's okay, it's okay. This kind of thing seems to be late at first glance, and the fifty or so chapters are starting to work now. There are not hundreds of chapters on this kind of subject matter, especially the readers of systematic articles who want to be happy. Too few chapters are easy to get negative reviews. They all like to read cool articles. It is easy to be biased by other people's negative reviews. Some people read the negative reviews first, but when they read it, they feel that it is somewhat consistent, and they will have a sense of identity in their hearts. I did read this book before and it was indeed a bit poisonous. The author also made many mistakes (many of the settings in the front are not mentioned first, but will be discussed later) , like secretly patching, this kind of good negative review, I really didn't say it at the time), I couldn't help but read the comments. Usually I read other people's reviews, and then I comment. In the end, I just gave it a three-star rating. I saw many people saying that the later part is good, so I read on. The later patches are added to improve the bad points in the front, and the content in the later part is also good. It was changed to five-star, so some people just give two stars to be too malicious. I don't like it very much, but the author does not mean to disgust people. Three stars is enough.
The author's book is not the best, but it is much better than most. I have read dozens of chapters, and except for the fact that the protagonist rarely behaves like a teenager, there is nothing wrong with it. After all, in reality, people in their thirties and forties often make small mistakes, but there are some criticisms in the comment area. I can't understand it and those who are looking for trouble. If you don't like it, just delete it from the bookshelf. If you like it but are not satisfied with it, you can ask the author to change it. But you are just saying the old tune and not making trouble. Just like Elder Gu Yue in the real person, this sentence still needs to be polished, and then I suggest not to mention it.
It's really okay. Rating: Plot: Above average (the plot is okay, but not exciting enough) Settings: Upper-medium (settings are also pretty good) Enjoyability: middle to lower (a little bit more enjoyable, I hope the author can improve it, I suggest you not to have to suffer so much in the later stages. Modern readers like to watch the sky and the earth every second at the beginning)
Support [eating melon]. The quality is good, and the data is still read by many people. In Tomato, this word count is considered good. The author should ignore the speeches of a very small number of Tang people. In fact, many people like to read your book, but they just don't say anything (such as me). Come on [note]
So far, the writing is okay, the logic is smooth, and there are no big poisonous points. The subject matter is also innovative, such as merit. Although it is not particularly outstanding, it is not the kind of being chased and scolded.
I feel a strong sense of immersion. After reading this novel, I always have an indescribable emotion. It is joyful and pleasant. I feel that my body and mind have been sublimated. The writing is very good and delicate. Every time I open the next chapter, I will feel surprised. Although I feel that most of my talents are useless, but in summary, it is beautiful and beautiful! ! ! !
This novel is quite enjoyable. But there are also some little bits of poison mixed in. But if you understand these little poisonous points in depth, you will find them quite interesting. What to say. These little poisonous points can make a person... Forget it, let's not talk about it. Quite interesting. Not too bad.
People are selfish, forgetting the bad in everything, being cautious in everything, and taking every step carefully. Everything has a price. Whatever you gain, someone will always lose something. The cause and effect relationship is often caused by the unpredictability of the human heart. In cultivating immortality, everyone is walking on the same road, and the road becomes narrower and narrower. Either you die or I live. Selfishness and the supremacy of interests are the mainstream in the world of immortality.
The book is quite good, but I should change the title of the introduction. Because of this title, I missed it several times. In addition, because of the negative comments because it was not a good article, I almost blocked it. Fortunately, I came in and read the book. The plug-ins in this book can only be regarded as small openings. Small openings are not openings. I feel that there are no entries for that kind of mechanism. They are all talents or related entries.
It's very immersive to read and very well written. Good luck, author. Highly recommended by an 11-year-old bookworm. It is a story that can be read and immersed in. Come on
The setting of the book is worthy of praise, but the title of the AI book does not match it. It is not completely cheating. The small opening is not open [laughing] and can be classified as a developmental farming novel. It can be regarded as a good short novel. It can be used as a world framework. A new one can be used for farming and leisure. It is usually small opening and big opening at key points. (Small openness does not count as openness [laughs crookedly])
Objectively speaking, the author took the time to conceive the plot and settings of this book, and some of the plots are quite harmonious. This is my motivation to keep reading. The author may only be poor in writing skills. I don't know this. You can tell it by reading the book.
It's good, but the early upgrade is slow, slowly, and the pace is good. It's just that some people deliberately bad reviews to affect the author's mood. They are afraid that the author will not update, so I will give it a five-star rating. I personally think this book is four stars or above. It depends on the author's follow-up. At least this book did not make me feel aggrieved. It is not as bad as the comment section said. I recommend it.
In fact, it's really good. Many people are used to the fast pace. If the protagonist is not invincible immediately, it is considered a burden. They can't stand the development process. The problem is that the talent of this kind of meat pigeon usually only develops in the later stage! The Meat Pigeon game does not let you take shape all at once in the early stage. There is a process of development and matching, and you can kill it without thinking in the later stage.
Overall, it's pretty good. It's a slow-paced novel with no bad points.
Very good, the more I look at it, the better it looks. I hope there will be more powerful magical powers in the future, after all, the incarnation has appeared. The foundation has been established, and at least I have some cross-border combat capabilities. If I insist on finishing it, I think 9.0 Will be fine.
I've read Chapter 72. The content is pretty good so far. Big boost to the author~
So beautiful, author. I will just use chopsticks and cement to bless you
This book is okay. Even though there are many little black writers, I still wrote this book. It is a bit like the slow pace of the past. The protagonist is not invincible at the beginning, but the rhythm control is not very good in some places. The author is a new author anyway, so it is normal and appropriate to understand. It's just a bit unreadable, I hope the author will update it more. 😁
I feel the writing is very good. Don't worry about people who don't like this subject matter. Some people are like this. Some people like it and others don't like it. Don't pay too much attention to these brainless things. Just do your own thing well. Why do you care so much?
The writing is quite good, with a bit of the flavor of traditional mythology. As long as the quality does not decline and it has orange potential, it can be given a "purple evaluation" in the early stage, because novels about cultivating immortals are easy to read.
Good stories will never be buried, keep up the good work! [Laughing][laughing]
It's well written and the talent settings are quite interesting. Come on